VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Bare Witness [Steam Build] [AlterWorlds]

The MC is treated by all the female characters as a global sex symbol celebrity, coupled with his giant magic dick, there's no way every woman he meets won't instantly fall in love. Shitties concept ever in a AVN if you have at least half of your brain functional. Nice renders, animations, and plot, all shadowed by this ridiculous, glorified loser MC that is a woman's desire in a parallel reality dreammed only by losers.

A great story full of beautiful girls. the scenes are very well done and there are a number of different endings depending on player choices think i have replayed this at least 4 times and I still enjoy it.

Despite somehow weird children models, on my personal opinion, this game is one of the best on this site.
P.S. I wish MC could meet his mother in one of the endings though. And its a pity there is no more content or ending for Nicole.

A very good and fascinating story, a choice of up to four girlfriends out of a total of seven, sixty-one different endings, some of them very touching, which really made me feel. For now, one of my favorite stories I've read. Very good renderings. I recommend!

A very enjoyable VN that knows its characters and keeps them both consistent and believable, barring the initial suspension of disbelief required for these types of scenarios obviously.

I enjoyed all the interactions, and each character brought something different to the table, or the relationship depending on how you played. I wish I had a rating between Good and Excellent, because it is most definitely better than just "good", although I can't give it a full 5 stars mostly because some of the relationship decisions that determined routing were a little strange. Easier to lock yourself out of a route by accident than I think should be possible in a game where that's the main draw, and really who wants to start something over if you saved in the wrong spot and realize you locked yourself out by accident since you weren't following a walkthrough at the same time you were enjoying the narrative? But that is a very minor complaint, and one that is handily solved with some help from the community, but still something to consider.

I hope they do more and expand even farther with any future projects, will definitely be picking this up officially.

It's cheesy, predictable, unrealistically happy and falls into certain patterns. However, it kind of fit and didn't pull me out of the experience. So despite these flaws, I found it fun to play, occasionally actually funny, and pretty sexy overall.

Render quality is pretty good. Girls are quite different body wise, although I wish Sadie didn't lose most of her weight.

I think it works in the end, as the story moves on quickly.

One of my most conflicted 5 star ratings. There is so much that can be improved, but in the end it's clearly a labour of love, that I ended up enjoying a lot despite all its flaws. I'm looking forward to see how the dev will improve.

Realistically, this game is a 3.5 out of 5 overall. The story is passable, the LIs are likeable, and the renders are overall on the above average side. That said, however, the fact that this game is actually complete with multiple (11 I think?) endings puts it a bit higher for me. It's not too long and there's variety available. Although there are better alternatives, it's worth looking at this one.

Story:

First off, I have to say that this is one of the best story novel I have played. The story is written well, the characters are fun and engaging, and how the story was narrated is simply superb. There are quite a few laughable jokes, funny and wholesome moments, emotional scenes that might put you into tears, I just can't give enough praise that it deserves. The length of the story itself isn't very long but the the amount of branches or paths it has to offer and over 10 different endings really made up for it.

Deep-diving into the branches of the story, it was really well done. I really enjoyed exploring each one of them. Each L.I. has her own path, backstory, and respective ending, and if you play it right, it is also possible to end up with multiple women. I also liked that they also have L.I. that are 'exclusive,' where she isn't the type to share her man with other girls. I personally enjoyed being on a single path rather than multiple directions for a throuple/harem. Perhaps it's just me, but I feel like spending time with them individually rather than in a group is much nicer and more romantic.

One issue that I personally have with the story is the pacing. There are times that I think the story progresses a little fast, like in a college for example. I wish they put a little more work with this part, showing the MC spends a more time in college like hanging out with friends or have more interactions with his girls. Speaking of girls, I think they fell in love with the MC way to quickly as well regardless of whom you're with. I wish they could have developed the relationship a little steady pacing. For instance, you got to bang your girl after your first date at a nightclub for passing the 'test'.

As for the endings, it was really well-executed, some might find it a little too long, but for me, it was simply rich and beautiful. I have yet to experience all the climaxes but after experienced the endings with girls of my interest, I can say it was simply masterpiece. They really put a lot of work to the endings of the game, there are ones that was simply dream-like, ones that were emotional, and ones that were wholesome and fulfilling.

