Figured it would be a nice habit to leave a review after playing through a VN I like. I played through it rather quickly though, I'll update my review at a later point in time, when I'll take more time for it (and w/o ipatch).
[version, env] 0.2.1 / PC/Win/mouse/ipatch
[play time] ~ 4.5h (estimate, fast playthrough w/ some skipping)
TL;DR: this game/VN provides a highly polished package, good stuff & recommended! Don't expect a lot of H-scenes, it's more of a slow burn with most characters (but not all ;-)), but there's some good stuff in there already (really nothing to complain about).
Story
Entertaining enough, but not going to rate this, as I played fast / skipped bits here & there. I did slow down on occasion, and enjoyed it / the interactions between characters.
Some dialogue I found hard to follow, seemed to make some jumps, but that could've been related to me playing with the (unofficial) ic patch (which is doing an okay job, but I wouldn't recommend it per se - still some things feel off, esp. with 'mom')
Characters 4/5
They're pretty much all sexy & likable. Reviewer below me commented how they're visually similar. I can see that, but I really didn't notice that much while playing / it didn't bother me, still felt different/unique enough.
I do find that, at the end of v0.2, there are a bit much girls already; when Mia entered the scene I felt a bit like 'really don't need another one'.
I dread a bit there will too much LIs to (properly) cater for? Like there are the main girls, and there's e.g. Larissa which I'd totally dig to pursue ;-)
Graphics, animations 5/5
Good stuff, nice renders, smooth animations, bouncy boobs.
Played on potato; still somewhat decent in performance, but it did totally choke on the checking-out-Anya panning scene (meeting her).
The Lilith hallway walk anim was totally cool and surprised me (felt like total quality; things like this sets this apart and above the gross of VNs).
The drive in the car with Jane was also nicely done, giving that extra polish.
Music, sound, voice acting 4/5
The whole package: bgm throughout, sfx during (H) scenes. No voice acting. A certain later scene has moaning sounds as well (awesome), whereas these are missing in earlier scenes.
Other, extras
The polish here is A-grade. Kudos to the dev! Things like the characters 3D view, setting your phone's background, how the gallery's done, the extra settings like text size etc.
Ideas/suggestions for improvement
[QoL] Make the (mouse wheel) scrolling through the list of characters faster. And/or remember your last scrolling position. Or, perhaps as an (optional) alternative, have a single screen (w/o scrolling) where you can quickly find & check on a character.
[fix] Make 'Clickable Hints' the default (shouldn't it be?) It's explained in the tutorial, but then, running with default settings, you'll only hear the sound, but there's no visual queue. (And in the game itself I believe the sound is only there when Clickable Hints are enabled?)
[wish/nice2have] Moaning sounds added to earlier scenes (Naomi).
[wishful thinking] Able to decide to have Raven or Venus on your side (I was more into Raven, and was like fuuuccck ;-)) (The bar lady is nice as well of course ;-))