The best I have seen so far...
The story is well written, at least your portrayal of that story is presented in an easy to follow format.
The animations are good, bordering great. Just add a bit more "randomness" to the bodily motions, to make it more human.
The models are good, bordering on great. Just add some more variety, some slim, some thick, different body part sizes.
The scenes are all original i think, and look great. Transitions are smooth.
The sex isnt over done. This isnt a porn game, this is an adult story where what is seen is what you would see. Kudos, that isnt easy to balance.
The sound is great, and is setup perfectly to the story. I got teary eyes there at the end, before i realized you had successfully queued the sound to make me feel sad. Perfect.
The humor is great, had me laughing several times. The playing with emotions isnt over done, and fits the story well.
I am just really excited to see something of this obvious quality. I cant wait to see the next chapter. I am even considering looking them up on patreon and donating, which is huge considering i am disabled living on food stamps and HUD.
Congratulations... and thank you for sharing your work with the rest of us.
The story is well written, at least your portrayal of that story is presented in an easy to follow format.
The animations are good, bordering great. Just add a bit more "randomness" to the bodily motions, to make it more human.
The models are good, bordering on great. Just add some more variety, some slim, some thick, different body part sizes.
The scenes are all original i think, and look great. Transitions are smooth.
The sex isnt over done. This isnt a porn game, this is an adult story where what is seen is what you would see. Kudos, that isnt easy to balance.
The sound is great, and is setup perfectly to the story. I got teary eyes there at the end, before i realized you had successfully queued the sound to make me feel sad. Perfect.
The humor is great, had me laughing several times. The playing with emotions isnt over done, and fits the story well.
I am just really excited to see something of this obvious quality. I cant wait to see the next chapter. I am even considering looking them up on patreon and donating, which is huge considering i am disabled living on food stamps and HUD.
Congratulations... and thank you for sharing your work with the rest of us.