This game is quite bad at the moment. The renders are OK, not great but not bad either, but the writing is terrible. I mean that on three different levels:
1. The engrish is strong with this one. I know not everyone speaks English as a first language, but if you decide to create a game in English you should have minimal standards, at least to make sure your text is comprehensible.
2. On a microscopic level, the writing is awful. Things like whenever a character enters a room, a text line appears that says "someone enters room" or something like that. If you choose a bad option you get a game over, and I don't mean something happens in the plot which makes you lose. I mean you click, and immediately after you get a "game over" screen. No explanation, no resolution. You're just left to imagine what happened (usually it's quite trivial but still).
3. The writing is equally awful on a macro level. The characters and their actions make no sense. The main character wakes up with an old homeless dude hugging him, and literally seconds later they are already friends and give each other money (you'd imagine a homeless person would be very careful and protective of his money, but no). The main character has two daughters whose names he doesn't know. One of them was still in their mother's womb when he was incarcerated, so OK. What about the other one? She was born before he went to jail. How come he doesn't know her name? This is some crazy shit.
This is definitely a 1-star game. I gave it 2 out of hope the creator would improve over time and will fulfill any potential he might have. I tried not be the asshole who bitches about how bad the game is, but it's quite hard in this case.
