If you love games like Mass Effect and Starsector, this game is perfect for you. The art is fantastic and a breath of fresh air in a sea of 3DCG EVNs. Both the male and female casts are fun and lovable and the banter is always top notch.
I do have a few criticisms. First, the dialogue can come off as a bit awkward or too formal at times. Often times there's not enough contractions and the dialogue is overly verbose. Native english speakers will get what I'm saying. I'm not too worried about that since you can easily proofread and edit the dialogue. The essence of what is being said is fine.
Second, the flow of the story can sometimes be confusing. There are times where the story jumps forward in time due to new updates. A casual scene can dramatically shift into an emotional one and while there is foreshadowing, it can still come off as a bit out of left field. All of these combined can lead to a somewhat disjointed and confusing reading experience.
TLDR The framework and core of the story is fantastic but it can feel disorienting due to the timeskips and sub-par English. The motivations of the characters are believable and human but need more time to develop.
A more gradual buildup to the emotional crashouts, more context in between time skips, and some proofreading and you've got a real gem of a game. I'd rate it a personal 4/5 but I'm giving it a 5/5 because it's criminally underrated and needs way more exposure.
Also let me romance Ashley
I do have a few criticisms. First, the dialogue can come off as a bit awkward or too formal at times. Often times there's not enough contractions and the dialogue is overly verbose. Native english speakers will get what I'm saying. I'm not too worried about that since you can easily proofread and edit the dialogue. The essence of what is being said is fine.
Second, the flow of the story can sometimes be confusing. There are times where the story jumps forward in time due to new updates. A casual scene can dramatically shift into an emotional one and while there is foreshadowing, it can still come off as a bit out of left field. All of these combined can lead to a somewhat disjointed and confusing reading experience.
TLDR The framework and core of the story is fantastic but it can feel disorienting due to the timeskips and sub-par English. The motivations of the characters are believable and human but need more time to develop.
A more gradual buildup to the emotional crashouts, more context in between time skips, and some proofreading and you've got a real gem of a game. I'd rate it a personal 4/5 but I'm giving it a 5/5 because it's criminally underrated and needs way more exposure.
Also let me romance Ashley