BACK 2 FREEDOM:
(some spoilers)
[reminds me of "Desertstalker" (Renpy)--if you tried that & liked it, you'll like this one, many things in common] [written early on, changes later]
OK to be fair, tried this once (a long time ago?) & gave up on it.
Maybe it was the Ex-con thing---in both stories & RL, Ex-con stories typically don't start *OR* end well.
[people can brand someone for *LIFE*, just b/c of *ONE* mistake!]
Now I'm older, & maybe I understand a little better that *NOBODY* is perfect---not IRL, & not an any realistic story.
I've tried a lot of HTML stuff, & 90% of it is TOTAL CRAP. (another 8% is partial crap..)
This is one of those very *VERY* rare gems of the 2%.
Fair warning (dev mentions this, worth repeating) this is *NOT* like most games, not possible to get all girl or all content in one play-through; As most scenes are worth seeing, gives it longer play-ability (often no "wrong" choice, just different ones)
1ST, what I like:
-- Generally not a fan of real porn clips, but this dev actually does a VERY good job w them: Applicable to the scene being described, decent quality, not obtrusive (you can glance at them & then still continue reading if you wish! )
-- OMG *FAR* far too many these days have some kind of beta M MC who isn't good at anything! [who wants to be a looser?!?]
THIS GUY HAS SOME SKILLS! (common ex-military type--REALISTIC!)
On same note, *REALLY *HATE* devs who force the MC to fight---& then get his ass kicked! [ugh, DELETE!] (HINT DEVS: either NO fighting, or FIGHT & WIN!!!)
-- CHOICES. YES! A dev who understands that choices should MATTER!!! [otherwise, read a book/watch porn; CHOICES MAKE IT INTERESTING!!!] THIS DEV does a very good job with choices---kudos!
-- REALISTIC! So much out there is bad logic/ totally unrealistic BS
-- $$$ (UGH so sick of devs who give MALE MCs almost nothing for $/job, & all you want to do is cheat!) This guy's NOT rich, but, he's not poor either--for a non-college degree job he does pretty good--HINT: has a full time live-in maid (5 days/7)
People act like you can't get a decent job w/o a degree, but that's *NOT* true, you just need skills & this guy is a good example!
--"nice" he doesn't go around being mean & cruel &/or killing people, mostly fair w everybody (or tries, not always possible even IRL) Example, tries to be good to wife & kids (even maid! lol!)
-"Harem"--can have more than 1 girl [don't know why, but *NEVER* seen game where MC can have more than 1 wife! (many many cases in actual RL history...) Too much tradition???]
-- [later]"She still fights her submissive instinct. She doesn't want to do something she considered humiliating all her life but can't help it. In the end, no one can fight their nature."
--Multiple "O"s (hey women have it GOOD!)
-- " You are the bomb itself, Abigail. And you're always about to explode. "---LOL!!! OMG! totally cracked me up!!!
Sidenote: didn't understand the "power fantasy" reference; No superpowers,--He's just a mortal human man, not rich, not some big government leader, He doesn't even own a company or lead a gang! [not 2 D15 yet, but so far seems not applicable]
[I checked & still a lot of char "haven't met" yet, so maybe something will change?]
--Touches on a # of VERY real issues Prison, 4 example: Most who've never been inside, have no idea what a wild EVIL jungle it can be. "the guards were all bought & did nothing to stop it" (sad, but often true!)
-- CONSENSUAL. (No RAPE or SLEEP BS! some teasing about blackmail, but none yet so far..)
[I have never, *EVER* understand why some hate incest, but accept rape; How can that even make sense?!?]
"just a little longer, .. Please.."
Women get mad @ men who don't spend enough time w family, but WOMEN often work too much, & do the SAME THING!
--(also real) Rich kids often run wild & get away w anything b/c parents are too busy don't care, & don't discipline
Sidenote: Current POTUS was about to be indicted for FRAUD when won election! (how's that for "power fantasy"?!?)
-- "There's a difference between lying and not telling the whole truth."---AGREED!!! Many MANY things IRL don't know the full truth about.
