It's got some good bones and the overall story is interesting enough, but the interactions with the LIs is just cringy. The MC can't really say the wrong thing and it's doesn't take much to get the women to drop trow and I am not much of a fan of that.
Then there were some awkward moments like when he was about to grope someone who was sleeping and if you decide not to have him do anything, he thinks "It was a missed opportunity. All he had to do was push a little harder" or something along those lines. So basically, you don't grope a sleeping chick and he thinks he fucked up. Erm... okay...
Early on, the MC tells himself he is not sure who he can trust and then later, when he gets to the bar, the bartender is a little too attentive and I'm like dude, don't trust this chick, instead he fucks her in the back room. He was supposed to be gathering intel or whatever and instead he is dipping his wick into some unknown bartender.
There is nothing wrong with any of this, but it doesn't really fit with the story.
Having said that, it was enjoyabe enough for me to want to see where it goes so, despite the fact I am not a fan of the MC, I do want to see what happens.
Then there were some awkward moments like when he was about to grope someone who was sleeping and if you decide not to have him do anything, he thinks "It was a missed opportunity. All he had to do was push a little harder" or something along those lines. So basically, you don't grope a sleeping chick and he thinks he fucked up. Erm... okay...
Early on, the MC tells himself he is not sure who he can trust and then later, when he gets to the bar, the bartender is a little too attentive and I'm like dude, don't trust this chick, instead he fucks her in the back room. He was supposed to be gathering intel or whatever and instead he is dipping his wick into some unknown bartender.
There is nothing wrong with any of this, but it doesn't really fit with the story.
Having said that, it was enjoyabe enough for me to want to see where it goes so, despite the fact I am not a fan of the MC, I do want to see what happens.