VN - Ren'Py - Angst [v0.2] [Falling Bear Studio]

Review of the version 0.2
It's a very small game at this stage - there is a couple of sex scenes between husband and wife and that's it. There's however many dialogues and they are good. I loved the scenario so far. The couple is very loving and the progression is not too fast or too slow, just perfect.

So far there's no cuckold vibes - the wife started teasing her husband with other guys, but only because he likes it. She gets excited by it too - but still she is doing it only because the husband likes it. She thinks of him first and doesn't get carried away. So far there's only flirting, no kisses or touches. There's no humiliation and it doesn't seem like there will be in the future. And I hope it stays like that.

The game lacks sounds entirely, but I won't lower the score for that as I understand that the game is at very early stage.

Wife's model is sexy, I could only wish for some pubes, but that's just my fetish.

Most importantly, I really like the vibe in the game so far and I hope it won't be changed into the usual NTR stuff - I hope the couple will stay loving and understanding.

Overall, a great start

Version reviewed 0.2

A typical cuckhold story about a husband suffering from performance issues who discovers that he gets turned on when other men come on to his hot wife.

Pros:

1- The story is unoriginal but it held my attention. The couple obviously care for one another and the story develops at a natural pace.

2- The wife is quite attractive. Too bad the body textures were rather dull, which hurts her overall appearance.

3- Some really nice set designs and visuals.

4- Sex animations were hit and miss. Some looked very good while others were of poor quality.

5- Kudos to the dev for not giving the husband a five pound cock. It was normal in size and small when soft. Well done.

Cons:

1- Lighting was sub par on a number of renders.

2- No music or sound.

3- There were some awkward cut scenes.

4- The overall dialogue was mediocre with way too many "Hons" , and "Luv's", making the dialogue feel forced and unnatural. Also, numerous grammatical errors where there are missing periods to end sentences. No excuse for this.

5- Errors with talking to self where some text was not coded properly, causing confusion. Using (parenthesis) would have eliminated that.

6- No option to lighten the opacity of the dialogue box, which was too dark at times.

7- You can change the husband and wife's names but it doesn't always reflect in game, causing confusion. A simple text edit fixes this.

8- It's kinetic, so there are no choices and no paths.

Final thoughts:

Not bad but can certainly be improved. The story shows promise but the dialogue needs help. I would suggest the dev get someone to assist with the dialogue. Also, some renders were also a bit disappointing and the issue with inconsistent lighting needs to be addressed.

Shows promise. Good luck!

* I decided to redo the script. See my post in the games forum.