REF: BFW: Later on, MC gets choice to REJECT her teases & seduction, & do Right Thing! (Best Friend's Wife!!! )
[so, mistake, but not forced to continue it] + .5*
DID NOT LIKE (**Spoilers**)
--Generally not a fan of cheating, *however*, here it's described an being "open marriage" they can be with others as long as their meeting their own needs 1st. [husband meets wife's needs 1st, wife meets his needs 1st, my paraphrase]
HOWEVER, player should always have *OPTION* who MC messes around with. (maybe it's the dev's power fantasy, not the MC?)
Example: His best friend (M) is married & has a hot wife, & she basically seduces him. (NO OPTION TO SAY NO!)
Even if you're ok w the "open marriage thing" this is his *CLOSE FRIEND* & they're MARRIED!!
[totally wrong, but again, no option] -1*
REF: *BFW.
--dev uses "PERV" way too much! UGH! [if you're trying on clothes at the store, you want to see how the back looks! are you perving yourself?!? UGH.] Dildo, sex toys, cam shows, women are the *REAL* perverts! lol!
Besides, it's *NOT* 1-sided, the women want it as much as he does! (often MORE, but again, nobody call them PERVERTS, even when they are...) EITHER give it back (name calling) or, don't allow it at all. [EXTREMELY disrespectful!! Many parents/bosses/teachers/etc would NOT allow that IRL! ]
BOSS: "Blanche: You deserve a reward, .... And to be honest, I'm tired of fighting my feelings. I want this. Please don't deny me. "
--Massage/lotion: Only allows 1 option, should be allowed to do multiple areas, more realistic, & hey, you need SUNSCREEN EVERYWHERE! [no, not a PERV thing, if women get wet from a good massage, don't blame the man!]
--says "sorry" too much (NOT possible to please everybody, not our reason in life, have to pick & choose how we spend our time & energy, JUST as IRL!!)
--NURSE. (1 more w the "NO OPTION")
--ATTACK: SHOULD'VE GIVEN MC OPTION TO BE HONEST W FAMILY! (they'll want answers if he's gone or DIES etc...)
--MOB BOSS: Very bad situation, many bad/illegal things could happen [where's the "power fantasy"?! MC POWERLESS here!]
[was going to submit here, but now think should wait to see how ends...]
--Wish there was more choices; Good early on, but then start to get forced into situations & people. (ie, no choice)
--UGH. (what did I say about CHOICES?!?) -->> the bosses' daughter?!? UGH! so WRONG & SO STUPID!!! [good way to get fired or accused of RAPE!!!]
-->> Given mob situation, should've used $$$ to get BULLETPROOF VEST! (no good to anybody DEAD!)
--Can discipline boss daughter, but NO OPTION (again) to discipline own kids when misbehave
--UGH. Take back what I said early on, there *ARE* mini-games!
(MC is supposed to be the expert, *NOT* player!!) NO WAY TO SKIP! :-( [some are ok, but some are difficult]
--ANAL should *ALWAYS* be a choice, not everybody is into that
--way way ***WAY*** too nice to people that are mean/rude to him! [includes women]
--Brenna: (TOTAL BITCH COP!) SHE treats him like dirt; HE needs to give back what she's shoveling!!! [THIS is a "POWER FANTASY?!?" I DON'T THINK SO!!! ] (FEW OPTIONS & THEY ALL SUCK!)
--Spends more time & $ on other girls, than his OWN DAUGHTERS! [FORCED!]
Kelsi: [FINAL EXAMPLE] Dev **FORCES** MC into relationship w her, even though she's engaged! [if it's a "power fantasy," it's the dev's/creator's fantasy, NOT the player!] NOT ENOUGH CHOICES!!!
Dev knows *NOTHING* about girls that have been through trama (like almost raped!) LAST thing girl like that wants to do is get sexual w someone else... [but again, NO OPTIONS!!! ] {Hint: They need LOVE & AFFECTION, NOT SEX!}
Most of early part, 4*; but there's a *LOT* of negative (see above) in fact, even if it were possible IRL, many *FORCED* choices could be VERY VERY BAD! [wind up dead/in prison/accused of date rape/etc]
3* [I pushed it, & went to D20;]
Could've been 4+* if written better, & player allowed to make better choices.
