VN - Ren'Py - Better Future [v0.1.6] [Mr. MiBo]

Good art style and a good amount of content, considering this is the v0.1.5 version. The dialogue could use some polish. It's good that the developer is active here. The current plot is enough to get you wanting more, and there is still room for improvement in gameplay, which depends on the developer's ideas. Overall, it's a decent game if the tags are your style. Don't hesitate to try it. It would be a 5 if the grammar of the dialogue were better.

Decent render, not great but not bad. The story don't know much... what I know is that this is not a game.
as Cambridge dictionary define the word game "an entertaining activity or sport, especially one played by children, or the equipment needed for such an activity"
This is not entertaining or engaging... is just a story that is told with not intervention for the player. USELESS

Not a bad first step.

Pros:
- Models are ok with the renders being of good quality.
- MC is not some weak minded little f**k
- The story over all has some depth to it

Detractors / Opinions
- I feel the story had to much going on for the first chapter to get invested in the MC or the LI.
- Some of the people introduced had little to no back story
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Not a terrible first release. Decent length to the game play. I didn't hate it, but I am also having a hard time really liking it. I wish we had an intro to Lynn and Evelynn, they seem like they're going to be part of the story or at least significant to the MC, but I have no idea why.

Some of the early ground work for Mia could have been handled better, it is all kind of vague and comes across half hearted.

Dialog wasn't too bad, but could definitely use some polish.

Going to keep an eye on this one, GL with future releases.