Ren'Py - Abandoned - Best Summer Ever [v0.1 Demo] [Lewd Mind Games]

Well, I can understand the below ratings. Let's be clear, the story indeed isn't the most original one, yes the LI have kind of predictable characters, and yes there are problems (coding, unexistant labels, undefined variables, unexistent images and so on...) all over the place, yet....

I feel there is a real involvment of the Dev, all this appear like some youth problem. Of course would this have been like the 5th of 6th release, I would have totally rated it 1 star but here are my thoughts and suggestions.

The models are gorgeous, I really like them, can't get enough of such cuties.
The characters are kind of archetypes, but let's be honest, from time to time a straightforward game is worth a quick play (with time eventually a good fap). The dev may be a bit naive with the narration and he could for sure use some help in grammar and spelling check, as well as wide code review prior a release, but I think this needs encouragement. I believe this game has potential, maybe rework the navigation system, the game mechanism so you throw something a bit original, but I really encourage the dev here, I would really like to see a real 0.1 or a 0.2, should you need a hand with code review or grammar don't hesistate to ask around, or even DM me.

Keep up the efforts, I really believe this game just needs bit of time and polish.

I always try to be fair without being mean. but this just filled me with so much angst.

Generic bullshit. boy with 2 sisters and a mom with no dad. younger sister is cute kind and naive. older sister is a bitch, and moms just mom and predictable.

I can look past the spelling and grammar errors.

however the completely unoriginal uninspired theme and progression knocks this down to 1 star because I've already played this game dozens of times.


super pet peeve .. "put in name or keep default Andrew" I put in my name.. first line "Hi my name is Andrew" *face palm*.

Didn't even get to the first sex scene. It is that bad.

I don't usually mind engrish or a little grind, but the writing here is like it's a chore for the dev. They're not even trying at sensuality. It almost seems like a satire, not of porn games, but of bad porn games.

0.1
Well, this is not a 1 star its more like a 0. First of all there are insane amount of bugs that wont let you progress in severeal parts.

Second: the "lewd" scenes are literally 1 render, or 2, and 1 or 2 pretty basic sentences.

Third: There are some situations where there an still image that is not related to the thing going on, like in the couch watching tv "She sleeps on you, and she wakes up", both with a single render that it was being used for the previous situation.

Fourth: there are images that are not related at all, like entering alana room and she is playin guitarr, but images show a night assault scene.

Overall a disaster, a long way to go before reaching a passable quality. This is not ready for release.