(some spoilers)
[reminds me of "Desertstalker" (Renpy)--if you tried that & liked it, you'll like this one, many things in common] [written early on, changes later]
OK to be fair, tried this once (a long time ago?) & gave up on it.
Maybe it was the Ex-con thing---in both stories & RL, Ex-con stories typically don't start *OR* end well.
[people can brand someone for *LIFE*, just b/c of *ONE* mistake!]
Now I'm older, & maybe I understand a little better that *NOBODY* is perfect---not IRL, & not an any realistic story.
I've tried a lot of HTML stuff, & 90% of it is TOTAL CRAP. (another 8% is partial crap..)
This is one of those very *VERY* rare gems of the 2%.
Fair warning (dev mentions this, worth repeating) this is *NOT* like most games, not possible to get all girl or all content in one play-through; As most scenes are worth seeing, gives it longer play-ability (often no "wrong" choice, just different ones)
1ST, what I like:
-- Generally not a fan of real porn clips, but this dev actually does a VERY good job w them: Applicable to the scene being described, decent quality, not obtrusive (you can glance at them & then still continue reading if you wish! )
-- OMG *FAR* far too many these days have some kind of beta M MC who isn't good at anything! [who wants to be a looser?!?]
THIS GUY HAS SOME SKILLS! (common ex-military type--REALISTIC!)
On same note, *REALLY *HATE* devs who force the MC to fight---& then get his ass kicked! [ugh, DELETE!] (HINT DEVS: either NO fighting, or FIGHT & WIN!!!)
-- CHOICES. YES! A dev who understands that choices should MATTER!!! [otherwise, read a book/watch porn; CHOICES MAKE IT INTERESTING!!!] THIS DEV does a very good job with choices---kudos!
-- REALISTIC! So much out there is bad logic/ totally unrealistic BS
-- $$$ (UGH so sick of devs who give MALE MCs almost nothing for $/job, & all you want to do is cheat!) This guy's NOT rich, but, he's not poor either--for a non-college degree job he does pretty good--HINT: has a full time live-in maid (5 days/7)
People act like you can't get a decent job w/o a degree, but that's *NOT* true, you just need skills & this guy is a good example!
--"nice" he doesn't go around being mean & cruel &/or killing people, mostly fair w everybody (or tries, not always possible even IRL) Example, tries to be good to wife & kids (even maid! lol!)
-"Harem"--can have more than 1 girl [don't know why, but *NEVER* seen game where MC can have more than 1 wife! (many many cases in actual RL history...) Too much tradition???]
-- [later]"She still fights her submissive instinct. She doesn't want to do something she considered humiliating all her life but can't help it. In the end, no one can fight their nature."
--Multiple "O"s (hey women have it GOOD!)
-- " You are the bomb itself, Abigail. And you're always about to explode. "---LOL!!! OMG! totally cracked me up!!!
Sidenote: didn't understand the "power fantasy" reference; No superpowers,--He's just a mortal human man, not rich, not some big government leader, He doesn't even own a company or lead a gang! [not 2 D15 yet, but so far seems not applicable]
[I checked & still a lot of char "haven't met" yet, so maybe something will change?]
--Touches on a # of VERY real issues Prison, 4 example: Most who've never been inside, have no idea what a wild EVIL jungle it can be. "the guards were all bought & did nothing to stop it" (sad, but often true!)
-- CONSENSUAL. (No RAPE or SLEEP BS! some teasing about blackmail, but none yet so far..)
[I have never, *EVER* understand why some hate incest, but accept rape; How can that even make sense?!?]
"just a little longer, .. Please.."
Women get mad @ men who don't spend enough time w family, but WOMEN often work too much, & do the SAME THING!
--(also real) Rich kids often run wild & get away w anything b/c parents are too busy don't care, & don't discipline
Sidenote: Current POTUS was about to be indicted for FRAUD when won election! (how's that for "power fantasy"?!?)
-- "There's a difference between lying and not telling the whole truth."---AGREED!!! Many MANY things IRL don't know the full truth about.
