Hiya just finished what you have completed and wanted to provide some feedback.
Pros:
-Story is good and I like where it is headed
-Some of the LIs are nice to look at and done nicely
-There was not a ton of typos or incorrect wording. Always a plus.
Cons:
-Some of the people do not look there age. Like the daughter looks way older than mother. Why white hair?? Breasts look way to saggy and old to be 18. Mother has a nicer look and body.
-Most of the LIs have huge milk jugs and there is little diversity with breast sizes.
-Some of the LIs are very unattractive to me.
Pros:
-Story is good and I like where it is headed
-Some of the LIs are nice to look at and done nicely
-There was not a ton of typos or incorrect wording. Always a plus.
Cons:
-Some of the people do not look there age. Like the daughter looks way older than mother. Why white hair?? Breasts look way to saggy and old to be 18. Mother has a nicer look and body.
-Most of the LIs have huge milk jugs and there is little diversity with breast sizes.
-Some of the LIs are very unattractive to me.