Characters:

The characters in the games are all great and special in their own way. They are all different not just from their look, but their trait, personality, quality, and the devs really nailed on how they were displayed.

I will only highlight a few characters as I have not experienced with all of them yet. (I might edit this after I explored their path and ending)

Started off with the MC, who had traumatic past and trying to get over it by moving to a new city. He is overall a nice guy, good sense of humour, goofy sometimes, and always trying his best for everyone around him (besides in bed of course).

Zenda, the first girl I went for on my first playthrough. She is a girl every guy could dreams of. You would think a girl like her would look down on you and brag about her daddy's wealth. But no, despite being from wealthy family, she never once act spoiled, entitled, bitchy, or bossy. She would spoil YOU instead during your dates with her, bringing you to expensive restaurants, buying you designer clothes and tailored suits, hell she even would fly you out on private jet! It could not get any better than that. Even when the MC in deep trouble, she would still help in every way she can instead of leaving him hanging. And lastly, the ending with her was just dream-like. Travelling around the world, getting married, her parents approved of you, and expecting a child on the way. (and still being rich)

Valeria, she is a definition of don't judge a book by it's cover. Even my first impression of her was a turndown with her offering a free sex. But after replaying the game and exploring her path, I was wrong. She has some of the saddest backstory I have ever heard. The loss of her daughter at such a very young age and the aftermath of the tragedy, trying to relate to MC tragic past witnessing a murder of his father's colleague and his father barely survived. It nearly brought me down to tears. The closing chapter with her was a roller coaster of emotions. With him still being a witness protection, the MC cannot remain in the city with Valeria, thus having to move out, leaving Valeria with a child expecting soon. Several months passed, the MC finally heard a news from Valeria that their child is born and she named her Shelby after MC old name. It wasn't until few years later that the MC finally heard a good news that he can finally reunite with his girlfriend and meet his daughter. And they soon got married after and finally lived happily as a family.

Sound Score and Music:

There wasn't much of a sound effect in it but the soundtracks and the songs in this are definitely nice. There's so many songs and soundtrack you hear that's didn't feel repetitive and boring and the songs and soundtracks they chose really suited vibe, ambiance, and the scenes they want to capture.

Graphics and display:

The graphics was simply top-notch. It was very detailed especially when up close and the backgrounds are not bad as well, the tone was set right, the lighting's great, and the romantic scenes are just nice.

Conclusion:

Overall, this is a great game I seriously would recommend. The multiple directions of the story to explore with varied endings to discover is really something to enjoy especially when the endings are done well and felt satisfying.

This is like the definition of a 4.5 out of 5 stars game. The LIs are all very well done with distinct personalities, the renders gradually become some of the best I've seen, and the sex scenes last much longer than usual. The harem route was a pleasant surprise in that the LIs actually interacted with each other and had solid relationships. Zenda and Val having solo paths make sense.

At the same time, there's plenty of issues with the story itself. The plot had potential, but felt more like an afterthought and offered nothing interesting in the end. The tragedy the MC experiences doesn't seem to have any effect beyond a few conversations, and the climax of the story is incredibly ridiculous and cringe. The writing ranges from sweet and funny to mediocre and lazy: in the harem route the characters probably say "I love you" to each other more than a hundred times. The relationships between the characters had an odd pace as well, going from friends to soul mates in the blink of an eye.

All in all though, it was a solid game with a good conclusion. It didn't overstay it's welcome so I liked the length as well, even if the pacing was odd.

This game has probably the best looking renders I have ever seen.

The story is ok but it gets rushed a bit towards the end.

Aside from the quality of the model what makes this game several steps above average is the music and the characters, they're all fleshed out, memorable and have their own personalities. The fact that you're not supposed to romance everyone at the same time makes sense exactly because of that.

Play it.

TLDR: Interesting narrative, great renders, memorable characters, and a fresh look into harem/polycule dynamics, hindered by a few pacing issues in the later chapters.

I primarily play harem games and I really wish more games venture into the relationship dynamics portrayed in this game.

Most harems have the MC juggle solo scenes between his love interests and the occasional FFM+ scenes, but most LIs in other games don't do much more than take turns with the MC.

The MASH ending, while not for everyone, is honestly enough for me to give it 5 stars.

