VN - Ren'Py - Angel in L.A. Vol. 1 [v0.6.4 Rework] [DigiurgeCreations]

It's a pretty good corruption focused story. Girls parents get divorced then she moves in with her dad once shes 18. It proceeds pretty slowly but its one I'm keeping an eye on. Currently nothing actually happens except some harassment.

Clearly missing the tags sexual harrasment and rape because that's all that happens to the poor main character. Neither she or the player has any real agency in anybody she interacts with, every character she meets gropes, harasses and abuses her and all of them are disgusting creeps.
There is no build up to anything, no corruption, no characters winning her over or catalysts to change her mindset, just ugly bastard after ugly bastard touching her out of nowhere without consent and the MC does nothing.

I remember playing this years ago, and I thought then it was okay-ish. Nothing special, but you know, it could turn out to become something good.

Now, after many years of silence, suddenly there's a 'rework'.
The rework seems to focus mainly on the visuals, but in my opinion, the dev should have focused on the writing, because that's just bad and cringy.

Example:
Barkeeper: 'Hey, do you want a COCK - tail? He-he-he!'
Sidekick girl: 'Yeah, we want a COCK - tail! He-he-he!'
Main girl: 'Um, I dunno?'
Barkeeper: 'Let me just whip it out - I mean: whip it up for you. He-he-he!'

This level of cringe, especailly with the priest saying to the main girl: 'God gave you big breasts to please men", sums this game pretty well up.

Now, if the graphics were any good, this game good pass as a cheap porn. But even after the 'rework', the graphics are still outdated, and just not good enough.

Verdict:
Story: 1/5
Graphics: 1/5.
Adding bestiality and incest without improving the overall game: 0/5.

Part 1 review

The model for Angel is a cute one, her dialogue and the interaction with the NPC's has improved in the latest revision. This is supposed to be based on a IRL girl. I gave it 3 stars for the Angel model and the 3 paths in game +1 star for the latest revision. It's still early in production so let's see how it develops from here.

What a promising story we have here (even if we have been informed that Dev. is making a new version of this game in three parts actually). Here are my main impressions after having played V0.5.3 until the end :

PROS
- strong story, no hesitation, we see Dev. has made a deep work on his project.
- characters are all interesting, all very different in the way they react in situations.
- nice rendering in most scenes, original point of views in dialogs

CONS
- some colours are a little bit too overexposed in some scenes, some details are difficult to see, but not often.
- a lot of repetition in girls' dialogs (maybe like in real life, so ...)
- faces expressions could be developed to be more accurate with dialogs.

Conclusion:
We are just at beginning of a story which has a lot of routes possible for main character ANGEL(A). I like very much the 3 levels of possible reactions of answers she can choose in order to initiate changes in her shyness and virginity with other characters in the future.
I pu 5 stars because I'm waiting for next version of this game, not yet available, for developing Angel's story with addictive pleasure !

That's a very exciting game. I love the way the story is going on, being exhibicionist, the teasing and how innocence is working. How everyone is playing dirty wirh her, and every opción the route is taking: Please release some more work very soo : It 's fantastic... (Sorry for my english).

Review of v0.3
Really great start so far with loads of sexy scenes and a big cast of characters already. I believe this dev should be supported. He's hard working and super quick to respond to messages. He listens to feedback and scene ideas and implements them. He's already improved his Daz skills since 0.1 and Angel now looks even better with more natural looking (still huge) boobs.

If you're a fan of the busty innocent schoolgirl getting slowly corrupted story you'll love this game as the writing is spot on and is set up perfectly for her slow corruption to unfold. Or you can keep her pure but where's the fun in that!

This is a review of v0.3.

So far this game is shaping up really really nicely. Background is solid and the setup of locations and characters is proceeding nicely. Other characters also look good and are different enough that they're easy to tell apart. Writing and English are strong. Dev is getting better at renders with each release.

The three paths and affection/contempt system are straightforward and I think will be a good structure for the game.

Oh, and Angel is cute and hot, especially after some physics were added to her breasts in v0.3.

The big thing for me is that her innocence and naivete are believable enough. So far her "adventures" haven't been too forced and she's not rushing into anything on any of the paths yet.

There's the odd minor inconsistency and the renders are still a relative weakness, but I'm giving this 5 stars anyway based on how well the premise has been setup and potential for the future of the game. (And because I really like it!)