VN Ren'Py Because I Love Her [Ep.1 P1] [The Typist]

[TheTypist]

are there any scenes beside the gym scene?

Yes! There is a scene with your roommate (No Spoilers here) and a dream sequence, unlocked depending on your choices. If you dont have enough lust with characters, these scenes wont unlock. But, no worry. The future holds much more romance for those who dont choose the lust/hardcore path

 

[TheTypist]

Review Version: V1.0 DEMO

art 7/10: Not a bad start and I actually like it. It's a standard static background with moving character & it works, but since the dev choose this kind of style it need a lot more facial expressions than other formats, the truth or dare game was a lot better that the gym scene that seemed a little static. We already seen the characters in several games, but they are hot so, who F. cares?:closedtongue: Another thing that i think it miss is a little animation, even the 2/3 images sequence, that the static background kind of VN desperately asks for it.
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story 7/10: it is suppose to be a 6/10 kind of story you rich, move to new city, new friends yada yada yada, we already read it 100000000000000 times but a +1 cause the swinging ntr sharing environment (plus i had a boner so i know it's working). But I have some complaining to make both story and writing wise. First, the thinking stuff, i never know who is thinking till i read what it sais.
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Second I think is a lot better to know the personality of a character through scenes not from a narrator and such View attachment 137156
Third and last but not least, and this one is purely personal, it's kind of weird to start "swing" at 23, it feels kind of unnatural, if it was something between 28 to 33 will be more plausable. if i think about them so young i see this in my mindokerFace:
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Sound 0/10: Just farts, but that's probably me or the doggo
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Overall 7/10: Nice start, it's a little short for a demo but, it's not the usual "one dick to rule them all" kinda of game :eazyHype: and it can go into depth, from your personal harem to your personal nightmare & anything in between. Good luck and good work to the dev. I definitely want to see more of it & hope to see it soon.


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Hey! Thanks for taking the time to check it out. I really appreciate the feedback, as i'm in such an early stage it helps me so much in terms of where the game may go.

To be completely honest, I'd love to add animations and such, but am limited by my ability to code (Its very amateur ability) and anyone willing to guide me in the right directions will see the game take on many of what their heart desires.

As far as the Females go, you're right for the most part. TBH I changed the bodies a lot and skin tones slightly, and will be working on Jenni's skin tone as i'm not 100% satisfied with it just yet. Honestly I went through so many variations, but realized once you put any hair on the character that's been used before, it pretty much becomes that character lol.

And believe me, this demo is meant to showcase my ability to write the script and create semi decent renders! I plan to have some serious character development, but how much depends on how often people want updates I guess!

 

[ThorMcBalbo]

And believe me, this demo is meant to showcase my ability to write the script and create semi decent renders! I plan to have some serious character development, but how much depends on how often people want updates I guess!

baby steps... swinging, ntr , corruption games takes more time to get a big audience the first few months are the hardest especially if is not the usual incest one dick to rule them all kind of game. Stay strong and make your vision come true, people will appreciate it

 

[goatwhisperer3]

love in a porn game? that's blasphemy! #teamlust #trainyourslaves^^

renders look nice, maybe kinda too clean of a cut every now and then, like the character is not in the scene but infront of a greenscreen. Could be a lightning thing, iv'e no idea of such things.

will pass because of the controversial tag but wish u best of luck.


ps. you may consider to let the player choose his own name. it's 2018

( ' -')

 

[yvb]

Yes! There is a scene with your roommate (No Spoilers here) and a dream sequence, unlocked depending on your choices. If you dont have enough lust with characters, these scenes wont unlock. But, no worry. The future holds much more romance for those who dont choose the lust/hardcore path

I wonder how to reach the dream sequence? Cannot find it somehow.

 

[TheTypist]

I wonder how to reach the dream sequence? Cannot find it somehow.

basically anything you wouldnt normally say to your girlfriend, choose that option lol. also, if you make bad choices at the gym you'll more than likely unlock it, that's an important scene as its the most lewd

 

[yvb]

Found it. The game has great potential and is on my watch list already

 

[mo4444]

Looks to be very promising, would support on Patreon.

 

[baka]

usually people dont like the ntr when its cheating involved, why not hotwifing? could be dominant or submissive wife.
this way, the MC is in charge. a submissive wife where MC "bit by bit" is corrupting the "mind" of the wife, by insinuating it, could be while having sex, dirty talk, dare play, dominance etc.
im quite bored of the ntr where either MC or wife is cheating behind the other back. i think the relationship, the persuasion, the dreams and fantasies, the dirty talk, could be quite interesting and hot if done right. love could still be there, where each time they do something dirty, could make them closer together. (i read an interview of a couple going to swingers club where they could get a bit jealous, but they also get closer together)

 

[TheTypist]

usually people dont like the ntr when its cheating involved, why not hotwifing? could be dominant or submissive wife.
this way, the MC is in charge. a submissive wife where MC "bit by bit" is corrupting the "mind" of the wife, by insinuating it, could be while having sex, dirty talk, dare play, dominance etc.
im quite bored of the ntr where either MC or wife is cheating behind the other back. i think the relationship, the persuasion, the dreams and fantasies, the dirty talk, could be quite interesting and hot if done right. love could still be there, where each time they do something dirty, could make them closer together. (i read an interview of a couple going to swingers club where they could get a bit jealous, but they also get closer together)

I think you will enjoy where I will take this game

 

[blahblah25]

The NTR is optional folks!

The NTR in itself is totally optional just to get that out of the way. And depending on what everyone wants and how I feel, It can go any of those routes since the game is in its early stage, the more replies i get, the better off i'll be for future development!

SOMEONE ADD THESE TO THE OP or something because you know there are going to be people asking we need a clearer NTR tag for this site instead of guessing or assuming which it is lol btw ty to both of you for pointing this out

 

[ThunderRob]

well i'll be..a game where the GF is actually the hottest one of the bunch and ya just dont wanna look at others..thats so..different than most games..HA!

 

[jsbb9999]

so i take it most of the tags are planned but not yet implemented? just trying to gouge the amount of content before jumping in

 

[TheTypist]

so i take it most of the tags are planned but not yet implemented? just trying to gouge the amount of content before jumping in

Yes but optional NTR, oral, forced, teasing, and corruption can all be viewed in the demo, It's a small game to test out, and any feedback is SUPER appreciated for the future of my game

 

[Stonebridge]

looks good, very nice girls.

 

[Zontany]

I don't like NTR, but I like the screenshots. Hopefully its easy to pick up.

 

[evilgrim]

Has the making's of being a good game , looking forward to more

 

[lordukk]

@TheTypist
Please consider adding walkthroughs in the future
(it'll save you from having to reply to so many comments asking "How to get this scene..." etc)

 

[Cervantes123]

Anyone knows if swinging or sharing is optional like ntr ?

 

[Papy.ion6984]

Nice beginning ! A great job !
I will follow it.
TY for the upload !