VN - Ren'Py - Between Worlds [v0.1.9 PI BETA] [RolePlayer]

The story is interesting
The characters and LI are fantastically rendered.
The situations so far are hot enough
And the option between NTR and Non-NTR are well established for all tastes, an excellent game so far, can't wait to play what's next

Overall this effort only gets 3 stars from me primarily due to horrid English. Very difficult to feel the immersion in a good story when verb tense errors and other very basic grammar mistakes plague almost every page.
On the up side, the story shows some promise. The artwork is nice, and the women are very nice looking.
Without some serious proof reading help, this one is a pass for me.

A really underrated gem. The game has many options on how you want to play and no scene is forced. The renders and the sex scenes are really good and hot. Dialogue is good and smooth and the erotic writing is on point. Shame this game does not much attention.

v0.1.5 Part I


Visuals:

The visuals in this are really nice. The dev does a great job with posing, lighting, and overall scene direction. The female models are gorgeous, especially Freya and Eve. They don't look like models I've seen before, which is a plus. There are only a few animations at this point, but they're decent.


Writing/Story:

I really think this has a lot of potential. I'm very interested in learning more about how Freya came to this world. My only real complaint... and some people may like this about the game... is the "over-narration" and MC internal thoughts. I really think these are overdone. I'd like the narration to be replaced with more visuals where it makes sense to do so. I feel internal monologues should be cut short or non-existent, to allow the player to sort of think about the situation themselves. But apart from that, it all seems to have good direction and when things get a little too verbose for me, I simply skim through it while tapping the CTRL key.


Sex Scenes:

We're still early in, so not a whole bunch of sex scenes yet, but those that are there are erotic, sexy, and fun. There's build up for various scenarios that we can look forward to as the game develops further.


Playability:

It's a visual novel and pretty straightforward. You will come across points where you have an option menu and you choose the response that fits what you want. There is no lag and it's been quite bug free. I'd like a little more variation in the choices and how they affect the story (but maybe it's just too early for me to be able to tell at this point).

Overall, fun, sexy game with a decent enough story. It has plenty of room to grow and the dev seems dedicated to the project. I give it about a 4/5.

Very good begining (looking forward to more). Renders are really good, interesting story. I also enjoy the optional sharing of the girls. It definitely deserves more attention. With more support, this game will be a blast.

So far so good! The writing here is better than most, even with some very minor translation issues. (Slight grammatical errors)
The story is immediately accessible and quite entertaining so far. Only a small bit of lewd at this point, but it's all contextual to the storyline, and even a little wholesome. The visuals are pretty decent as well. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this VN.

The nice graphics made me play and the slow burn made me stay, really good writing the relationship between the protagonist has a real feeling of progress and you feel immersed in thir world congrats to the dev, the future is bright ✨️.

As someone who cares a lot about characters looks in every game, I would say that this has an excellent, decent story, but the characters are good. The swinging content might be good for someone who enjoys them, but overall I would rate it a 9 out of 10.

Between Worlds has the potential to be a fairly decent game that captivates an audience, but the current dialog is horrendous. I drifted to sleep and deleted the game during the game introduction. To mitigate the abuse to your eyes, you'll find yourself hopelessly smashing the enter key seeking fap material.

Very good quality renders, nice time period and outfits but I'm not sold by the story and dialogue or the inclusion or orcs/non-humans.

The dialogue is extra hard to follow, different font size,to much inner monologue, characters having separate conversations at the same time and imperfect translation add up to an unreadable mess. Hopefully that can all be improved on

There's no content as such in the 0.1, but that's fair, the developer is looking for input. It's worth checking out anyway, the render quality could be good enough to convince you to check back to see if there's improvement in future updates