VN - Ren'Py - Ariana’s Perverted Diary [v0.7.3] [Girls on Top]

I feel that the story is going around in circles a bit, and there was a strong momentum from earlier versions which is quite halted now. Sex with the sister and mother is fun and all but if it is the main content of the game, it does become banal and ordinary. Other than that, the story moves quite slow and the implications of having a mind control book are not quite well explored. I can't help but think about A Spell for All, where there is basically the same premise but the world and story feels more lived in.

There are other characters with nice renders that seem to be around and sometimes interact, but not enough.

I guess the big elephant in the room is the doggie dong. Not once, but twice. I don't think I was given the option to skip this and if anything is confronting, it is bestiality. There is all manner of perversions but I think I have to draw the line there and should have known when the dog was rendered a bit too well.

[0.7.3]
The game is excellent for what it is.
Fast-paced porn kinetic novel, with few choices, good visuals, and 4 main selling points:
lesbians;
incest;
mind control;
casual sex.
Occasional options for bdsm and bestiality are there as well.
The more of these kinks you personally find appealing, the higher your rating of it will be.
There is no logical, well-thought-out plot, no slow character development, no branching.
If the kinks listed above and in-game tags are something you enjoy, you'll be sure to like.
If you are looking for smth more complicated, slow-paced, and romantic, that's not it.

This VN is a silly fuckfest from the very start, this is not a slow burn haha. I actually like the simplicity of this game as it knows exactly what it wants to be and it leans into it well. The reason I took 2 stars away is because of the lower quality renders and the spelling. The entire game is riddled with spelling errors that start to annoy after a while, and this could have easily been prevented with a simple spellcheck before hand.

Kind of at the loss for words. I usually dont like these 3d RenPy novels - most of them feel a little... hm cheap I suppose? But this one is whole other beast. The only way this can get better if Pregnancy content is added, but that would be just making excellent game perfect. Unless you not into lesbians, futas and may be dogs, you missing out, big time

This game is literally the meme of "A wizard did that" It's a silly excuse to random lesbian incest with futas and dogs in it. AND THAT'S GREAT. I like that this game has no pretensions and that you can skip all the scenes about the magical nonsense, the non-porn conversations, the cheesy (like all of them) lesbian love story, and everything still makes the same (zero) sense.

Seriously. 99% of porn games are garbage in terms of writing, but somehow they expect us to take them seriously. But not this one. It embraces the garbage. Just kinky fap material. It's refreshing, and honest.

As a fan of lesbian games, I can't help but appreciate this kind of AVN. It's fun, the girls are mostly pretty, and it doesn't take itself too seriously without falling into degradation or anything else. In short, we have a good time following the magical adventures of our pretty FMC.
On the other hand, the latest update is short, I think. 4/5 because the graphics are a bit dated, even if they're still very pretty.

It's a good game with common story of "MC gets power and abuses it", but with actual consequences and moral struggle. I enjoyed it quite a lot, just as side plots. Redhead romance is especially cute. Bonus points for being F/F focused.
Can't give 5 only because quality and amount of renders is lacking. There is also minor amount of spelling errors. Don't get me wrong - models are sexy, and scenes are sufficiently illustrated, but if this is a 5, some other games will deserve 6.

It's one of my favorite games. The plot is simple, easy to follow, and the characters are interesting. The scenes are amazing, and the writing is simply brilliant.


I’d love to see more of this story or other projects from the developer.

Characters are flat and everything moves too fast No buildup no depth just wham bam thank you maam stuff. Feels more like a slideshow than a game .

The famliy fetish fantasy is okay and that holds this game together. The problem with these purely fetish based storylines is it always needs fetishes more and more and more to keep players interested and without the story going anywhere people lose interest once they cross their fetish and then the storylines does not have directions to go. Some buildup and character development would have done this game a lot of good.

If you like family fetish and quick rush storyline! This is for you. A good one time play for people who like the fetish for sure but that is about it.

