Nice game so far. I like how the narrative shift between multiple characters. It's a very cool idea that i don't really see other VNs doing. The characters' models are very nice, but there's no design that really stands out.
As for the writting, I really like the cafe girls and the swimming club president, but the consistency is almost unexistent. One time a character is this innocent, virgin, and the next they're fucking some guy. One moment a girl wants to take her relantionship seriously, and the other she is flirting with some dude in public. Of course I expect the characters to change in a game focused on corruption, but i hope it's more natural, and we actually get to see the growth of the character before the climax (no pun intended).
I think the elephant in the room with this game is the idea that "all content is avoidable", as in, NTR and corruption can be avoided for certain characters, but it doesn't work like this. The cheating and corruption will still happen and can even be mentioned in other routes, you just can skip the parts of it. I'm not saying, I'm against it, I am into NTR after all, but it would be good if the dev would be more open about how this work. Is specially annoying when it seems like one of the few vanilla, wholesome couples introduced in the game is going towards a ntr story as well. Again, I'm a fan of ntr, but I'm not a fan of false advertisment. As it is, the game already have few vanilla routes, and if one of the few ones gets turned into ntr/corruption, it would hard to get invested into any other couples after it.
In conclusion, I think the game is fun and have some really hot scenes and dynamics, but it's kind of hard to really be invested in the story as it is currently. Worth playing, but could get better.
As for the writting, I really like the cafe girls and the swimming club president, but the consistency is almost unexistent. One time a character is this innocent, virgin, and the next they're fucking some guy. One moment a girl wants to take her relantionship seriously, and the other she is flirting with some dude in public. Of course I expect the characters to change in a game focused on corruption, but i hope it's more natural, and we actually get to see the growth of the character before the climax (no pun intended).
I think the elephant in the room with this game is the idea that "all content is avoidable", as in, NTR and corruption can be avoided for certain characters, but it doesn't work like this. The cheating and corruption will still happen and can even be mentioned in other routes, you just can skip the parts of it. I'm not saying, I'm against it, I am into NTR after all, but it would be good if the dev would be more open about how this work. Is specially annoying when it seems like one of the few vanilla, wholesome couples introduced in the game is going towards a ntr story as well. Again, I'm a fan of ntr, but I'm not a fan of false advertisment. As it is, the game already have few vanilla routes, and if one of the few ones gets turned into ntr/corruption, it would hard to get invested into any other couples after it.
In conclusion, I think the game is fun and have some really hot scenes and dynamics, but it's kind of hard to really be invested in the story as it is currently. Worth playing, but could get better.