VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Becoming Aria [v2.0] [Ariana]

The story is pretty bad
The renders are pretty bad
The TF/TG elements are pretty bad
The writing is pretty bad
Overall pretty bad
And I honestly don't see this "game" improving unless it's completely redone both on the side of story and renders.

A completely disjointed mess. The dialogue alone in the beginning is so all over the place that I had no idea what was going on. The "choices" you're making in the beginning don't make anything clear. Before I knew it, my hair was teased into an 80's disaster, I was dressed in an Alice in Wonderland costume, being courted by a guy who's hair clipped through his head. I sucked off his 16" inch, low resolution dick, he came in my mouth, and the game ended.

I want to die.

Great premise, but extremely poor implementation. Unless you feel like wasting your time, or need a good laugh, I would avoid it till the dev can fix the myriad of issues this game has. Speech and scenes do not match up at times, ending/game over scenes randomly pop up through storylines, moving walls (like 10 feet) between rendered scenes.. just to name a few issue.