VN - Ren'Py - Ariana’s Perverted Diary [v0.6.2] [SubjugationLeague]

Before I start my review I feel like it's absoutely necessary to mention that this game so far is 95% mind control. I have no idea why there's no mention of it in the tags or the description.
The premise of the game is: Female MC and female best friend discover an ancient book that lets them control other people and they use it to make women (the sister and mother so far) the MC's sex slaves.

I found this game because I was looking for a femdom game where the player is the dom. After I found out what the game is actually about I was about to quit, not because the game was bad but because I hate mind control. It usually takes away all excitment for me when the people involved aren't aware of what they are doing (like drugs, mind control etc.) But I kept playing a bit for some reason and to my surprise I ended up really liking it.

The game doesn't take itself seriously and that is the big difference to many other games and the main reason I like it. The plot makes no sense? Who cares, it's not supposed to be. This game is about lots of lesbian sex, not about a deep and engaging story. The text is short but not badly written (although a proof reader would be nice), which is definitely something I appreciate after having played countless adult games with walls of utterly boring text.
Also, the game was surprisingly funny at times. I especially liked the indifference and fatalism that is shown on several occasions.
That the MC is very attractive also helps a lot.

According to the front page this is supposed to be a short game but after playing the available content I wouldn't mind at all if the game gets many more updates.

Always on the lock for a game that is willing to mix it up. APD has beautiful renders and decent character design. It is refreshing to play a game with different pacing, just getting right to the point and exploring the story while still keeping it fun. Can't wait to see what comes next.

I'm a fan of lesbian games and this is one of my favorites.

It kind of checks all the boxes for me. Kinks are hot, scenes are hot, models are hot, dialogue isn't bad. This is a quick-moving fapfest and it delivers the goods early and often.

Please support the dev to keep it coming.

It is an excellent game in my opinion. I usually don’t go for lesbian games, but this is one of the two that I follow due to its magnificence. Graphics are fantastic, the tension between the characters feels real. The down side could be the lack of animations but the images and text descriptions are so great that you don't even realize it most of the time.


I highly recommend this game and kudos to the dev. Keep the good work.

This is just amazing. A fast-burn family (and possible world) corruption game with plenty of kinks, attractive models, good quality renders and a lot of potential. Keep up the good work, devs, deliver this to completion.

One of the best lesbian games I played! Great characthers and great MC! Story might seem cliche but I assure you its not! I think we need to F Felicia too... Looking forward to what dev is gonna cook for us in the future!

If you like lesbian incest with a corruption theme, this is the game for you.
Very hot. Sexy woman, sexy lingerie.
Game is still a bit short + moves a bit too fast, but it is a porn game + not ashamed of it.
As i wrote the game is a bit short right now, but has a lot of potential.

Very important: almost every image is well done + hot.

Edit: Game needs a Gallery or at least a mod for it.

Good game with wonderful girls
Its cool that three wonderful woman live in an family and all have sex with each other.
The game could only be better with:
- Animations
- Transparent Textbox otion
- Things to choose, its more an story as an game

But for now its good work! 4 Stars from me!

Love this game! It realy gets my juices flowing in the right about pace.
Still the constant moral questioning of Ariana becomes strange and annoying at one point because it feels like a filler on text and shows no development of the character. Like why is she not just enjoing it more and reflect on more kinks and places and persons ...
The exploring animal (Dogs) involvement is a gerat kink I'm totaly in for. Anal could be more explored for my liking.
Lewd 5/5
Graphics 4/5
Story 3/5
Final verdict: Moooore PLS!

A lesbian incest + mind control/corruption kinetic novel(?). If those tags interest you then probably you should play this game,

Story is interesting, renders aren't the best but they are ok, writing is quite good. My only issue is that it's too fast paced for my taste, I'd prefer if it would be more slow burn.

Objectively, the game is probably 3 stars. There are a lot of proofreading mistakes, the renders are average, the plot isn't anything special, just a generic mind-control fuckfest.

Yet subjectively, I still really enjoyed it. I don't know whether it was the characters, the scenes, or the nonchalance with which everything was treated, but I found myself wanting way more upon finishing.

I have given better games worse scores, but I guess it's just a matter of taste.

A new female protagonist game, yay or nay?
FIrst, let me start with the story. What story? As John Carmack once said, porn and computer games don't need a story. But seriously , this was intended to be a simple shorter story. I expect a fairly straightforward affair with some side scenes for various fetishes. As for the characters, they do get fleshed out more as the game progresses. However I have a minor gripe, we are thrust right into action without as much as a word, which left me a little confused. Luckily a couple of scenes later we are given an explanation. A few sentences would suffice, e.g. "Ariana stumbles upon an old tome of arcane knowledge. She tries to put a spell on her sister to make her more amicable. Chaos follows."

