[R-Play tester] [R>Proofreader] 'Baby Project' Looking for Proofreader and Play-tester

TheTrio

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Developer: TheTrio

Game: Baby Project

Tag: Exhibitionism, Blackmail, Pregnancy, Humiliation, Harem, Stripping, MILF, Teasing, Blowjob

Description: The Trio is creating a compelling adult game that is based on ren'py. You will get to play as a lost young man in a big city, trying to pay off all the debts that you have accumulated while living in a city. One day, a wonderful opportunity occurs in your life, and if you take it, you will be able to attain great success in life while having as much fun with the girls in the process. You're one click away from the wealth and women. Choose wisely.

Job description: We just need volunteers to play through our game and let us know of any feedback o bugs you see in the game.

Contact method: You can reply under the thread, and we will get back to you as soon as possible. Or you can dm us in a private message. (Hope to see you guys xD)
 

TheTrio

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Looking for proofreader to help us fix grammatical mistakes and maybe some sentences in case there is a better way of saying things.
More Play-Tester are also welcome :D

Thanks!
 

xj47

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Probably good if you elaborate a bit more on what the game is about. The premise of "person in debt accepts offer" is pretty common. Also with the name "Baby Project" my first thought was that it's some sort of ABDL thing, but going by the tags it isn't? If not, might also be worth changing the name. Thinking it's ABDL is going to turn a lot of people away.
 

TheTrio

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Hi xj47 , it's definetl not an ABDL related game. The story is about a guy financiall broke that starts selling his sperm to impregnate girls who want to have babies for different reasons. As this is a porn game the imprgnation will mostly result the "natural" way. His voyage to start his business is on this first release.
 
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Mannimarco

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Hit me up if you still need a someone to proof/edit the script. I've got buckets of new free time, and feel like the writing in adult games could use some fresh eyes.
 

elizzyviolet

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Looking for proofreader to help us fix grammatical mistakes and maybe some sentences in case there is a better way of saying things.
More Play-Tester are also welcome :D

Thanks!
I'm interested in the proofreading gig: what kind of rates were you thinking about? I recently did some proofreading work for another client and it went fairly well.

Here's a post with some of my credentials: https://f95zone.to/threads/game-and-erotica-writer-for-hire-with-extensive-experience.106629/

Feel free to reach out through DMs if you're interested!
 

MaXXoR16

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Still looking for proofreaders? If yes count me in :D never translated something but could advise something in german if u like
 

popabear

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I recommend you just publish what you have with a request for feedback. Seems way easier. DM me when it's available and I'll have a look.