Please excuse my english...
So I just started and finished the game for the day and WOW, it's hard not to stop clicking through. Such a big chapter with lots of content, definitely puts it at my top 10 favorites of games with an incredible start(plus some teaser too!

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The mix of emotions projected in each scene compliments with each other.
The MC (if I read him correctly) showed his vulnerabilities reasonably, as some may see his whining, crying, and running away a weakness by some people, I can empathize with him.
As for the story, I believe it's my first time to play with such plot so I see this an original work and is not a cheap copy of another successful VN.
And for the last thing I want to have a comment on are the models, more specifically our girls. Love interest or not, their different characters has put in such contribution on how this game turned out and what will it probably lead to. I already have my favorites and one that I already hate( can't believe I'm hating an Alexandra Daddario look-a-like!).
Congratulations on a great start, wish you success to follow through and net you the patrons you deserve!