Ren'Py - Awakening Phone [v0.1] [Skoritz]

The story is good. I really like the cuck queen concept. I don't think I have seen it ever in a game.
Some bugs in the game need fixing,
-The gallery would reset every time I opened the game.
And I think the devs should add hints with each image because, despite all my effort, I wasn't able to see 2 images in the prologue.
Other than that, I have no problem with the game and am really excited for the later updates.

Prologue is nice.

Plus side: Novel idea and text is great
Minus: All three of them have the same face save for the different hair color.
The music is kinda weird and I think it should be changed, but that's more of a preference than anything else.

All in all is a nice start and I loved the premise as well as the execution, a cuckquean game is rare and this is welcomed here.

I do really like the story and characters so far!

The Art and pictures a pretty hot and well made as well!

I would appreciate if the englisch gets some corrections, it is at times wonky.
Also, sometime its not quite clear what is meant with the choices.
Some more clarity there would be good as well.

for now I really like the direction and dinamic of the relationship,

not many cuckquean games,

Hope the game explores more this kink of the GF, and also becomes more polished, that would make it perfect

Yes, I'm rating only the prologue.

Another text phone story. I hate text phone games but I strangely keep playing, like hoping something different.
Although, been a "text phone" based game is no influencing my rating because is clear just opening the thread and you chose it.

Then, I found something new or almost, a game based in the cuckqueen pulling her bfinto her friends group. The small closed circle helps to know each character with his/her own personality.
The choices open opportunities for some interesting branch in future development (I'm guessing dominant, harem, sex group, NTR or NTS (gf with guys) and humiliating her, just listing from the top of my head).
The girls are, unconventionally, hot.
I also enjoyed the storytelling. Is not Shakespeare but usualy te best Renpy writers reach level Kindergarten making this a master piece.
Ending, i support this promising start.

Anyway, i saw in phone based games the users mostly wants some graphic scene, animations or more pics. I also would be very glad ir this games at some point, a critical moment, break out the phone screen jumping to a full screen scene. At least only those two or three sex scenes kneaded from the prologue or the most shocking ones.
A very small change in the game but a very big change for gamers.