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Sylvie Dreams

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I'll give it a try and if OK, I'll give it support.
Not so much into incest so if it will be at least avoidable that would be fine.
Thank you so much. I don't have incest planned, we'll see where the script goes, but for now, only some father visual teasing :)
 

Darthreign

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I'll follow if their is a Incest option (at least father teasing like it's already the case). So maybe make it avoidable at the start for people that don't want it?
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Sydoon

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Sep 20, 2019
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Play tested it a bit for now (and still continuing) but the white text on the white backgrounds are sometimes really hard to read
 
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hentai charley

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Cause of that? I've written off new games for many reasons but that is the laziest reason I've seen yet.
Its probably always the captain cause a lot of women are attracted to competent and dominant men, being a captain of something usually means you are pyshically capable and have leadership experience
I've downloaded over 800 games from this site (not counting remakes, multi-parts, updates, etc.). About 200 of these are in the que to actually play. I'm currently following more than 100 games for updates- and this is not the ONLY game site that I visit. This is in addition to my OTHER work online- about half a dozen VERY lengthy, time-consuming projects. I DO need to be selective for anything NEW.

NEW games* have to have Something to spark my interest. I've learned that some developers are worth following in other projects and I have certain fetishes that I look for in the tags (and that's assuming that the tags are accurate). However, just because the game has a fetish or a dev that I like does not in itself make a winner. And there are other tags that I really don't care about, and will probably be a strike against my interest. For instance, "Real Porn" is a tag that I tend to avoid. ("Scat" is another.) But that doesn't necessarily make a BAD game- and I have dl'd games (and sometimes even enjoy) that have one of the "turnoffs". But as Time goes by, frankly, my initial vibes are usually vindicated.

"Arizona" LOOKS very good- I don't have a major complain on the visual work. But as it currently stands, the story doesn't seem to have anything to snag my interest and, at first look, seems to be hitting several stereotypes that I avoid- as I commented. Perhaps I was rather flippant in my comment (I do tend to be that way late at night), but no offense was meant. I sincerely wish the dev Good luck in their endeavor.

Yes, I understand the Darwinian implications of using The Leader. My comment was more exasperation at a over-used stereotype. But, like I did say, at least it's not the (American) Football Star... I DO favor Basketball much more.**

* I mean New Games to me- not necessarily new at the site.
** NBA resumes July 31. Go Blazers!!!
 
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Shaman Zuma

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The game is good, I just finished the available content, and wouldn't mind male characters corrupting Arizona soon, and go full sex with her, so a bit of incest could add a bit of "realism" to the game, lol.

English is not the best but its improvement is a matter of time, I just wish that the developer favors the exhibitionism scenes, there are not many of these games in Ren'Py. GL.
 

Sylvie Dreams

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The game is good, I just finished the available content, and wouldn't mind male characters corrupting Arizona soon, and go full sex with her, so a bit of incest could add a bit of "realism" to the game, lol.

English is not the best but its improvement is a matter of time, I just wish that the developer favors the exhibitionism scenes, there are not many of these games in Ren'Py. GL.
The game is still in its infancy, so the sex scenes with the protagonist will be more spaced out.

Regarding exhibitionism, have no doubt that there will be enough content about this fetish.
 

matsomatso

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Jul 29, 2019
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OK, I'm a sucker for pretty brunette female protagonist, so I'll give it a try.

PLEASE, no incest! There's already over 900 games here with incest. Let the brother/sister/father/motherfuckers play one of those.
I agree. Every release I've seen here, that carries the INCEST tag panders to fetishists. The only title that comes anywhere close to having a character with a true consanguinamorous sexual orientation is the MC's sister in "Parental Love". Unfortunately, the brother character is stereotypical in that his main concern seems to be ejaculating into as many vaginas as he can. It's repulsive to anyone who understands the consang orientation. That story could have been magnificent, but the creator couldn't resist pandering (or simply didn't bother to gain an education about consanguinamory).

Not quite to the level of Engrish yet.

its parents? How about her parents

His father, her father, same with his mother.

Well you got it right with taking control of her life? Is is(sic) an editing issue? I know English can be difficult even for native speakers, but those right at the beginning can be a(sic) discourage players from continuing the game.

Other then(sic) that the pics look good so far, I'll play through the story and see how it looks deeper in.
Just a suggestion, but perhaps it best to first LEARN English before trying to TEACH English


I'm trying to improve my English skills. I hope to resolve these grammar problems as soon as possible
That wasn't a complaint about your lingual skills. It was a (nitpick, IMO) complaint about the level of contrast in the graphic. Your grammar is correct. In fact, I think your English skills are commendable. Plus, I get a "smooth vibe" when reading what you write. You seem like a decent person. I'll take a look at your creation now, and try to remember to note any areas where you need grammar/spelling/syntax help. Best of luck to you :)
 

blastwave2k

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well well. a cute little game, a very cute little game. i always appreciate some exhibitionist fun if done right. i like it for a first start, and will keep an eye out for more.

a little machine translatey, but no big as dev did say english is not first language (italian i'm guessing?) my only hope is that this is a hobby or work of love, so we can see it develop and grow over time, as games like this probably not going to make anyone rich on patreon. ;)
 
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Sylvie Dreams

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well well. a cute little game, a very cute little game. i always appreciate some exhibitionist fun if done right. i like it for a first start, and will keep an eye out for more.

a little machine translatey, but no big as dev did say english is not first language (italian i'm guessing?) my only hope is that this is a hobby or work of love, so we can see it develop and grow over time, as games like this probably not going to make anyone rich on patreon. ;)
No, my native language is Spanish, and I also speak Portuguese and Galician.

Be sure that this project will not make me rich, but I enjoy doing it, so it is very likely that it will grow slowly but surely. In fact, I'm working on correcting some dialogues to release version 0.01b soon. I'm also working on the scenes of version 0.02, which I hope to release in July
 
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blastwave2k

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No, my native language is Spanish, and I also speak Portuguese and Galician.

Be sure that this project will not make me rich, but I enjoy doing it, so it is very likely that it will grow slowly but surely. In fact, I'm working on correcting some dialogues to release version 0.01b soon. I'm also working on the scenes of version 0.02, which I hope to release in July
well thats great to hear. :) i love the humor, this line particularly made me laugh, sounds like something i'd say.
arizona1.PNG

and i think this is what made me think italian at first, but now that i look into it more, it would be lascivos for italian i think
arizona2.PNG
sometimes the languages feel so similar. i remember my mom and grandmother spoke fluent italian, and my mom always said she could understand most of a spanish conversation if it wasn't too fast. cool cool. always made me a little jealous i never picked up other languages (just a LOT of italian phrases. xD)

anyway. too much chatting now. either way, love it. good start. will be keeping an eye out for it.
 
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michelbite

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Apr 21, 2018
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Really nice game here. If it had more upskirt without panties (like some camera angle when she was wearing only a towel and taking the stairs for example) that would have been a 10/10.
I'll definitely keep an eye on this one!
Good luck with your game.
 
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Darthjake

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Just a suggestion, but perhaps it best to first LEARN English before trying to TEACH English
Why don't you give it a break, I wasn't flaming him, I was point out errors on a public forum, for a game that he has created.

Yes, I had some poor typing, boo hoo. Put your big kid panties on and move on.

The game creator understood what I meant, and I was nowhere near as impolite as the guy on the first page. I presented legitimate concerns, and will post a review eventually, but for now, Alpha 19 has dropped for 7 days to die, so I have better things to do at the moment.
 
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