V. update 3 (as game is a year old on this site, it is either an update every 6 months if update 1 was first release or 4 months. not promising judging time but has a decent amount of content to compensate)
i have to point out right from the start, incest tag but no incest content? this site used to lie less.
art is the high point, which for a 5 person developer team is pretty crap to be honest (check my writing comments) but visually this will do enough. animations and adult scenes are a little poor, as an angle to stare at the top of someone's head is not exactly erotic, even a fly-on-the-wall angle from far away is more intimate and shows more action, but it has one out of three i like, even so the art for the plot and main story is more than good enough and is the real lifting power. it is at least consistent in it's standards, unlike....
Writing. holy fucking sheep. bland is one word (run-of-the-mill, dull, mediocre are also apt) but how the fuck can you release an update without checking it first?
clearly you join a group, spend hours of your time building a game, rendering, coding, writing and then every single one of you fail, yes fail to even check what it is you are releasing. standards again.
dialogue half on and half off screen, misspelling, missing letters....this stuff is rudimentary, more so if you are trying to get the public to fund you.
it shows utter contempt. i even hit an unforced exception mid dialogue that was not during a choice, but as i had elected to download the compressed version, benefit of the doubt. ask someone capable to proof read it first.
it leaves a sloppy impression.
as i stated, the plot is bland in delivery and so far the whole thing has relied very heavily on a wife allowing her husband a hall pass. great to grab fappers but for a visual novel it ignore the N and punts for sex as the entire hook.
if the world, or even this site, lacked variety then fair enough. but...
it sits itself very heavily into that average bracket for me. there is some semblance that the plot will start doing something beyond the mundane but it should have been doing that from the start. a book becoming interesting half way through is unlikely to have many readers reach it.