[Rev @ Back to Freedom v0.12]
I like it but it has room to improve.
Art's repurposed real porn in a twine presentation; it's fine, the girls aren't hideous.
Writing is a mixed bag; voice is alright and narrative is fine even if it's not unique, but the fluency is iffy and a bit halting.
There's a ton of assplay. I don't care for it. Not enough preg conent.
TLDR: good 'nuff, I'll check back. My gripes are just my usual gripes.
I like it but it has room to improve.
Art's repurposed real porn in a twine presentation; it's fine, the girls aren't hideous.
Writing is a mixed bag; voice is alright and narrative is fine even if it's not unique, but the fluency is iffy and a bit halting.
There's a ton of assplay. I don't care for it. Not enough preg conent.
TLDR: good 'nuff, I'll check back. My gripes are just my usual gripes.