But the selling point isn't the story, it's the pretty girls and a female protagonist on a quest to catch them all. Starting with her female family members.
So far the game manages to deliver on it's premise. Early on we are teased with a futanari fantasy. I'm happy to report it was a fantasy (or a premonition ) and we are treated to one juicy scene of lesbian action after an other. I think keeping the futanari content for later was a good decision, because making the mc a futanari from the beginning would result in a short or a repetitive game. Unless more and more girls were to be added. Or the game would encompass a wide variety of kinks. Also it does make sense from a story perspective. It could serve to escalate the plot and show the characters succumbing to their desires and slipping further into debauchery.
This vn has been a nice surprise and I'm hoping a promising start will lead to a successful end.

Pretty dam good. Girl on girl isn't realy my thing, but this game made me rethink my stances on that. Excellent renders, prety decent story, and interesting paths to tread in the future.
Looking forward to what's next.
Would recomed to family and friends.

For me, it's already a huge plus to find a game that's solely geared towards girls and only girls, especially in the incest category.
The game itself is more of a novel story, not really a choiced one with branches in the story, but the story is relatively well written. The very beginning is a bit straightforward and remind of other corruption games, where in fact everyone is already perverted and it's just a pretext for displaying sex animations gifs, but here just afterwards we get an explanation of why. So yes, it's a bit easy, but if you take it as just a story, the author has the right to tell it the way he or she wants.
The other characters are introduced gradually, with their personalities, and we can expect a richer story to follow.
There's no animation, just images, and the models do indeed seem rather common, but are correct (not a fan of 3D models with systematically super-big boobs, but who am I to judge ).

Excellent story! I really did enjoyed all the kinks, and the flow is very smooth and believable. I've also enjoyed that there is no long boring introduction without porn, all the plot details are given in retrospective and don't divert your attention from the main course

1) There's no story in this game, everyone fucking everyone after saying "hi" type game. Especially if you are creating an incest game and can fuck every family member after 2 seconds it's not really feel like incest at all.

2) Generic Ren'py UI feels cheap. You don't need to rebuild the whole UI though, small touches can change a lot.

3) Graphics are basically your average DAZ renders, nothing more nothing less. No animation though.

4) There's only four choices and all of them only change 2-4 render, it really feels like a kinetic novel aka comic book, not like a game.

5) After all there's a few good renders to fap, that's all though.

Game is mid, renders could use more work, and I feel the story could use more work since it's the run of the mill story that all mid games have. It goes straight to sex which I can see that some people would like, but there's not even a small build up its just bam straight sex. I don't mind straight up sex in the start but there has to be an explanation or a small amount of build up as to why and not just "guess were fuckin now."

I tried this for the lesbianism. But I have to say, this is the cheapest form of pornography. The story is just a fig leaf and the progression is instant, no sexual tension is built whatsoever, it's basically straight up sex, straight up supercharged corruption and everyone is either a slut or about to become one.

If you just want sex with decent renders and nothing else, APD might be enjoyable for you. I didn't enjoy it. HOWEVER, the developer mentioned this in the description so partly it is my own fault. That's why I give three instead of two stars.

Animation: Solid, well crafted
Story: Charming trope of magic incantations and charming your loved ones
Scripting: So far the characters have their own personalities and dynamics.
There needs to be more stories like this. A woman using magic to get what she wants, corruption, incest, seduction and no unnecessary dicks around. I love what's been made so far and I hope the creator keeps putting out content!

So I tried this reluctantly after seeing all the 5* reviews.

After downloading the disappointment was quick to follow. In about 5 minutes you get your first serious sex scene between two sisters. One of them being the "introverted" sister. I was mostly drawn by this, thinking this would be a slow corruption game where we go through the whole 9 yards from an innocent introvert to a true succubus queen. She's not an introvert and she's not innocent.

The renders are mediocre and one can see not a lot of effort went into the character details (cosmetic). The fact it's so compressed also messes up with the quality so if you're willing to overlook that, you should be fine.
3* for graphics

The story so far is nothing you haven't seen before 100 times for MC (both male and female). No buildup, no conflicting thoughts, no feeling exploration, absolutely nothing to write home about.
1* for the simple writing, completely lacking originality.

Gameplay is just a few options here and there, not sure if the choices you are given will branch out one way or the other in future versions (seriously doubt it). In any case at the moment there is very little "game" and the rest is "VN"
2* for basic gameplay

2* game overall. It caters for some fetishes that attracted some people that were quick to overrate this. Still, if you're here for a quick fap, this may do the trick as you will be thrown in the think of it very quickly.