- Jun 29, 2020
That's the plan, but expect wardrove malfunctions at least no avoidable (It depends how the plot turns with time)
I'm trying to improve my english skills. I hope to resolve these grammar problems as soon as possible
I've downloaded over 800 games from this site (not counting remakes, multi-parts, updates, etc.). About 200 of these are in the que to actually play. I'm currently following more than 100 games for updates- and this is not the ONLY game site that I visit. This is in addition to my OTHER work online- about half a dozen VERY lengthy, time-consuming projects. I DO need to be selective for anything NEW.Cause of that? I've written off new games for many reasons but that is the laziest reason I've seen yet.
Its probably always the captain cause a lot of women are attracted to competent and dominant men, being a captain of something usually means you are pyshically capable and have leadership experience
The game is still in its infancy, so the sex scenes with the protagonist will be more spaced out.The game is good, I just finished the available content, and wouldn't mind male characters corrupting Arizona soon, and go full sex with her, so a bit of incest could add a bit of "realism" to the game, lol.
English is not the best but its improvement is a matter of time, I just wish that the developer favors the exhibitionism scenes, there are not many of these games in Ren'Py. GL.
I agree. Every release I've seen here, that carries the INCEST tag panders to fetishists. The only title that comes anywhere close to having a character with a true consanguinamorous sexual orientation is the MC's sister in "Parental Love". Unfortunately, the brother character is stereotypical in that his main concern seems to be ejaculating into as many vaginas as he can. It's repulsive to anyone who understands the consang orientation. That story could have been magnificent, but the creator couldn't resist pandering (or simply didn't bother to gain an education about consanguinamory).OK, I'm a sucker for pretty brunette female protagonist, so I'll give it a try.
PLEASE, no incest! There's already over 900 games here with incest. Let the brother/sister/father/motherfuckers play one of those.
Just a suggestion, but perhaps it best to first LEARN English before trying to TEACH EnglishNot quite to the level of Engrish yet.
its parents? How about her parents
His father, her father, same with his mother.
Well you got it right with taking control of her life? Is is(sic) an editing issue? I know English can be difficult even for native speakers, but those right at the beginning can be a(sic) discourage players from continuing the game.
Other then(sic) that the pics look good so far, I'll play through the story and see how it looks deeper in.
That wasn't a complaint about your lingual skills. It was a (nitpick, IMO) complaint about the level of contrast in the graphic. Your grammar is correct. In fact, I think your English skills are commendable. Plus, I get a "smooth vibe" when reading what you write. You seem like a decent person. I'll take a look at your creation now, and try to remember to note any areas where you need grammar/spelling/syntax help. Best of luck to youI'm trying to improve my English skills. I hope to resolve these grammar problems as soon as possible
No, my native language is Spanish, and I also speak Portuguese and Galician.well well. a cute little game, a very cute little game. i always appreciate some exhibitionist fun if done right. i like it for a first start, and will keep an eye out for more.
a little machine translatey, but no big as dev did say english is not first language (italian i'm guessing?) my only hope is that this is a hobby or work of love, so we can see it develop and grow over time, as games like this probably not going to make anyone rich on patreon.
well thats great to hear. i love the humor, this line particularly made me laugh, sounds like something i'd say.No, my native language is Spanish, and I also speak Portuguese and Galician.
Be sure that this project will not make me rich, but I enjoy doing it, so it is very likely that it will grow slowly but surely. In fact, I'm working on correcting some dialogues to release version 0.01b soon. I'm also working on the scenes of version 0.02, which I hope to release in July
Why don't you give it a break, I wasn't flaming him, I was point out errors on a public forum, for a game that he has created.Just a suggestion, but perhaps it best to first LEARN English before trying to TEACH English