HTML Beautyism [v0.1.1] [Jayce420]

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Beautyism is a game about a chubby girl that has struggled her whole life due to her looks and personality, you'll be in control of her personna and face the challenges and also the changes that happend to her and realize that Beautyism bias (Lookism) is the real deal.​

Thread Updated: 2023-12-24
Release Date: 2023-12-23
Developer: Jayce420

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Version: 0.1.1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[Sonu The Pilot]

Jayce420 Congratulations for your new release.
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[Lerd0]

Beautyism

..had no clue what that was.....now i do...

....thx for the share...good luck....

 

[sorrkia]

Hmm...... I wonder who would wanna roleplay as a f***** f** f***

 

[rKnight]

Beautyism is a game about a chubby girl that has struggled her whole life due to her looks,

Fatty: "Everytime I'm jogging, I heard people CLAPPING at me...
...but it was just my BUTT CHEEKS cheering me on." lol


THX for sharing...

 

[PeanutbutterJoe]

Beautism

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against a beautiful person often claimed by a physically

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to cover up for their

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.

Taken from Urban dictionary.

I don't fucking get it, so basically a hot chick is blaming another hot chick for being hot. What? Because being beautiful is the same as being physically attractive, what is this modern fucking nonsense again? And why is someone making a porn game with a fat landwhale? Is there even a target audience for this?

 

[heatmaster28]

Beautism
Taken from Urban dictionary.

I don't fucking get it, so basically a hot chick is blaming another hot chick for being hot. What? Because being beautiful is the same as being physically attractive, what is this modern fucking nonsense again? And why is someone making a porn game with a fat landwhale? Is there even a target audience for this?

I think it's more like an attractive person blames others when they come up short. e.g. "Don't hate me 'cus I'm beautiful" or "They're just jealous that they're ugly and I'm not". Or something like that

 

[Jayce420]

Beautism
Taken from Urban dictionary.

I don't fucking get it, so basically a hot chick is blaming another hot chick for being hot. What? Because being beautiful is the same as being physically attractive, what is this modern fucking nonsense again? And why is someone making a porn game with a fat landwhale? Is there even a target audience for this?

No you won't play as a landwhale, that's not the point of this game. Play the game and you'll know what you'll play as.
I didn't want to spoil much in the introduction so people can find out themselvs.

V 0.02 update is expected to be tomorrow with more in story depth and how this will go

Thanks for the comments

 

[EvolutionKills]

Beautism
Taken from Urban dictionary.

I don't fucking get it, so basically a hot chick is blaming another hot chick for being hot. What? Because being beautiful is the same as being physically attractive, what is this modern fucking nonsense again? And why is someone making a porn game with a fat landwhale? Is there even a target audience for this?

I think you're reading that definition wrong. It reads as a beautiful person deflecting criticism by claiming it's just envy from less beautiful people.

How this relates to a chubby protagonist, I have no idea.

EDIT: On another note, I can tell from the screenshots alone that I'm not going to enjoy this. Between a seemingly horrible sad-sack protagonist, and writing so bad it would make the Engrish on a bootleg t-shirt blush? Yeah, not sure who this if for exactly.

EDIT 2: Yep, just as bad as I thought. Images are all over the place, from postage stamp sized to filling almost the whole screen. Formatting is almost non-existent. All of the writing is awful, even by the generously low standards here. Directional options lead to dead-ends, requiring you to use the Back button to pick a different option to make progress. Ignoring the porn, this writing would be sub-par for a middle school English assignment. The 'game' can be completed in about all of 5 minutes. The only positive thing going for it is that it is so bad, it is certainly the work of a human and not shat out by an algorithm, so it has that going for it at least.

Also, it's missing a 'RAPE' tag, seeing as how the 2 unskippable sex scenes (out of the 3 total) are non-consensual. Add the 'TRANSFORMATION' tag as well, as going to sleep chubby and waking up magically as a hotty (so 'hot' your brother immediately rushes into the bathroom, doesn't recognize you and proceeds to rape you) counts as 'A sequence showing a physical, biological change of some kind'.

 

[Trasher2018]

Ok. There is no build up.

