Very high promise in the short description, trying to be the best novel. Quite some way to go. Don't get me wrong, from quality point of view a strong improvement to stories 2, which I stopped after 3 minutes, but it is still too much work in progress to be able to give more than 3 stars. Already in episode 1, the massage scene is missing, but it does go on with episode 2. Quality of drawings improved significantly towards stories 2, but also here the benchmark for being the best novel is significantly higher. For the creator. Go on with it, show us more, then the ratings will improve.