REF: BFW: Later on, MC gets choice to REJECT her teases & seduction, & do Right Thing! (Best Friend's Wife!!! )
[so, mistake, but not forced to continue it] + .5*
DID NOT LIKE (**Spoilers**)
--Generally not a fan of cheating, *however*, here it's described an being "open marriage" they can be with others as long as their meeting their own needs 1st. [husband meets wife's needs 1st, wife meets his needs 1st, my paraphrase]
HOWEVER, player should always have *OPTION* who MC messes around with. (maybe it's the dev's power fantasy, not the MC?)
Example: His best friend (M) is married & has a hot wife, & she basically seduces him. (NO OPTION TO SAY NO!)
Even if you're ok w the "open marriage thing" this is his *CLOSE FRIEND* & they're MARRIED!!
[totally wrong, but again, no option] -1*
REF: *BFW.
--dev uses "PERV" way too much! UGH! [if you're trying on clothes at the store, you want to see how the back looks! are you perving yourself?!? UGH.] Dildo, sex toys, cam shows, women are the *REAL* perverts! lol!
Besides, it's *NOT* 1-sided, the women want it as much as he does! (often MORE, but again, nobody call them PERVERTS, even when they are...) EITHER give it back (name calling) or, don't allow it at all. [EXTREMELY disrespectful!! Many parents/bosses/teachers/etc would NOT allow that IRL! ]
BOSS: "Blanche: You deserve a reward, .... And to be honest, I'm tired of fighting my feelings. I want this. Please don't deny me. "
--Massage/lotion: Only allows 1 option, should be allowed to do multiple areas, more realistic, & hey, you need SUNSCREEN EVERYWHERE! [no, not a PERV thing, if women get wet from a good massage, don't blame the man!]
--says "sorry" too much (NOT possible to please everybody, not our reason in life, have to pick & choose how we spend our time & energy, JUST as IRL!!)
--NURSE. (1 more w the "NO OPTION")
--ATTACK: SHOULD'VE GIVEN MC OPTION TO BE HONEST W FAMILY! (they'll want answers if he's gone or DIES etc...)
--MOB BOSS: Very bad situation, many bad/illegal things could happen [where's the "power fantasy"?! MC POWERLESS here!]
[was going to submit here, but now think should wait to see how ends...]
--Wish there was more choices; Good early on, but then start to get forced into situations & people. (ie, no choice)
--UGH. (what did I say about CHOICES?!?) -->> the bosses' daughter?!? UGH! so WRONG & SO STUPID!!! [good way to get fired or accused of RAPE!!!]
-->> Given mob situation, should've used $$$ to get BULLETPROOF VEST! (no good to anybody DEAD!)
--Can discipline boss daughter, but NO OPTION (again) to discipline own kids when misbehave
--UGH. Take back what I said early on, there *ARE* mini-games!
(MC is supposed to be the expert, *NOT* player!!) NO WAY TO SKIP! :-( [some are ok, but some are difficult]
--ANAL should *ALWAYS* be a choice, not everybody is into that
--way way ***WAY*** too nice to people that are mean/rude to him! [includes women]
--Brenna: (TOTAL BITCH COP!) SHE treats him like dirt; HE needs to give back what she's shoveling!!! [THIS is a "POWER FANTASY?!?" I DON'T THINK SO!!! ] (FEW OPTIONS & THEY ALL SUCK!)
--Spends more time & $ on other girls, than his OWN DAUGHTERS! [FORCED!]
Kelsi: [FINAL EXAMPLE] Dev **FORCES** MC into relationship w her, even though she's engaged! [if it's a "power fantasy," it's the dev's/creator's fantasy, NOT the player!] NOT ENOUGH CHOICES!!!
Dev knows *NOTHING* about girls that have been through trama (like almost raped!) LAST thing girl like that wants to do is get sexual w someone else... [but again, NO OPTIONS!!! ] {Hint: They need LOVE & AFFECTION, NOT SEX!}
Most of early part, 4*; but there's a *LOT* of negative (see above) in fact, even if it were possible IRL, many *FORCED* choices could be VERY VERY BAD! [wind up dead/in prison/accused of date rape/etc]
3* [I pushed it, & went to D20;]
Could've been 4+* if written better, & player allowed to make better choices.