A witty piece that basically replaces the tale of a horny straight male teenager whose fantasies come true when his best friend helps him bring a magic spell book to life -- with the tale of a horny Lesbian teenager whose fantasies come true etc etc. Most of the story is about MC (Ariana) reveling in her newfound power to make her Mom and bratty big sister to fulfill her every sexual desire with them.
But the trope, for me, gets kinda old -- notwithstanding many lovely lesbian tableaus, complete with awesome wetness galore. The frisson of incestuous lesbian eroticism that sparks with the first discoveries of the forbidden is quite hot -- but it loses its luster after awhile.
BUT -- in comes Ariana's BFF's older sister -- a beautiful redhead whose entire life revolves around tennis prowess -- and ZOOM! -- the whole story moves into fresh erotic possibilities! For me, the most erotic moment in the whole story thus far was the 2 chaste kisses the 2 girls exchanged after their date. So hot! Ah romance...
The potential, now, for TRUE love, as opposed to fappety-fap-fap fantasy, is something for Ariana to consider. And how will it effect her previous callow pursuits? And how will we the reader still be erotically compelled? Stay tuned, I hope...

A lesbian VN mainly based around corruption/mind control with a variety of fetishes. Decent artwork, pretty well written with really no choices involved.
I found it entertaining enough to recommend to those who like lesbian content. And i found nothing really to criticize.
Seem to be regular updates with a reasonable amount of content.
Looking forward to see where the Dev takes this.

It's a kinetic novel. The AVN's few choices are to enable or disable certain kinks. There is no character building; basically is a porn movie plot. Nice renders but no animations. There are some interesting fetishes, but there is zero context for them to happen.

Before I start my review I feel like it's absoutely necessary to mention that this game so far is 95% mind control. I have no idea why there's no mention of it in the tags or the description.
The premise of the game is: Female MC and female best friend discover an ancient book that lets them control other people and they use it to make women (the sister and mother so far) the MC's sex slaves.

I found this game because I was looking for a femdom game where the player is the dom. After I found out what the game is actually about I was about to quit, not because the game was bad but because I hate mind control. It usually takes away all excitment for me when the people involved aren't aware of what they are doing (like drugs, mind control etc.) But I kept playing a bit for some reason and to my surprise I ended up really liking it.

The game doesn't take itself seriously and that is the big difference to many other games and the main reason I like it. The plot makes no sense? Who cares, it's not supposed to be. This game is about lots of lesbian sex, not about a deep and engaging story. The text is short but not badly written (although a proof reader would be nice, there are many, easily avoidable spelling errors), which is definitely something I appreciate after having played countless adult games with walls of utterly boring text.
Also, the game was surprisingly funny at times. I especially liked the indifference and fatalism that is shown on several occasions.
That the MC is very attractive also helps a lot.

According to the front page this is supposed to be a short game but after playing the available content I wouldn't mind at all if the game gets many more updates.

Always on the lock for a game that is willing to mix it up. APD has beautiful renders and decent character design. It is refreshing to play a game with different pacing, just getting right to the point and exploring the story while still keeping it fun. Can't wait to see what comes next.

I'm a fan of lesbian games and this is one of my favorites.

It kind of checks all the boxes for me. Kinks are hot, scenes are hot, models are hot, dialogue isn't bad. This is a quick-moving fapfest and it delivers the goods early and often.

Please support the dev to keep it coming.

It is an excellent game in my opinion. I usually don’t go for lesbian games, but this is one of the two that I follow due to its magnificence. Graphics are fantastic, the tension between the characters feels real. The down side could be the lack of animations but the images and text descriptions are so great that you don't even realize it most of the time.


I highly recommend this game and kudos to the dev. Keep the good work.

This is just amazing. A fast-burn family (and possible world) corruption game with plenty of kinks, attractive models, good quality renders and a lot of potential. Keep up the good work, devs, deliver this to completion.

One of the best lesbian games I played! Great characthers and great MC! Story might seem cliche but I assure you its not! I think we need to F Felicia too... Looking forward to what dev is gonna cook for us in the future!

If you like lesbian incest with a corruption theme, this is the game for you.
Very hot. Sexy woman, sexy lingerie.
Game is still a bit short + moves a bit too fast, but it is a porn game + not ashamed of it.
As i wrote the game is a bit short right now, but has a lot of potential.

Very important: almost every image is well done + hot.

Edit: Game needs a Gallery or at least a mod for it.

Good game with wonderful girls
Its cool that three wonderful woman live in an family and all have sex with each other.
The game could only be better with:
- Animations
- Transparent Textbox otion
- Things to choose, its more an story as an game

But for now its good work! 4 Stars from me!