Ren'Py - Ardor for Depravity [Demo v0.1.1] [Adventurous Goat]

A little too simple and straightforward, but I like the MC. The visuals are nice, the dialogues are well-written. I'm going to look forward to further updates. Hope there'll be more options and exciting stuff.
Just a little grindy.

Pros:
+ render quality
+ setting
+ pretty female faces
+ ugly and old bastards
+ sandbox not overwhelming
+ gameplay not complicated
+ fem protag
+ fem protag has solid firm, relative big tits with hard relative big nipples (depends on the light of the render but sometimes they look juicy perky!)
+ fem protag lost sister looks also damn sexy (wish she would be optional protag too)

Cons:
- light sometimes make her nipples more flat and tinier
- no sex yet (seems when she sleeps outside stuff is happening but not added yet)

Wishes/personal thoughts:
- Much potential. Hope to see busty sister in some nun or priestess outfit with some nasty old priest maybe?
- Fem Protag could have dark eyeliner/eyeshadow and a bit more hips, butt and thighs in my opinion.
- red haired companion looked also damn nice but lacked (maybe on purpose) the boobs and the hairstyle looked too much like a wig in my opinion.
- i hope the light in later important sensual scenes get fixed a bit to let see the nice hard perky nipples
- i think the black merchant and the cloth merchant look a bit too vanilla (maybe on purpose tho)
- bath scene of fem protag bathing is pretty hot maybe some of the merchant guys or some other ugly bastard will join her - optionally of course
- alternate outfits later one which let her look more sexy but not too slutty would be really nice!

1. there is TOO MUCH empty "small talk"/ dialogs chewing on the storyline point, on same renpy screens(scene).
2. empty black(blackout) screens with MCs thoughts.

It's clear that this was done to reduce the work on the demo, but it might played a worse role in attracting additional support.

3. this is a steam adventure text game with additional adult content events, not a typical genre game for the mainstream of f95. If dev looking for Pulitzer Drama Prize, then this is clearly wrong place and public for it.

4. if, probably, patreon-supported demo version has more H-content, in same prologue before sandbox, then this mean a new cashgrab start, where any further h-content will be strongly paywalled.

5. UI is normal. But screen/background elements is not interactive (personal rented apartments as example), only persons.

6. Characters and Models unique, no oversized crap, no degenerative personal beliefs. But MC has an emotionless, "lost look" expression on her face, in most sandbox scenes.

7. sandbox = total brainless grind with "work for 7 days", "wait for 3 days", without even H-content events.

Excellent start to a corruption game.
The renders are great (the cum could look better, though), it has a neat quest log and is very easy to play.
I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes next.

Right now this is a pretty short demo, but it is very promising.