[Ren'Py] Awesome Vacation [v0.2] [Asario Tooro]

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Overview:
The hero of the game, working as a teacher at the university, go on a long-awaited vacation to the blue sea. In the hope of resting from their colleagues and breaking away with strangers in the warm sun. Will the hero realize his plans on vacation? Will you be able to distribute your attention and time between all the girls in the resort. Can you avoid delicate situations and immerse yourself in exciting adventures with the hero of the game.Sea adventures are waiting for you on the beach, night swimming and hiking through the clubs, comfortable rooms of the Azaria Hotel, resort landscapes, yacht trips, adventures in the jungle.​

Updated: 3-May-2018
Developer/Publisher:
Censorship: None
Version: 0.2
OS: Win/Mac/Linux
Language: Engrish/Russian
Side-Story: &
Genre:
Male protag, 3dcg, harem, teacher, perk system, vaginal sex, beach vacation

Installation:
1- Extract to desired location.
2- Click on "AwVa.exe" to start playing.
3- Change langauge to Eng in main menu.

Change-Log:
v0.2

There is a choice of one of three ways jobs: Alexa, Angilica, Oldster.

- Added a new location.
- Added a new characters: Lisa, Jess, Helga.

New event:

- Extended an exisiting event chain for Alexa.
- Extended an exisiting event chain for Leela.
- Extended an exisiting event chain for Christie.
- Event with the lifeguard.
- and other events.

Remade: beach, city.
Removed the limit of 10 game days.

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Feb 8, 2018
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I'm not sure it can pass for English though must of used google translate. Its so bad it might be better to just play it in Russian and just hope you pick the right choice. and whats with the star wars want a be dude trying to talk like Yoda?
I think this one has to be a pass until the English is understandable and the choices make sense.
to me its almost looks like a child is writing the story and plot on this one.
 
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voyeurkind

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I'm assuming this is being produced by someone who just wants to build a game and isn't serious about making it financially successful. That's the only possible explanation I can think of for the terrible translations.

One would think that if someone is serious, doesn't speak English and wants to sell a game to an English speaking audience, the first thing they would do is hire a quality translator
 
Feb 8, 2018
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#13
I'm assuming this is being produced by someone who just wants to build a game and isn't serious about making it financially successful. That's the only possible explanation I can think of for the terrible translations.

One would think that if someone is serious, doesn't speak English and wants to sell a game to an English speaking audience, the first thing they would do is hire a quality translator
or ask someone that speaks both languages a friend or someone on this forum even anything would be better then what he used
 

a1fox3

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I'm not sure it can pass for English though must of used google translate. Its so bad it might be better to just play it in Russian and just hope you pick the right choice. and whats with the star wars want a be dude trying to talk like Yoda?
I think this one has to be a pass until the English is understandable and the choices make sense.
to me its almost looks like a child is writing the story and plot on this one.
Its not English its "Engrish".
 
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buttlovinmagic

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being English I'm quite used to seeing my native language put through the blender on this sites downloads but this is just about as bad as I have seen.

I did try guessing my way through some of it but, after the chat with the old guy on the beach, I decided to go and search for rocking horse poo because it is stands a better chance for a successful outcome.

why release a game in a language you don't understand? gives the whole thing such a bad impression
 

Zippity

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I'm assuming this is being produced by someone who just wants to build a game and isn't serious about making it financially successful. That's the only possible explanation I can think of for the terrible translations.

One would think that if someone is serious, doesn't speak English and wants to sell a game to an English speaking audience, the first thing they would do is hire a quality translator
I tried this game, and I agree that the broken English in this game is massively bad... Add to that, the whole thing seems rushed, messy, confusing, and hard to really get a grip on what you are really supposed to be doing or how the story is supposed to be progressing... So many elements and what I think are sub-plots get thrown at you, it just makes your head spin and eyes roll back into your head... This doesn't even feel like a visual novel, as more like a grind game with story elements... I understand it might be early into development, but I really think it has a lot of issues to work out, and not just with the text... I went ahead and posted my review...
 
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DeUglyOne

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#20
I was going to try this one until I read through the thread. Even before I read the posts, it had me thinking: If this guy's idea of an awesome vacation is seeing clouds, he really should get out of his parent's basement more often.
 
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