jsbb9999

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ugh i missed a whole bunch of stuff
- can't upload photos to the website
- can't open bank account
- can't buy gina her new clothes
- photoshoot with gina after the new clothes
- photoshoot with linda and the bitches
- photoshoot with linda titjob
- val masturbating
- val bathroom peeks

i dont think the coding is finished + there are some messed-up var adding (which lead to the scenes), and some unlink events.
i hope all these get fixed @ next version, and hopefully we dont have to replay (due to some Day specific events)

... and why is there a "vaginal sex" tag? i dont see it, did i miss it?
also i couldn't get to the titjob without modifying the var manually, so in theory that should not be listed in the tag as well for now?
 
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Deadlyreaper

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So the game is now unplayable an error message makes the next play completely impossible I have the bitches supplied after I was at dwayne and then I get the stupid error message land then at home and can not do anything when I click on livingroom then comes again and again same sms loop and i can not go to the city not in another room besides missing some places

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Mormont

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Not an insult, just it's a game man,
No now see I hate this argument so much yes we know it's a game but we wouldn't except it in real life why should we except it in a game, I don't actually understand what the problem is here for some of us hearing about what she got up to is not our thing and besides that it just gets sprung on us and we have to accept it since we have met the landlady she has been nothing but kind to us and of course all the thoughts we have been having about her checking her out and everything it's hard not to get attached.
 

bauchnabel

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The land lady is not his mother if you read the story she told him his mother died of an over dose two years earlier, but other then those items I am enjoying the game/story
The incestpatch does not only change relationship, it also changes some dialogues to give them a different context!
 
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BangCityGuy

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I made a little fix! See first post, please.
This should solve some problems that occured so far.
Use a save before the problems happen or restart game and skip scenes with "TAB"
 

BangCityGuy

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.... they will all end up in his bedroom cage eventually as his hareem ...
-> I don't think this will happen, it's more likely that cage will be moved to the hideaway :) But i am not sure about this right now
.... I encountered the Ren`py error screen twice, .... test needs doing for bugs.
-> Indeed, there are some bugs, even i tested the game many times before, i amwmorking on it

... the Dev needs to get a natural English speaker to proof read the entire story
--> Yes, and there is some more stuff for what i want to hire some help, but not now, first i must earn some money, to pay for help :)
 
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BangCityGuy

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Thing is I was really enjoying the game up until that point and it's a shame about that part but it's just not for me I'd have loved the idea if we could actually take her out on a date instead like a getting to know each other better and maybe things develop with each other from there.
The time will come MC is taking her out for a date .... After a while
 

BangCityGuy

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So that ruined it for you? Not the fact that the MC is living in a basement that had dog shit and coal dust (the stuff that gives you lung cancer over time) all over it and all he did was slap up some paint, paneling for the stairs and a new floor? On top of all the toxic (literal) shit and stuff that had been in that area for probably 20+ years?

How about bleaching down that shit and deconning the entire area first, and then remodel? :D

Good point, i did not think about that issue. Maybe i will rewrite some lines to make that basement less toxic. Babyface has to do some stuff and it can't be he dies before he is done :)
 

ptahn

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The time will come MC is taking her out for a date .... After a while
I think what you are missing is that for some of us, (and I can't stress this enough) NOT ALL OF US, it's the relationship with the porn star that is the problem. The opportunity to go out on a date with her later would not fix that problem. It's not reality, it's the fantasy that there's this sweet innocent woman who is all mine which would have been a great contrast to the other women in your story. At this point don't change anything. Just realize that some people will not like your story because of it; others will. When some one posts that they did not like that aspect of your story, there is no real point to posting that future events might make that plot point more palatable.
 

ptahn

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Good point, i did not think about that issue. Maybe i will rewrite some lines to make that basement less toxic. Babyface has to do some stuff and it can't be he dies before he is done :)
I love that this is the issue that you are willing to address.
 

Arassei

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Some words about Valeries Affair:
I see that there are people who don't want her to have an affair, but that affair is an important point in this game. But i don't want to tell more about this right now, i have my reason. All i can say, this is not my first project in f95-zone and this affair is a little "crossover".
This affair Valerie is having will have an (small) influence towards Babyface and helps him. There are already some hints given in the game.

Valerie is an adult woman and not a virgin of course, but having an affair makes her not a whore. But she also is not supposed to be a socks knitting wallflower. (Hope this is correct english :) )
She's got a past. She is a victim of a fraud, in her younger years MC's Dad threatened her, and there is not everything told about her, of course, and even about the MC's past is not everything told!
Of i could tell every background information at the beginning of the game, but i prefer to do it step by step.


Maybe there will be an option to avoid this "crossover affair" in a much later version. There will be an option to enable/avoid some fetishes, because i want to do some stuff but i don't want to force anyone to see all of it!
I remember warned you on patreon with Valerie, you will loose players with that affair with a porn star.
You can explain it's important for the story and all but it's not about the story, it's about player's psychology. If this psychology is "injured", the player will drop the game, even if the rest of the story could get an award.
Make it " avoidable " in the futures updates won't fix absolutly nothing, because even if it's a choice, it's a part of the whole game.
 

ProofreadingRUS

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I liked the story usually I just click through the games if they are boring but not this one.
I read almost everything the walkthrouh helped somewhat.
At the end it said something about 3rd week.
The walkthrouh got stuck on the 1st week must be a bug.
I may have to repeat the game form the start.
There are little or no choices everything is already decided just click and thats it.
So there are no paths to take or different endings not that I saw any.
It has a good story and I didnt mind all the misspellings I just used my imagination.
Correcting all that just takes time away from the next release.
Hope to see more soon. When is the next update?
 

lordofhirunds

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It is not possible to enter the living room when the mother is there,
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but is possible to come inside, only when mom is not here
 
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BangCityGuy

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ugh i missed a whole bunch of stuff
- can't upload photos to the website
- can't open bank account
- can't buy gina her new clothes
- photoshoot with gina after the new clothes
- photoshoot with linda and the bitches
- photoshoot with linda titjob
- val masturbating
- val bathroom peeks

i dont think the coding is finished + there are some messed-up var adding (which lead to the scenes), and some unlink events.
i hope all these get fixed @ next version, and hopefully we dont have to replay (due to some Day specific events)

... and why is there a "vaginal sex" tag? i dont see it, did i miss it?
also i couldn't get to the titjob without modifying the var manually, so in theory that should not be listed in the tag as well for now?
Well everything you missed can be seen, you just did not play "the golden way".
I see, I have to change some game mechanics because it is possible to miss some scenes.
I can't promise it will be changed with the next version and
for sure after the rework of the gamemechanic, a new start is needed.
I'll try to find a proper way so the story will not be torn appart, because some events stick together.

The tags i did make tells what is planed so far, and there will be even more in future.
I hope i can publich week 3 in about 2 weeks.
 
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