Ren'Py - Beginners Guide to Hotwife Part1 [v0.3] [SideBurn]

v0.2

I usually start skipping when the writing is something like this (from the game):

Emma: Let´s have dinner, and then we can relax. Maybe we can watch a movie together.
William: Great idea. It would be nice to spend the evening together.
Emma: I made your favorite dishes; I hope you´ll like them.
William: You always think of me. Thank you, that´s really nice.
Emma: Shall we sit down at the table?

This is like kids playing with dolls -quality of dialogue.
Visuals are 100% AI. Weird sandbox elements.

I have 3 main gripes and 2 minor complaints regarding this game:
1. Just as someone pointed out already, the fact that you have to pay for a basic skip function in a Renpy game is outrageous.
2. The most mind-boggling thing about this game is the gallery. The gallery is supposed to be a repository for pictures regarding the MCs or plot related side characters. But for this game is just a collection of random porn/suggestive photos sourced from the internet.
3. The plot's moving too fast for a pilot episode. Specifically, the transformation of the female MC is done rather hastily and haphazardly. There're tons of missed opportunities here. For example, you can sketch out the process of transformation, like how other men look at/flirt with her in the gym or at work during the transformation (maybe the gym is where her first bull comes into play), how does the husband react to this change and the impact on their marital dynamics, how does the attention received from the other sex pre vs post transformation affect her mentally and psychologically. All these events can not only sow the seeds of corruption for future scenarios; but they can also complete and "enrich" the story, IMHO.
4. A minor complaint is that using meme transitions breaks the immersion. They are just out of place in this game. Is the tone of the game serious or funny???
5. Another minor one is the visual defects of the female Mc. Her eyes are of different colours during the sex scene and at certain scenes, she looks like a cardboard cutout.
The artwork and premise of the game have potential; but until the dev fixes the aforementioned issues, this game leaves quite a lot to be desired.