Ren'Py BangCity [v0.14a] [BangCityDev]

[brittC25]

Well good game so far, it has a few issues that need sorting though.

The artwork on the MC and the girls is great.

The story arc is unfolding how I assumed it would, which is a good thing, slow is good, the MC has to prove himself to "The Bitches" and the way he goes about it is the right way, slow is good, slowly work through each one and get them all dependent on the MC solely, then in return they will all end up in his bedroom cage eventually as his hareem, along with his Mom, and the 3 girls I`m guessing who live upstairs and many other girls he encounter`s along the way as his confidence grows.

The game has a few minor issues, I encountered the Ren`py error screen twice, then went back, started again, and never encountered it again, so, maybe a full test needs doing for bugs.

The general story is good, but, the story has issue`s in the English speliing, and English Grammer also.

The Dev needs to get a natural English speaker to proof read the entire story and to correct both, all English spelling mistakes and all English grammer mistakes, once they are sorted the story added to the Artwork, could make this a great game in reality.

Ask someone You know who is a natural English speaker for help, or, ask a natural English speaker from this forum for help with an entire proof read for spelling mistakes and for grammer mistakes also.

Good game so far, needs work to become a great game.

 

[WINTEX]

Ok, got to the "date" part. Mmm. . . Ok, at least i was prepared. Not the best choice, but. . . Still wondering why not to make "bad" date, with her returning crying or sth. "Fucked all night, still can't walk right" is not something you expect or want to hear from a mother. For Landlady no problem, but come on, we all know for what we came here for.
But returning to the reason why i started this comment, i think the script has a typo:

Cause the weekday is Saturday, not Friday. I made everything according to walkthrough, so its not possible that i made it one day later. Well, i think so.
And for fuck sake, why the date theme keeps going and going and going. Come on, i heared it once, i dont want to talk about it in living room, with such detailes! Please tell me he will ask his gang co-leader friend to break legs of that porn actor. Pretty please.

 

[ThunderRob]

sighh..fresh install..started new game..still gets to the damn loop..beginning after this error...

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makes the game unplayable

 

[isiomar]

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Overview:
BangCity is a rundown place ruled by gangsters and corrupt politicians! The hero of this game is Babyface! Grown up among criminals he decided to go his own way after the gang was busted. Now he has to build up a new life and starting his revenge against all who did hurt him!

MC has to gain control over the gangster's wives and needs to get closer to his Landlady, Valerie!​

Thread Updated: 2019-08-18
Release Date: 2019-08-03
Developer: BangCityDev

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Censored: No
Version: 0.02
OS: Windows, Linux
Language: English

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Copy it into your game folder "BangCity-0.02-pc\game\"

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I miss some Image in the game folder nh_bathroompeek_7 and 8, 9, 10

 

[bauchnabel]

I miss some Image in the game folder nh_bathroompeek_7 and 8, 9, 10

nh_bathroompeek_7 is provided in downloadfiles, 8, 9, 10 are not existing, and they are not linked in the script

 

[bauchnabel]

sighh..fresh install..started new game..still gets to the damn loop..beginning after this error...

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makes the game unplayable

Send me a savegame via pm and i will lokk at it, but i think there are missing files in your installation. I am using exact the same files as in provide as download and it works fine

 

[Sammiewammie231]

saturday night in week 2 is glitched. went to the hideout to give gina clothes and do next photoshoot. but she was not in the room when it said she was. then on sunday when i tried to check the porn site it did not give me the option to. just watch porn or turn off computer. can we patch this pls?

 

[Mormont]

Maybe there will be an option to avoid this "crossover affair" in a much later version. There will be an option to enable/avoid some fetishes, because i want to do some stuff but i don't want to force anyone to see all of it!

Thing is I was really enjoying the game up until that point and it's a shame about that part but it's just not for me I'd have loved the idea if we could actually take her out on a date instead like a getting to know each other better and maybe things develop with each other from there.

 

[voodeuxthatyoudo]

I haven't downloaded the new patch but from the images does it seem like the women have lost a few pounds?

 

[Ozygator]

I always support a developer's right to tell whatever story they want to tell. What I don't understand is when a developer wants to make money why they make some of the choices they make. This game does not have an NTR tag. The developer said himself in a post that he does not like NTR but might be open to it with the gang women. So for right now he is not attracting the NTR segment of the F95zone community. Now I don't want to get into a debate on what constitutes NTR, but he has the Mom/Landlady in a sexual relationship with another man. I stopped playing the game when she came home from her date. This may not technically be NTR, but it drives off another segment of the target population (and from posts from other games, it seems like a very large portion.) He said in a post that later another character will be introduced that will not be in another relationship. I believe that many will have already quit the game by the time he gets to that point. Another game had a similar situation that the developers did not initially address and is now in hiatus while the entire story gets reworked. To be honest that story had more going for it than this one, but it made the critical mistake of showing the sex scene between the possible love interest and the other man. My suggestion to BangCityGuy is that if your goal is to make money, remove Mom's/Landlady's booty call (it's not even her boyfriend) or go full NTR. If money is not a concern, stick to whatever story you want to tell.

