It is an interesting project, the quality of the renders is above average, technically it is well done, the writing is fine, but the character design is a big no for me, and it's not because the MC is african american, is the design in general, the MC looks too mundane (maybe it's part of the story, it starts as a nobody and physically becomes something different), the female characters are not attractive, especially Liliana, she is horrible in every way, the blonde looks like she hulk's sister, etc.
Positive, many things, beyond the designs, clean renders, the scenes are well done, the lighting is quite good, the expressions of the characters, the camera angles, the UI, the music, etc.
I think that the most difficult thing this developer does quite well, but the most "easy" and important, he overlooks it, it is a VN, the player wants to feel identified with the characters, both the MC and the secondary ones, I do not feel identified with the MC and the possible love interests do not attract my attention at all.
I recommend downloading it and reading this VN, 100%, the fact that it has not finished calling my attention, does not mean that this project does not have potential, there is a lot of work and effort involved