Well just finished the release. Below are my pros and cons and some feedback.
Pros:
- Well written story with thought out dialog ( just some warning, explaining what is already in the image a bit much )
- Each person so far has there own little style and persona and that is always a positive
- The MC so far does not seem to be a pushover or weakling
Cons:
- Although I named the MC something different the teacher would switch back to Michael all the time
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- Little short for a first release but the file size is already 1.3 gigs