Story, Atmosphere, Renders, Dialouges, Setting.
All in all i gotta say that is one of the easyiest to emerge yourself in. Everything mentioned above has is place at the Top of what there is to achieve.
My personal kink of having more than one Sex sesseion in the same act is sadly not present even if there is dialouge of going on all night, the MC finishes ones and its over. BUT thats just my personal priority.
Overall every dialogue i didnt skip, which means alot of it is written good to enjoy the slow rolling process. The lovve of detail of expression and faces on all the diferent characters is stunning.
There are enough funny scenes, jokes, serious parts for it to not become dull one second second. Also the setting is intruiging ex machina vibes all over the place .
Congrats to you, i hope it keeps evolving and it gets the love it deserves.
I want to see stuff like this keep going and eventually finish, its already in my very good category which not many games are placed in.