VN - Ren'Py - Completed - An Evening Of Events [Final] [DigitalJPlayground]

A really nice steamy story that you created here. With interesting plot and dialogue (maybe some fine-tuning wouldn't hurt to smooth out some of the rough edges, but overall very good). I especially liked the casual eroticism of the events.
Pretty fine girls as well. Loved how the girls openly lived out their lustful sexual desires.
I look forward to seeing more work from you!

v Final

There is only one glaring issue I see with this kinetic novel.
The sudden rush to the ending.

Pacing and dialogue was good, setting the stage for a little story- and then it suddenly ends in a sex romp without continuation.
The chosen pacing before the end result didn't match up.

However, it was pretty good otherwise.

Decent but fairly short kinetic novel. Could use a bit more build up, and I definitely would appreciate a sequel(direct). This appears to be part of a shared universe of games which isn't terrible(I haven't played the other game), but I felt like for its length it could of done without the section to connect the games together.

Very good work, this was solid work. I loved the art style and dialogue, and the models looked fantastic especially Emily with realistic proportions. I would enjoy a continuation story of the vacation on the Maldives . Some player and choice input would be nice in future games to increase replayability.

Good stuff. I liked Unwanted Movie, but An Evening Of Events feels like an upgrade in every way. The setting is more down-to-earth and the sexual content is written better, so I applaud the dev for this improvement.

What I liked the most was the visuals. The models are very high-quality and detailed, from the facial expressions and clothes to the textures and body types. I really liked Emily. Everything about her appearance just screams daughter material, like her petite body in yoga pants. The other girls are hot too. I mean, a blonde girl named Jessica is pretty tropey, but the dev made her unique and kinda cute, especially considering her backstory with William. I also appreciate the use of realistic pussies and skin textures. Truly a master class on how to properly use Daz.

I've been playing so many sloppy games with tragic and edgy plots lately that I've become kinda jaded, so it's nice to finally play something that goes back to the golden standard of porn games. It is pretty short, but it's well-made. I just don't give it 5 stars because the sex scene lacked some hot dialogue and proper closure. Also would've been nice if Emily said that it was her first time, just as a cherry on top (pun intended).

Either way, nice work, DJP. Looking forward to what you'll cook next.

I'm not sure why a couple of low reviews. Is it a perfect VN? nope. However I commend the effort. The Dev apologizes for animations not being great however I've seen worse and pretty much any is better than none so all fine there. It's my opinion not having animations in 2024 is a serious detriment to a VN. As someone trying to teach myself Daz3d right now, not as easy as it looks, kudos to the Dev there.

Folks, VN is an umbrella term with many subgenres. I haven't seen anything on this site that doesn't fall under the VN umbrella including everything that doesn't have a VN tag, that's just the way this site does their tags so saying that it's a VN and not a game makes no sense. Most "games" are also VNs. It does have the Kinetic tag though linear would be more appropriate as Kinetic Novel is actually a brand name put out by a Japanese publisher but ah well.

It's a pleasant little story, my only wish would be that it was a tad longer, I would have loved to see the continuation of Emily's and dad's relationship the next morning, a nice creampie from dad would have been great. Naughty I know. Maybe a follow up Dev?!

All in all I think this is a solid effort from a newer Dev and I look forward to seeing what this Dev does next.

I typically read reviews before posting here before writing one myself, and I must say, I am truly confused as to why some are so low rated.

Yes, I typically prefer longer games over short stories, but there are some good ones out there, and this one was top notch, IMO.

Well-written story, good dialogue, decent animations (though I'd have liked to see more of the scenes animated, that is my opinion, and the dev will always follow his/her own perogative).

If I had to knock ANYTHING, it's a shame it was so short, but again... the dev makes clear it's a SHORT story.

For me, easy 5/5 stars. Can't wait for more of this dev's work!

Game version: Final

The pacing is all over the place, I lost track of the story (is there one at all?) after 2,3 minutes already.
The dialogs are horribly bad, it feels like nobody had a clue (just as the player himself) about what is going on.
It's like a trip on some really bad stuff, without the good things like vibrant colors/ animations, renders.. Every single thing about this game is bad.
The dev has to develop a sense for storytelling first and foremost. Back to stage 1!

Its alright very quick so no reason to not give a try if want, as creator sys in opening its more of their hobby then some attempt to make something big so that has to be kept in mind.
Most of it is still images and some of it, especially what little is animated, are dated compared to what you can find these days.

The story is decent enough and shows some promise, especially first half ie before the basic sex.

3/5
average with caveat that again its a hobby thing that is short and therefore should have such expectations.

Short story, well written. with attractive and interesting characters, although the first game (Unwanted Movie) has more impact and better character design.
Includes Character Relationship customization.
Kinetic Novel, no choices.