2D An art from my game ... I'm not finished yet.

[YioruYioru]

I still have to do the sea and some details ...
But I already want feedbacks!

 

[Sedid]

Very nice drawing .

 

[duck slayer00]

are you going to draw art yourself or are you going to hire an artist ?

 

[YioruYioru]

are you going to draw art yourself or are you going to hire an artist ?

If the project goes well maybe I will hire someone.

 

[duck slayer00]

If the project goes well maybe I will hire someone.

all the best then, btw the current art is good. Also you could share your ideas for the project, if anyone becomes intrested they could volunteer.

 

[ogr blanc]

the few tips i can give(and please dont take it the wrong way" are. butts (and cleavage ) dont fold like that in most fabrics. its ok to have some, but try to keep it less "deep".

the shading needs work, my advice would be to focus on doing lighter coloring, start with just flatter shading, maybe even no shading. however, i really liked the tone of the sea.

im no artist, so take my criticism with a grain of salt.

 

[YioruYioru]

the few tips i can give(and please dont take it the wrong way" are. butts (and cleavage ) dont fold like that in most fabrics. its ok to have some, but try to keep it less "deep".

the shading needs work, my advice would be to focus on doing lighter coloring, start with just flatter shading, maybe even no shading. however, i really liked the tone of the sea.

im no artist, so take my criticism with a grain of salt.

Thank you very much is that kind of criticism that I need to improve.

 

[Banality]

Is that Playmobil? And wtf is with this little shit grabbin an ass? Children should play with toys, not with adults.....