Or, the limp types who can't stand the idea of any women in a story being involved with any other guy could just grow up a bit?

Damn, I remember when I first came to F95 and the most fun games where when the MC TOOK women who were in another relationship away from the men they were involved with. That's drama, that's domination through charisma, persuasiveness or just being better than some other dude.

Now we have an entire whiny population that complains if, jeebus-forbid, they have ANY sort of competition they have to deal with, even if they will be the one dominating other male characters by 'taking' their women! No wonder IRL women today can't stand many of the guys if they are as weak-willed and whiny as the population of the F95 group is.

Do I want 'forced' NTR where, even if I as the player do everything 'right' it still happens? Not really, but a lot of the fun in the earlier games, which is missing in a lot of the current crop, has no real 'win' situation of the MC just completely taking over against other male characters regardless of what these other characters do. I think there is an even larger population of male players who enjoy the 'taking women away' aspect than the whiney ones who stink up every GD thread that has something they don't like.

 

[Ozygator]

Mom comes home and said "we fucked all night! I still can't walk right!" This game is dead to me.

So that ruined it for you? Not the fact that the MC is living in a basement that had dog shit and coal dust (the stuff that gives you lung cancer over time) all over it and all he did was slap up some paint, paneling for the stairs and a new floor? On top of all the toxic (literal) shit and stuff that had been in that area for probably 20+ years?

How about bleaching down that shit and deconning the entire area first, and then remodel?

 

[DD0]

I like this game and i just don't understand why. It has the cardinal sin of "open world" elements and locations that are completely empty. The story is totally linear. Most of the locations just don't need to be there and can't be visited except at certain times. You'll do plenty of time skipping as well.
And yet...I still enjoyed it. It doesn't even have animations, which I've seen as a throwback to the past and an automatic demerit since last year.
There is just something about the flimsy plot that I find shamefully appealing. I'm all in. Will eagerly await the next installment. Unpatched version highly recommended.

P.S. I know some people will be put off by the fact that the landlady has a preexisting relationship. I think it's silly to call that sort of thing "NTR" or "cuck" or whatever stupid thing. It actually makes it realistic, as do the women's early reactions to an MC who they have witnessed being a punching bag all his life.

 

[ptahn]

Or, the limp types who can't stand the idea of any women in a story being involved with any other guy could just grow up a bit?

Damn, I remember when I first came to F95 and the most fun games where when the MC TOOK women who were in another relationship away from the men they were involved with. That's drama, that's domination through charisma, persuasiveness or just being better than some other dude.

Now we have an entire whiny population that complains if, jeebus-forbid, they have ANY sort of competition they have to deal with, even if they will be the one dominating other male characters by 'taking' their women! No wonder IRL women today can't stand many of the guys if they are as weak-willed and whiny as the population of the F95 group is.

Do I want 'forced' NTR where, even if I as the player do everything 'right' it still happens? Not really, but a lot of the fun in the earlier games, which is missing in a lot of the current crop, has no real 'win' situation of the MC just completely taking over against other male characters regardless of what these other characters do. I think there is an even larger population of male players who enjoy the 'taking women away' aspect than the whiney ones who stink up every GD thread that has something they don't like.

I don't mind there being competition for the affections of a love interest. There are stories that I enjoy where the choices the player makes can allow or prevent NTR. Here your Mother/Landlady starts out as the sex buddy of a porn star. There was no chance to win her first, no chance to "do everything 'right'". You could be right that there is a silent majority who likes to steal a woman away from a man with whom she is in a sexual relationship. I have just seen in posts for this and other threads more negative comments than positive. This is fantasy and not real life. I did not complain about one of the gang wives out soliciting. I just would have preferred if Val had been more "innocent." I am just making comments that I hope will make the developer more successful. As always the more developers providing stories and games the better for us all.

 

[ptahn]

So that ruined it for you? Not the fact that the MC is living in a basement that had dog shit and coal dust (the stuff that gives you lung cancer over time) all over it and all he did was slap up some paint, paneling for the stairs and a new floor? On top of all the toxic (literal) shit and stuff that had been in that area for probably 20+ years?

How about bleaching down that shit and deconning the entire area first, and then remodel?

You're right, that never entered my mind.

 

[ptahn]

She's not mom though and was never supposed to be. She's an ex-social worker that knew the MC as kid before MC's dad chased her away and now has a life of her own. Now if you use an unofficial patch to make her your mom and get all bent out of shape for it, then you of course have that right, but you can hardly blame the dev for that.

Mom or landlady or old friend, she's the foil for the "corrupt" gangster wives. At this point in the game she seems to be the love interest while the others could be called the lust interests. I just would have preferred if my love interest was not already the lust interest for a porn star.

 

[Ozygator]

Mom or landlady or old friend, she's the foil for the "corrupt" gangster wives. At this point in the game she seems to be the love interest while the others could be called the lust interests. I just would have preferred if my love interest was not already the lust interest for a porn star.

I went back and replayed the part of the game that you, and a few others complained about, and I think most of the complaints are doing the "missing the forest for the trees" aspect of things.

