VN - Ren'Py - Onhold - Amy's Whispers of Lust [Demo] [GrimaGrima]

VERSION:Demo
SUMMARY: Not bad, but has some work ahead still
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point.

1. Model Visuals..................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
2. General Visuals................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐
4. Character (Persona)............... : ⭐
5. Story Quality & Pacing............ : ⭐⭐
6. Writing Quality & Dialogue........ : ⭐⭐⭐
7. UI & Game-play Mechanics...........: ⭐⭐⭐
8. Playtime & General Quality.........: ⭐⭐⭐
9. Sounds & Music.....................: ⭐⭐⭐
10. H-Content & Fetishes.............. : ⭐⭐⭐

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. FMC is really attractive and sexy.
2. Most characters are generally pretty good looking
3. Writing is good, structured and flows well. Not flawless but good and written with good tone and eroticism.
4. Some sounds are actually done well, but there are very few.
5. Character expressions are rather noticeable and actually done fairly well.
6. Choices are nice but limits the player on any kinky content.

CONS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Story is nothing interesting really.
2. Small point on the dialogue, its also bullshit and obvious in it especially when a character does or says something earlier then kinda contradicts themselves 2 scenes/slides later. It points out the inconsistency in the dialogue and just emphasizes the porn logic of the scenario and its cringe dialogue.
3. Characters are fickle, superficial and sex is the only thing on the agenda.
4. Per above there is no real build up or corruption or anything of the sort, its almost flat out in your face sex, sexual innuendos are almost normal speech.
5. Added to the above, the FMC comes across as a shallow bimbo with fuckall between her ears.
6. Some renders need revision like having the FMC get in the tub with her high heels on makes no sense...
7. Animations are non-existent and pretty much just a loop between 2 or 3 still renders.
8. UX can get some love, the UI need to add opacity setting for the dialogue box please.
9. A potential or full list of features, kinks would be nice. One slide show a pregnant FMC, can we expect this and what else? With the way it starts and its blatant erotic and porn nature, the sky is the limit.

OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't)

• Per point above, the FMC is pretty much a skank, which is probably fine for an AVN that cares only about the eye candy and erotic aspects where there is little else to characters and story. Still its a bit silly and too blatant for my liking with no real anticipation or anything, which does make you wonder why you don't just watch porn...
• While the writing is structurally fine and maybe even good, the content itself is porn logic nonsense full of contradictions and inconsistencies.

TLDR:

Not bad, visually the FMC is stunning, but she is an airhead bimbo which immediate put the AVN in "one of those" categories where porn logic pretty much shapes the game. Choosing to be more reserved also doesn't net the player much "action" in terms of content, so why bother?