"This is bully A" and to avoid other bullies she sucks his cock.
"This is bully B" a bitch that was just there ... I guess?
"This is my brother"
Some dead links with empty pages (why are they there?)
She wakes up with a new face .. I guess. Its just 1 image.
The brother sees a naked girl in their bathroom and rapes her ... sure.
Then school with some text and a choice to


This is not even a demo ... and not a 0.1 ... maybe a 0.001 alpha?

My old twine test has more content than this release .. maybe I should bother and translate it at some point....

The dialog. Why white text on blue background?

Use the possibilities. Give characters their own colors to make it easy to understand who is talking.

This is a screen of my twine test ... not that complicated to do stuff.




But here we get this?



btw. that is all the reaction we get from the MC about her changed body, because she has a meeting with a teacher .. yeah that is way more important than the changed body or the raping by her own brother.

Other ppl react more to her change than she does ...


This is not enough to really get a glimpse of it. There is some "free roam" planned I guess, because of the dead links in her home ... so ... yeah.

The rest is kinetic with 1 choice to have sex with the bully or not ... thats it.


This is nothing really ... just a few images (~1.2 MB) and not really that much text.



Suggestions:

Remove the uncensored incest if you want to keep your Patreon active ...

With so few images - at least give the player some content to start before try to get money from them. And write stuff and not throw some lines at the screen and a link to the next passage.

Make a version that gives us some insight into the MC, flash out the main antagonists and the ppl around the MC. So we get at least 30 min of playtime and not 5min at best. Make the sudden body change matter and let the MC deal with that ... and give us the option to call the police after we spit a death threat into the face of the brother after the random rape.


I often get bashed for "dumping" on devs for their games, but I am just honest and I tried twine myself - I know that it is a lot of work. But as soon as ppl dont just release it here and already have a patreon, they have to live with criticism, because the try to make money out of their project. And here there are no real redeeming qualities, primarily because there is not much to see in the first place. Its the basic twine design with a few images and a bit of text.

 

[Jayce420]

I think you're reading that definition wrong. It reads as a beautiful person deflecting criticism by claiming it's just envy from less beautiful people.

How this relates to a chubby protagonist, I have no idea.

EDIT: On another note, I can tell from the screenshots alone that I'm not going to enjoy this. Between a seemingly horrible sad-sack protagonist, and writing so bad it would make the Engrish on a bootleg t-shirt blush? Yeah, not sure who this if for exactly.

EDIT 2: Yep, just as bad as I thought. Images are all over the place, from postage stamp sized to filling almost the whole screen. Formatting is almost non-existent. All of the writing is awful, even by the generously low standards here. Directional options lead to dead-ends, requiring you to use the Back button to pick a different option to make progress. Ignoring the porn, this writing would be sub-par for a middle school English assignment. The 'game' can be completed in about all of 5 minutes. The only positive thing going for it is that it is so bad, it is certainly the work of a human and not shat out by an algorithm, so it has that going for it at least.

Also, it's missing a 'RAPE' tag, seeing as how the 2 unskippable sex scenes (out of the 3 total) are non-consensual.

Thanks for the criticism when I made this game 1 week ago and posted it here as a request I noticed the grammar mistakes and the dead ends and it is all fixed in this next update
With better writing hopefully
English isn't really my first language but I'm getting by but yeah I filled most of the empty story lanes and non-sense texts

About the Dead ends, it is meant to be added in the future updates like the parents room etc, but I should have added a return button.

Always appreciate it I will take it to try to improve on those points, also for people confusing, Beautyism is one thing, Beautyism Bias is another thing

 

[Jayce420]

Ok. There is no build up.

"This is bully A" and to avoid other bullies she sucks his cock.
"This is bully B" a bitch that was just there ... I guess?
"This is my brother"
Some dead links with empty pages (why are they there?)
She wakes up with a new face .. I guess. Its just 1 image.
The brother sees a naked girl in their bathroom and rapes her ... sure.
Then school with some text and a choice to


This is not even a demo ... and not a 0.1 ... maybe a 0.001 alpha?

My old twine test has more content than this release .. maybe I should bother and translate it at some point....

The dialog. Why white text on blue background?

Use the possibilities. Give characters their own colors to make it easy to understand who is talking.

This is a screen of my twine test ... not that complicated to do stuff.


