VN - Ren'Py - Angel and Succubus [v0.2 Fix] [Lucky Elsa]

VERSION: 0.2
SUMMARY: Not bad, still rough around the edges
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following are my own criteria and may require more context, so keep an open mind.

1. Models: 4
2. Animations: 3
3. General Visuals: 3
4. Characters: 3
5. Story/Pacing: 3
6. Writing/Dialogue: 2
7. UI & Gameplay: 3
8. Content Quality: 3
9. Sounds & Music: 3
10. H-Content & Fetish: 3

Average: 30 of 50 possible points giving a 60% rating i.e. 3 stars.

PROS:

1. Models (LIs) are pretty nice looking
2. Animations are not bad, all things considered
3. Writing is not bad either, nothing overly fancy but done well enough.
4. H-Scenes early on are at least better than waiting forever.
5. Choices have impact.

CONS:

1. MC is not exactly the most attractive, if compared to the LI's. He is not complete troll though.
2. Animations are a bit slow and need some refinement especially around "interactive" areas e.g., mouth, vagina, as the meshing (if you can call it that) do not look great. e.g., vagina looks like a passage the MC is throwing a sausage down in one scene. So bit of work needed there still. Still good though
3. Renders are sub-par, grainy textures which do make the game feel dated. Some higher quality would be nice.
4. Writing is not bad, but does need work and English is not the writers strongest suite.
5. No lewd or ambient sounds
6. Story very simplistic and uninteresting, using the classic Angle vs Demon trope as means to justify what the MC does. Though it at least is done well enough.

FINAL REMARKS, OPINIONS & SUGGESTIONS:

• Nothing strange or special about this game. Its a simple story told countless times and the player can guess most of what will happen. Its still semi-entertaining, but not great or even very good.
• Fair attempt and done well for what it is.
• This has a lot of work if it ever wants to be more than an average game, it has a solid foundation though, but very basic.

Decent work so far though, good luck.