VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Altered Erotales [v0.3] [T-Wizard]

Great execution while managing to juggle a pretty big cast. Characters have a wide variety and even play decently off each other. Some of the events are a bit too cincidental, but if you want a logical and emotional journey don't go looking for it in a porn game where the protagonist fucks more that 40 women.
As for the NTR aspect, it's also done well. You can avoid it and even with it it's not just straight up cucking

I give it a solid undeserved 5 but hear me out why! The story is terrible, the dialouges are bland and empty, even the girls are not so hot either. But and here comes the big BUT!!! The situation which they have sex with you is funny as hell. If you don't take the story seriously you'll laugh your socks of. And it was so ridiculous that you will laugh your ass of

Although I do believe that there were various missed opportunities for even Netori, I would still want to see more scenes of NTR either Netori or Netorare. The girls all look really good, and although there are clipping issues in some images, I do not believe this is something that can't be overlooked.

At this stage of the project I see a lot of potential, and I will keep my eyes open for more updates (0.3 reviewed)

Altered Erotales [v0.3] [T-Wizard] review -
CONS-
Cons outweighs pros in the game as nothing is good in the game the models are horrible compared to other Honey select games which use basic models . There is no story other than you going school daily , random sex and writing is poor we have 40 characters other than roommates rest of the characters development is poor we are introduced to them while we are playing and you can't remember most of them and the Main character who acts like an idiot and all the girls love him with no reason and another typical pervert obese MC friend and bully antagonist who beats MC every time he gets chance and the sex scenes are bland with no foreplay no romance nothing after playing for 20 or odd minutes got pretty bored and deleted the game
PROS -
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In the end if you are looking for only sex scenes you may like the game , there is no story or character progression or romance and certain kinks are forced whether you like it or not overall a terrible game .

The game is silly as hell. It look like the dev started creating the game, and he was working on a script with a lot of characters, and at some point he said "fuck this, im not writing shit" and he decided to create some sort of dream scene where the MC was granted some powers to alter reality to his desires or something or whatever. From there the game turns silly beyonf humanly posible,a sucession of non stop scenarios were girls die for the MCs cock.

Until at some point there is a scene in the beach with the mother, that came so out of nowher that i couldnt tell if it was the mother imagining it. There was no transition of any kind. After that the sister comes jealous and sister gets also fucked just like that. and later the other sister Hj the Mc in the shower. All in a sucession with no transition or dialogue at all.
And thats when i closed the game and deleted it. This is a fucking mess right now.

Review of 0.1 or 1.0
The game 'features' a large cast of characters some appealing some not so much. While the effort is clearly showing this game is showing some normal signs of a first release. Majority of the text is rather plain and blunt, ie Then I went home, then I went to the club room . The lack of choices is very apparent as well, if Im remembering correctly there was only 10 choices in the entire run. Next is the characters, as I said some are very well made others not so much the clashing of hair textures and some rather bizarre faces are not the craziest Ive seen from this site but still, if it wasnt initially apparent from the screenshots they are from honey select 1.
Like I said the game is showing some common signs of a first release but overall the game does have some promise.
My advice for the dev is to work on the overall grammar and improve the more gameplay aspect. Secondly would be to work all the girls into one style, while its not a major issue some characters really look out of place due to weird hair textures. I will keep my eye on this one and update my review in the future! Good Luck Dev!