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But here we get this?

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btw. that is all the reaction we get from the MC about her changed body, because she has a meeting with a teacher .. yeah that is way more important than the changed body or the raping by her own brother.

Other ppl react more to her change than she does ...


This is not enough to really get a glimpse of it. There is some "free roam" planned I guess, because of the dead links in her home ... so ... yeah.

The rest is kinetic with 1 choice to have sex with the bully or not ... thats it.


This is nothing really ... just a few images (~1.2 MB) and not really that much text.



Suggestions:

Remove the uncensored incest if you want to keep your Patreon active ...

With so few images - at least give the player some content to start before try to get money from them. And write stuff and not throw some lines at the screen and a link to the next passage.

Make a version that gives us some insight into the MC, flash out the main antagonists and the ppl around the MC. So we get at least 30 min of playtime and not 5min at best. Make the sudden body change matter and let the MC deal with that ... and give us the option to call the police after we spit a death threat into the face of the brother after the random rape.


I often get bashed for "dumping" on devs for their games, but I am just honest and I tried twine myself - I know that it is a lot of work. But as soon as ppl dont just release it here and already have a patreon, they have to live with criticism, because the try to make money out of their project. And here there are no real redeeming qualities, primarily because there is not much to see in the first place. Its the basic twine design with a few images and a bit of text.

I won't bash you LOL I made this way too early to get crticism to try to improve the points thats missing, thanks for this I will read it and see what I can do, and this is 0.01 so yeah I guess you can say beta

I have a lot of ideas to do to build up the story hopefully it will come with next update

 

[Deleted member 6820464]

Thank god this is a text based game...

I wish i wasn't that lazy...

 

[telotelo]

No you won't play as a landwhale, that's not the point of this game.

There are lot of angles you could take to make this worth a while, and memorable
instead of going with classic tf shovelware
for example:
- mcc's con-fused (comic series) exactly tell this kind of story
three off-bmi females get perceived by other on their 'beauties' through help of mind-control
- pudgy females also had a niche in real porn (cody vore, alex chance, etc)
men are simple creature, given adequate erotic context landwhale might have its own appeal

And here there are no real redeeming qualities, primarily because there is not much to see in the first place. Its the basic twine design with a few images and a bit of text.

it's expected from everyday release for html at this point
sometimes i think these devs are secretly closet maso
spewing bare v0.0.01 with standard red flags on the top of patreon link
on pirate forum of all places

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best of luck

 

[Snoopy_H]

too short of a demo to say anything about this yet

 

[Aerisetta]

no fat shaming

 

[AnHorse]

Beautism
Taken from Urban dictionary.

I don't fucking get it, so basically a hot chick is blaming another hot chick for being hot. What? Because being beautiful is the same as being physically attractive, what is this modern fucking nonsense again? And why is someone making a porn game with a fat landwhale? Is there even a target audience for this?

They're pretty clearly 'taking inspiration' from the korean webcomic lookism which is about a fat guy who becomes muscled (way too quickly because the author of that fucking sucks), wouldn't read much more into it than being a loose copy of that premise.

 

[ustar]

No you won't play as a landwhale, that's not the point of this game. Play the game and you'll know what you'll play as.
I didn't want to spoil much in the introduction so people can find out themselvs.

V 0.02 update is expected to be tomorrow with more in story depth and how this will go

Thanks for the comments

Funny I already knew what the game is about just by reading a title before I played it.
Add a female protagonist tag.

 

[testyv1]

No you won't play as a landwhale, that's not the point of this game. Play the game and you'll know what you'll play as.
I didn't want to spoil much in the introduction so people can find out themselvs.

V 0.02 update is expected to be tomorrow with more in story depth and how this will go

Thanks for the comments

Yeah um no thanks, not playing a game who's lead in promo pic is a fugly tub of lard. Try again.

 

[GamerDaddy]

No you won't play as a landwhale, that's not the point of this game. Play the game and you'll know what you'll play as.
I didn't want to spoil much in the introduction so people can find out themselvs.

V 0.02 update is expected to be tomorrow with more in story depth and how this will go

Thanks for the comments

ill keep watch on this one and come back after a couple updates (i'm one of those people who itinually trys to get bugs to come out to play lol)