By having Val having her weekly fling with her young, porn guy friend, she's showing that she is very open minded about sex and sexuality. First she likes young guys, a big check mark for these games, secondly, she'd actively helping the MC with his sexual prowess (via the meds online) to make sure he's having fun. She saw him naked and didn't react with shock, horror, surprise or anything just a big smile and cheeky response to herself about it. Add this to her initial comments about him being hot before she knew who he was and we have a solid foundation for potential hanky-panky later on.

Since she did not grow up with the MC, combined with her very open approach to sex and having fun, if/when something did go on with the MC it would be a LOT more 'believable' than the vast majority of other stories on this site that have any sort of mom-son relationship developing.

So to me, her having this open mind and "no big deal" approach to sex is vital to the story. I know some are so hung up on the fact that any female character has ANY relationship other than the MC that they can't look long term at the potential, but I really think that is a short sighted attitude with this type story. You say there was no chance to prevent it, or take her away, etc, but you do realize that we're only in week two of the game time frame? She's had her own life for decades before the MC came back into the picture including 3 years since her husband died, I think a few more weeks as things slowlyheat up would open a lot of opportunities to do exactly what you claim is a limitation of the game, i.e. instance gratification from the insecure player base. (Probably a lot of those players got the 'participation trophies' as kids for just showing up and breathing on any team event. )

 

[Ozygator]

That is quite common opinion. The current situation doesn't add anything to the story, it's only cause a nausea to players. I respect dev's who makes games just how they like, but sometimes it's better if they could change some little details of the game. I think that scene would be better if Val just go drinking with frieds and thats why she cannot walk straight

Yeah, read my reply above and your complaint would gut the story and some of the actual personality and freedom that Val has if she wasn't open minded about sex. if a virtual character makes you nauseaous because she has a fling and not even involved with the MC of the story yet you might want to turn off the PC and engage with some real folks for awhile to get a better center on things. Not an insult, just it's a game man, not a real romance someone is involved with and been cheated on (been ther had that happen to me, and yeah it sucks) worst case scenario is you ignore the thread, turn off any Patreon you may have and move on. Dev's make the games they make, if they are good they'll survive and thrive, without wankers all demanding a dev change his/her game so they like their FREE/PIRATED version better.

 

[ptahn]

I went back and replayed the part of the game that you, and a few others complained about, and I think most of the complaints are doing the "missing the forest for the trees" aspect of things.

By having Val having her weekly fling with her young, porn guy friend, she's showing that she is very open minded about sex and sexuality. First she likes young guys, a big check mark for these games, secondly, she'd actively helping the MC with his sexual prowess (via the meds online) to make sure he's having fun. She saw him naked and didn't react with shock, horror, surprise or anything just a big smile and cheeky response to herself about it. Add this to her initial comments about him being hot before she knew who he was and we have a solid foundation for potential hanky-panky later on.

Since she did not grow up with the MC, combined with her very open approach to sex and having fun, if/when something did go on with the MC it would be a LOT more 'believable' than the vast majority of other stories on this site that have any sort of mom-son relationship developing.

So to me, her having this open mind and "no big deal" approach to sex is vital to the story. I know some are so hung up on the fact that any female character has ANY relationship other than the MC that they can't look long term at the potential, but I really think that is a short sighted attitude with this type story. You say there was no chance to prevent it, or take her away, etc, but you do realize that we're only in week two of the game time frame? She's had her own life for decades before the MC came back into the picture including 3 years since her husband died, I think a few more weeks as things slowlyheat up would open a lot of opportunities to do exactly what you claim is a limitation of the game, i.e. instance gratification from the insecure player base. (Probably a lot of those players got the 'participation trophies' as kids for just showing up and breathing on any team event. )

Well, with the possible exception of the last two sentences, a much more restrained response. I am just talking about preferences with an adult fantasy game. You are arguing why players like me should have different likes and dislikes. You might as well argue that someone's favorite color should be blue instead of red. It's a story about a kid creating a porn empire by coercing a group of gangster wives into appearing in adult movies, I am not particularly interested in whether or not the developer lays enough psychological groundwork to justify an incestuous relationship. I provide my opinion, others provide theirs, the developer is free to go from there. You like the way the story is written so far, I am not going to try to argue that you are wrong. You like what you like, I like what I like. You said earlier that you are not a fan of forced NTR. Do you think that someone could make a logical case where suddenly you say, "I was wrong, forced NTR is awesome?"

 

[IFF01]

I had problems at the end I was not able to see the pictures i put on the porn site, I was also unable to complete the tasks at the hide out it showed gina in her room but when i entered she was not there and i could not go to linda in the kitchen it told me to see gina first. and on some of the other comments. The land lady is not his mother if you read the story she told him his mother died of an over dose two years earlier, but other then those items I am enjoying the game/story

 

[Cornfield]

Thanks for the help, but it did not work.
I still have the outside scene , plus the texts from Linda and I am supposed to be going to the living room to eat pizza with my mother, but I cannot leave the outside scene.

I restarted this game and have the same problem, even a completely fresh download did not make any difference.
I will leave this game and perhaps try it later when some of the bugs have been sorted.