All these women are part of the relationship with the MC AND each other. They don't stop existing when the MC is not around, and will fool around with the other LIs in the relationship. It's refreshing and makes the characters feel more alive, and I hope more harem games do this.

Maybe some might not like that dynamic because they don't like sharing, but how is four women making out with each other in front of you not a massive turn on? Now if there was another dude in the relationship, i'd understand not wanting to share.

Obviously, it depends on the LIs and how they're written and their narrative sexuality, but I definitely think more games should venture into this space.

The solo endings are good as well, but any of the endings that aren't exclusively solo are a treat because of the points said above.

My main criticism of this game would be the pacing. It definitely doesn't drag on like other games that just have lots of monologues, but there are times things move too fast. Hopefully the dev's future game improves on this front, keeping scenes memorable, preserving the passage of time for realism, but not cutting interesting plot points short.

Also, Heidi as a character is amazing. Both in looks and personality, she's practically the glue that keeps any of the relationships involving her stuck together, beyond just the MC's massive dong.

The last two chapters is probably the best ending ever, other developers take note! This VN has some great love interest and great lewd scenes. The romance is top tier too, the negative is probably that the plot is weak and very uninteresting. Just stayed for the girls. Val and Heidi is wifey

This game's worth the 5 stars. Genuinely the hottest and prettiest girls I've ever seen in an AVN. The variety of scenes were great and the number of routes and ending were awesome. 10/10 would reccomend.

This has to be the best AVN I've ever played. I've played every route multiple times and I'm gonna play it again after I finish writing this review. The story is solid and consistent, with dialog that makes sense grammatically. The renders are top quality, girls are hot, and there's plenty of banging to do. The music is nice, but songs with lyrics can be a bit distracting. Not enough of a problem to lose a star.

Some of the LIs are solo only, but it makes sense with their character and I really appreciate that.
Heidi and Athena being a package deal makes sense, and Mora being open to experimenting with the group works based on her previous relationship experience. Adding Sadie is fine because she doesn't care about who you're with, she just wants to be with you. Zenda and Val being solo only is a great move IMO, it makes a statement about the type of person they are and adds depth to the game. Not everything can be a giant orgy fuckfest.

5/5 would give it a 6 if I could

Graphics are very good, girls are beautiful, the multiple choices are good but sometimes you have to save beforce choosing, I could go in the wrong direction which you were not attending to. I played though it ones but after it I dont wont to go back to and play it again. Story is OK, But after one playthrough I deleted it. 4 of 5 stars

I was about to complain bout MC being a major pussy, awkward dialogue and abundance of small talk, but these are nothing in comparison to this games nebulous choice system. It seems fine until the end, but then you realize that paths aren't flexible. So I was openly in a relationship with Heidi, Athena and Sadie and because I didn't have some variable from several hours of reading ago checked, the game thinks that I'm on a Sadie solo path and SIMPLY FORGETS about Heidi's and Athena's entire existence. I kid you not, I literally went on romantic dates with both of them at the end of fourth chapter while mutually confessing our feelings for one another and then as soon as the fifth chapter begins - it's like they were never there, literally vanished. Oh and remember that It says on the front page that you can only have four women at the same time? Well you don't get to pick. Those are 4 very specific ones and you get their ending if the stars align and you pick every correct choice along the way, otherwise at some point Thanos might just flip his fingers and erase some of them from the spacetime.

Otherwise the game is fine. Sex scenes range from alright to well-done. Soundtrack is serviceable, even tho I mostly played muted. Girls are good, but the story is short so there isn't much development. I'd probably rate 4/5 if I actually got to pick myself who to stay with.

Very good VN
With great visuals and good soundtrack and great story
I liked MC and i found most of LIs beautiful and interesting characters with well written personal stories and unique characteristics.
Personally at first i liked Heidi,
but Later i really loved Sadie and i couldn't choose any other ending without Sadie in it.
So run the Throuple ending (MC/Heide/Sadie) first and later their 2 solo endings.
Finally i also played the Harem ending with Sadie/Heide/Mora/Athena)

I found the Sadie solo ending better than the Heide ending , and Throuple ending was very good too
Basically between those 4 endings i would choose
1)Sadie ending (the most romantic ending in my opinion)

2)Throuple ending (the only reason put this 2nd above harem ending is that i like less people in a relationship)
The only thing i didn't like in the throuple was that in my opinion the first time/night of Sadie should have been like the night of her solo ending ...in my opinion MC should had said that he wanted a 1vs1 night with sadie for her first time
(or sadie said it) basically like what Athena said to Heide, that she wanted her first time with mc to be without Heide
and then in the future they could have another night with threesome with Heide because even on the harem path Sadie first night was only with MC......
moreover Heide was all over Sadie that night lmao she probably kissed Sadie much more times than MC did it was litle annoying to me.
So if Sadie first time was alone with MC it would have been a perfect throuple ending for me.

