VN - Ren'Py - Alternative Shemevolution [v0.2.0] [LittleMed]

[Review for v2.0]

I think the 2-star reviews are beyond childish to be complaining about the inclusion of futa-on-male content, when the store page pretty clearly shows futa-on-male content being a focus. It pretty unfairly brings down the rating for the AVN, but I won't increase mine to 5 just to compensate because I don't think it deserves it (yet).

First off, visuals are great. There isn't really anything to complain about on that front, just a world with an entirely feminine sheen. The setting is also decently unique, enough to separate itself from others. The sex scenes are also enjoyable, although at time of writing they're pretty limited.

Only reason I'm giving it a 7/10 and not a 9/10 is because the dialogue is pretty trite. There are a lot of interactions where (even given the world's context) they just don't flow very well. The dialogue is pretty stilted and often a bit nonsensical: generally this involves taking an overly formal tone, or just having strange grammar. Examples are sentences like "I also think we should call it a day", or "well, it seems that the party to celebrate my new position is over, and it's time for us all to leave". Like...yeah, you CAN say that that way, but that's not how a human says it. There's just a lot of lines where it's reeeally jarring how they talk, but if you can ignore that , it's all good.

This game have a lot of potential, as a femboy/futa/trans enjoyer it do have my favorite combination of genres, my only criticism so far is that it needs more futa on female and futa on futa scenes plus also a bit of a improvement in the story and writing, but i can see it improving with future updates

Good file size, good graphics, and good program responsiveness; it looks like there's another game I'm going to keep updating, which is great! Looking at the version number, there's a lot more content to come, so I'll have a lot to play later.

Alternative Shemevolution 0.1. Review

I saw 0.2 which reminded me, not really interested personally. For one I really dislike the femboy, not because his looks, so much, as his ego just rubs me wrong way. I don't find anything likable about him. I don't care for this kind of story telling, where it feels like I'm just being dropped off randomly into the MC's life, like it doesn't feel like there's any importance in it, and the "choices" are just to lewd, or not to lewd, not that it matters because it doesn't actually effect anything. To me this is just a dime a dozen Futa game with no "story", and only made for others to lewd to. I'd recommend it for a quickie I guess, but after that there's no meat to actually makes you want to be invested in my opinion. I give it a 2/5 stars, not a bad looking game, and there's at least something here to read, but nothing to write home about, it's just an average futa game at best, but it at least doesn't have bugs, the models aren't ugly, or an annoying narration.

Very promising game for what it is.

A heads-up:
This is primarily a futa on male game. It says so quite clearly.
Evidently, some people are challenged by the long lost art of reading sentences, and are complaining that the futa on male game contains futa on male and feel that it needs a negative reviews, rather than just not playing the game that isn't to their taste.
There are days I regret reviews cannot be review in turn, because wow do we have some garbage reviews here.

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The game is relatively short, with only 3 lewd scenes of which only one is actually a sex scene, the others are mostly sexual tension scenes.
What is there, however, is very promising. The images are very high quality, with impeccable lighting and lots of details & memorable character design.

The shots and angles are very good. None of those straight-narrow one-dimensional shots you keep getting so often, but dynamic angled shots that let the characters and the action pop right off the screen.

The game features music and sound, including sex sounds, which, unfortunately, has been a little rare of late. Both are fitting, although they don't quite stand out.

The game is light on story on puts more focus on getting characters into sexually loaded moments rather than developing the characters too much. You're essentially playing a futa teacher that's living with her boy toy, while gaining the sexual interest of her students and fellow teachers.

While the demo can be played through rather quickly, the quality of the characters, the visuals and the developer's ability to create sexual tension makes this one of the "high interest" futa games that have the potential to really stand out in the months to come - if you like futa on male. (And if silly reviews from people who clearly aren't the intended audience don't demotivate the developer.)

Sadly there is a forced "boyfriend" that is unnecessary and unlikable. So trans on male is not only the main focus, it is forced to some extend, including very vivid recaps .

The main character is cute and seems to have a good personality. We get introduced to quite a few characters already, some of them with a lewd scene. They vary greatly and it should be something for every taste.

Unfortunately you are also forced to watch the boyfriend creeping on another student, sniffing their panties, all without any player input. Simply cutting the whole character would lift this game to a higher rating. Choices in that matter would help as well...

Overall a bad start of a good idea. It is early enough to rework and give the player more choice in what they want to see.
But since the narrative is highly focused on their relationship, I doubt it will lose them and focus on the MC...

A bummer, games with this topic are so rare.

Looks really good. You have render skill I can say. Looking forward. I hope you have plan & story ready to make progress. First look impressive so many people looking forward in progress, It will good if next push a big update to hook the community to it. Only think I have issue with is MC could have been different it's my personal preference.

This game took the futa category and made it average. Ignoring character designs and just evaluating the minimum amount of story.... creator has there work cut out for themselve. Hopefully it improves but at the moment you wouldn't be missing much if you just passed by without a second look. Mc character is only decent part and that could still be better