VN - Ren'Py - Aperture [Ch.1] [Vonsatia]

Excelent Intro
Good Images, eye cathing both males and females
Great story

My advice as a reader, please using A Promise Best Left Unkept as a reference, one image for 1-4 short conversation, if too many word and using the same image for long conversation it will bothering the reader.
Keep it contrast between dark erotic and bright normal life.

On the last image, the principal say make him cum 10 times today and that's hot, multiple times with high number is erotic, you can add him consume blue pill or sex pill that can make him produce more sperm and stay hard for many hours. In A Promise Best Left Unkept , the hottest image was the clock, used condom and pills. Clock, when the sex is start, after 30 minutes, 2hour and go on, used condom how many men can ejaculate and how much the sperm in the used condom for example the image with clean no used condom at first and then two used condom on the bed and then 5 with two on the bed and 3 on the floor and then 7 and go on. Pills from blue pills, sperm pills, aphrodisiac, and morning after pill.

Being the greatest NTR story connoisseur And World’s Top NTR critique…Here is my thought

Story - Wow what a pacing and How well written the demo was Never became such Excited about story after playing some demo except my favourite author azienda FUNS

Art-This art does justice to The Game….
what a beauty ….Some people just Hate AI stuff cause they have narrow mindset yes AI art is stupid sometimes but this was the most on point art i couldn’t believe it was done by AI even if MArk zuckerberg does this shit i have no problem cause Art is on point….

about developer- i checked his patreon page and wow what a guy he is so passionate about this and doesn’t keep his supporters in dark …he keeps regular updating on progress and even gives vote options for story…

Personally The first time i am regretting i have No Payment option available from which i can support this guy….

But you will always be my favourite creator and i urge people to support him ..

A Note for author -Somehow i think i see your vision and how you are going to mold this into one of the greatest NTR games…
I would just like you to not to be influenced much by others opinion about how they want the game to be please stick to you original vision as much possible (some suggestion which will be good can be taken) and a great author listens to suggestions of the readers but never deviates from the original vision. “ you can always satisfy other peoples fetishes through diffrent routes after your original vision and story of the game is completed…



i wish you good luck and success and good health ofc….Love you ❤

One of the few NTR games I really liked, solely for the writing and good audio. A very promising start with a touch of realism that makes it all the more interesting and maybe even exciting for me. The buildup is good, the characters are likeable (for now) and I don't get a sense of AI slop which I normally get when playing most AI ones. Props to the dev for making something good out a tool rather than being overtly reliant on it to do most if not all the work. Looking forward for the whole thing being posted. Cheers!

Really solid beginning. The art, music, writing, and characters all feel polished and well thought out. Excited to see how the story unfolds. Keep it up, dev! Just adding a few more words to hit the limit.

Great potential.
So far not a lot of story, but its the first ever version, so thats fine.

What little there is is intriguing and has potential.
Characters are likeable, look good and scenes are nice so far. I especially like the addition of a potential best-buddy male friend.
Almost reminds me of some older VNs mixed with persona in terms of story-vibe.

Also like some of the quirky quick-comedy moments. The homework-scene especially.

probably the most impressive first version on the website. one thing that will probably characterize the game is the genuine quality of everything, although using AI art, the sprites and cgs aren't as robotic or obviously AI like other games, although noticeable, the traces of of it are usually masked by its style, veering away from the uncanny valley-ish look of usual aicg. though the art isn't the only quality part, the presentation (music, shots, and text) all feel very professional. def the first time ive seen good camera composition in a porn game, using blocking and the frame to create great looking CG and serve as part of the story (like how the camera usually pans up to faces to create a feeling of tension in the mystery NTR parts). i can't really rate the writing yet, as the story is just beginning. it's a fairly common plot (principal corrupts fmc), but it adds a lot of depth to it that makes it feel much more real and engaging. the writing itself is pretty good, the pacing is great, it doesn't get bogged down in complications, the character relationships and characters themselves are intersting. they play off each other as if it was a slice of life anime, not to mention that it FEELS like a slice of life anime with the setup, characters, and presentation. fairly early on, but could be one of the best vns on the website, just cuz of how well it navigates the parts of AVNs that are never prioritzed. it has incredible legs and i'd highly recommend the demo so far. big ups to Vonsatia for actually getting up and making the mystery NTR game of our dreams, avoiding all the pitfalls that make NTR games and AVNs as a whole so cheap nowadays. good luck and keep up and the good work

Really amazing start. Nice Art and captivating story . Really looking forward to further character development and looking to how things will play out in the long run.

MC is a great character and the love interest is very good too.

Finally a mystery NTR!
At first, I had my doubts since the art is done with AI, but the way it's used is brilliant and also fun, I wasn't expecting the cat image at all
The use of sound was the cherry on top, I thought it would just be images, but the sexual and ambient sounds give it that special touch
I'm looking forward to the next update and supporting it on Patreon or wherever.
Well done to the developer!!!

This game has arguably the best AI renders I have seen on this site by far. Lighting, details and variations in each scene is on point. Clearly a lot of effort was put into it. Looking forward to future chapters!

Great start to the story. I am looking forward to the additional chapters and to see how the story unfolds. This has lots of potential and I am looking forward to the updates over the next few months.

Nice writing, good art, my kind of tags. I´m not an artist so no advise from my side in that regard, but the story as a hole is compelling and enjoyable, which I think it is a difficult thing to achieve: to tell a goods story.

Congrats to the creator of the game and the best of lucks.

First of all please don't miss the game by just thinking it's AI. This game might bring a new era. AI+human brain together can create magic. First of the art is really good and sets a good atmosphere. Music is incredible and dialogues are so good. The quality is so good that you will not feel like you are playing an hentai game. The dialogues and jesters are so natural. And they know how to shift the tone when they show the main antagonist . The models looks so good. I hope dev also give some scenes of side characters since they look so good. And bring some other male characters like the ugly gym guy or something.
At last I give this game a 5 star. Its perfect first chapter which sets the mood right, tells you what to expect, the h-scene, music, dialogue and over all environment. Please give it a chance and support the dev in future.
Some interesting points to note:
MC is not a typical weak cuck. He is strong both physically and mentally. He is righteous and ready to beat any bad guy. This means it will be really disturbing to see his morals and believes crushed at the end. The city is really cruel as it hints at the end.
FMC is a strong lead. So it you l strong, serious cool FMC (who will obviously get corrupted and becomes a slut) you will enjoy the game.

From this first patch, we can see that this is a high level game/novel. We can see the care taken with the soundtrack, and especially with the artwork and the way the developer tells the story. 8,5/10
the negative point is...
1- this patch took months to develop, it is assumed that the next one will take months as well, so it is another game that will take years to finish. with a slow pace of short updates.
2-
It will be a Mystery NTR story from the perspective of Keita (the player). we will not have the FMC perspective, only cuck gay. so its a limited experience, a lot of game already has perspective variation. like falling undercover, and alot of others. i hope developer change that in early future.