3)Harem ending aka Heide wet dream.... also its not the usual harem.. its more of poly/open relationship of 5 people than a traditional harem and personally i would have find it better if for example Mora and Sadie remained strictly heterosexual and just shared the MC but that's my personal preference...

4)Heide ending it wasn't bad ending but after i saw the mother of Heide i understand how Heide became like this lmao

On the other hand
Athena was very well created LI although i didn't like her style (too many tattoos and piercings for my taste) but she was great girl overall.
But also the movie night with Athena and Heide pissed me off... i canceled my date with Zenda and they left me watching a movie so they can have fun.. and also left the door open on purpose so i can see them srsly im not a voyeur not i liked to play their games so i choose to go in my room even if i lost points doing so.
But the annoying thing is if
Mora was a cute redhead next girl door LI and she also was dnd player which is plus for me and if there was a Mora/Sadie Throuple ending i would have played it.
Zenda wasnt of my taste so i didnt play her story.

Finaly personally i would have liked to see more throuples and i would love to see some of them not to have lesbian content content and just share the MC for example Mora/Sadie Throuple ending in which they both share MC but stay heterosexual it could have been possible and nice additional ending

On the other hand one more possible Throuple would have been Athena/Sadie/MC ending and i feel that Athena had better chemistry with Saddie and MC than Heide had and she also have a incest fetish lmao so maybe it would have been a better throuple ending..

Finally i cant believe that there wasn't a Saddie/Heide/Athena ending but was a Mora/Heide/Athena ending.

In conclude it was a very enjoyable VN and i highly recommended it

First and foremost this game was not my cup of tea so there's that, None of the girls really interested me, I rejected the "lesbians" and everyone who was straight up "hello lets go and fuck", I rejected the girl who was playing games wanting to be chased while she entertained other dudes on our "date", the few others weren't visually appealing, not that the other LI's was either really so I ended up pursuing none .

Besides this letdown I did not really like the dialogues nor the story even tough the story itself was decent for this type of game I guess,
i simply felt no interest in it after most girls just spewed sexual innuendos or wanted to bang straight away so it all felt rather forced and lacked imagination.

The animations however was pretty good overall (I skipped past story on replay to see afew)

All in all it gets a 3/5 and concidering that the quality of LI and dialogue/story is what matters most for me that's a pretty generous rating.

This is one of the best VNs I've ever played.
The women are good looking, with different backgrounds and personalities.
The graphics are great, as are the animations. The sex scenes are varied, which is also appreciated. The music is also very nice.
The icing on the cake is the variety of possible endings (11 in total!).

The only quibble is the lack of sound effects.

Anyway, highly recommended!

Genuinely one of the best VNs around at the moment. There are probably only 2 or 3 I'd consider to be better.

The characters all felt real. I've only done one playthrough but I decided on the "MASH" ending (Mora, Athena, Sadie, Heidi) as it had the most characters to interact with.

• Heidi is just completely adorable from the start.
• Athena has this hard exterior at the start but softens until she's just as cute as Heidi. She's also quite shy which you wouldn't think by looking at her, which is a nice subversion of expectations.
• Mora felt extremely real with very real problems that have to be dealt with.
• Heidi started in a very interesting place. She's not in the best of shape and that's not something you typically see from a love interest.

The only downside I really have is how willing Mora and Sadie are willing to jump into a relationship with Athena and Heidi. The latter two are already established to be into women, while Mora and Sadie are not. Mora basically jumps right in despite being shy, and Sadie doesn't hesitate at all. There are some time jumps in the story so perhaps this could explain any missing elements but it would have been nice to see.

The models, renders, and animations are all superb. Again, some of the best I've ever seen.

There are 11 endings in the game so there's a lot of replayability.