I have seen a lot of chars in so many adult games, often the chars are looking very similar, but a few really stick out, like the females of Mortze or Sarah by Impure, especially Jennifer from Malleck and Lily of P and P. Anna definetely is one of them, with even better graphics than all what I have seen so far. A very promising game, I hope with a better future than Sarah's Life or Lily of the valley, both games seem to be abandoned by their creators or treated with reduced interest.
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When is the next update coming? 0.3 was pretty disappointing. There was hardly any sex. The only sex was with her retarded boyfriend. I'm sorry, but I really hate him, his looks are quite faggy, may be he's gay. That must be why he's hardly fucking her. Only sex so far has been she riding him, while he does nothing. I really wish Anna has a choice to break up with him in the next update.
This game is young in existance. Why should the creator of the game rush things and take away any suspense, damaging the character development in the process. Corruption for example needs time. The Existence of a boy friend made it possible to show early sex scenes in the game without harming future storylines. And in the end only the gamemaker has an idea in which directions the story might go. Like an author of a novel, it is his creation and we have up to some point follow his lead. He might take some ideas from us, but he shouldnt listen to all of them.
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Boyfriend should not be a muscular, handsome, smart...etc guy with huge penis in NTR, Corruption, Cheating games. He will always stay as beta while some alpha guys fucks his gf... If you hate him so much then it means that developer is doing a great job. I have never seen reverse situation.
Boyfriend should not be a muscular, handsome, smart...etc guy with huge penis in NTR, Corruption, Cheating games. He will always stay as beta while some alpha guys fucks his gf... If you hate him so much then it means that developer is doing a great job. I have never seen reverse situation.
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A good writer can develop a character any way they want. A corruption doesn't always need to be linear (groping, handjob, blowjob, sex, group sex). One can have an early sex scene with another partner (not the BF), an play with the aftermath, regret, curiosity, an so on...
@MWeb , you're wrong. Your alpha/beta stuff is just the usual porn cuckolding/humiliation. The NTR is in fact even more effective when the player/reader sympathizes with the male character being cheated on.
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Actually i only saw 1 (one) comic where the MC is an alpha male and still get ntr'ed (and i read plenty of ntr hentai.) I agree with MWeb, altough the MC can be written in many different ways, NTR is more effective if he is a good guy and beta male. That is why people(men) who are reading it can sympathise with him.
@stoker; You are so right when you say corruption does not need to be linear; i really want more devs could read what you wrote. That is one of the reasons why i liked Katie's corruption so much; corruption is not linear.
@stoker; You are so right when you say corruption does not need to be linear; i really want more devs could read what you wrote. That is one of the reasons why i liked Katie's corruption so much; corruption is not linear.
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So men can sympathize only with a loser, who has a small penis and doesn't satisfy his girlfriend? Not with a fella who gets cheated on despite doing his part well?
I completely disagree. When the male character is what @MWeb suggests and I hate him, then I'm just "You had it coming, mate." and he may as well not even exist.
I agree with you that the male character should be a good guy. But for that same reason - I should like him, not hate him.
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Being a good guy and a beta male does not mean being a loser. You and i have totally different ideas about what a beta male is. Think about Brian at Katie's corruption, he is a beta male (he is not aggressive, not rich, treats Katie like a princess etc.) and he is not a loser.
For me there are 2 ways to write NTR;
1- A pathetic loser as a boyfriend (like you said) and no one can sympathize with him; these ones are easily forgotten.
2- A good guy, not very rich, not very strong, not a loser but still tries to do everything to make his woman happy. That is the guy we can sympathize. That is the hero i speak about.
On the other hand, if a boyfriend acts as an alpha male, have a big penis, is rich&strong, then how do you write a comic&game where he is ntr'ed? Remember, we do not speak about one time cheating; a corruption&ntr game means that the girl will stop loving her boyfriend and will belong to the alpha male.
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You agreed with MWeb, and he wrote the male character cannot be muscular, handsome, smart... What's left for not being a loser?
I don't know this whole deal with alphas, betas and penis sizes. But are you saying that a woman cannot fall out of love for someone who's rich and has big penis? Like, maybe he starts rubbing her the wrong way, or she wants to experiment, or her corruption leads her to desire a non-monogamous relationship and that creates a rift between them...
All I'm saying is that there is no single recipe for NTR. And that the good writing shows itself precisely when the author doesn't follow the established tropes.
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A normal guy. A guy you see everyday at the streets, at bus, at your workplace. This is 90% of the male population, i hope you don't think there are only two types of male; alpha males and losers lol. There are normal ppl too and for me at least, it hurts more when one of them is ntred.
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So normal guys are not smart? Maybe we're reading his words differently. But he says the male character should not be strong, nor attractive, nor have some brain cells in his head, that we should hate him for being so pathetic. This doesn't sound like an average guy to me.
@MWeb , it's in the definition of Netorare:
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I don't know, maybe your interpretation, of the audience hating a pathetic male character and wanting to see him hurt, may also qualify as a form of NTR. But it's definitely not the only way of doing it.
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@stoper , I do not understand why do you link the definition of Netorare. I don't make NTR games. That was just my observation about NTR genre.
If your answer of my question is ''audience hating a pathetic male character'' , then we are speaking same thing. Developers are usually show BF pathetic to attract players. Otherwise would be romance game. And i find this perfectly normal.
I won't discuss it here anymore. It is unrelated with topic. It sounds like I'm disrespecting the author and his game. Please don't take it offensive way. Enjoy your day.
If your answer of my question is ''audience hating a pathetic male character'' , then we are speaking same thing. Developers are usually show BF pathetic to attract players. Otherwise would be romance game. And i find this perfectly normal.
I won't discuss it here anymore. It is unrelated with topic. It sounds like I'm disrespecting the author and his game. Please don't take it offensive way. Enjoy your day.
Personally i hope she starts cheating soon, there are alot of goof candidates (not counting her boss) that can seduce her or get her horny with the help of her head affliction while her b/f keeps failing to man up and get a job and an own apartment. I hope she starts getting hit on seriously sooner rather than later.
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No, that's not my answer. Read the post above, I've made my opinion quite clear.
Disrespecting the author? You understand this is a forum where most of the people come to steal his work, right?
Would here an interest to translate the game into German? Because my english is not really good! : (Many thanks already times to the one who makes it!
P.s I do not know whether the creator is interested in a translation, but ask one can, right?
P.s I do not know whether the creator is interested in a translation, but ask one can, right?
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That's funny considering the fact that most german people should know English pretty well and I doubt that the german community is big enough behind the game that the developer would be interested in translating it to other languages.Would here an interest to translate the game into German? Because my english is not really good! : (Many thanks already times to the one who makes it!
P.s I do not know whether the creator is interested in a translation, but ask one can, right?