VN - Ren'Py - Beyond Time [v0.2.1] [Mr.Cass]

The story is interesting. It has a few flaws, but they are overlooked. Render quality is okay. There are no problems with eye-sore renders. The animations are good. The girls are interesting and realistic. I'm sure it would be nice if the dialogues were just a bit more developed. A game that should be given a chance. The future is bright.

This one's a mixed bag. It has potential, but the story and character interactions are questionable at best. Might adjust review if this improves.

Good stuff
1) Some of the women are visually attractive.
2) Watch storyline and MC upgrading seems interesting so far.

Meh stuff
1) Lewds scenes. Average quality and they seem to be following the cliche HJ, BJ, TJ, vag, anal progression.

Bad stuff
1) MC. Dudes dumb, looks like a dork and acts unnatural af. Kinda reminds me of the MC in that three letter "basketball" VN. Manipulative douche that goes full preachy white knight simp when interacting with woman. I'll protect you!! Please let me work at your coffee shop for free!!
2) RO interactions. They talk robotic af and most of em involve MC trying to save them or acting like some sort of dollar store therapist. Interactions ain't natural at all and I highly doubt most woman would be attracted to a dude that acts the way MC does.
3) Art. There's some flickering, lighting and color issues.

So far the game seems to be good but some of the graphics are just not good at all.

1. Most of them look to be either washed out or way too dark, the lighting needs some work.
2. Some of the character models look really good, like the man in the opening, the women and the MC's father, but the MC's model just doesn't look. At times it looks like a wax figure and doesn't match the other models.
3. There are some minor grammer issues but so much that it takes away from the story.
4. I do like that it has music but at times it does seem like the music matches to mood of the scene(s).

To me the graphics should be improved since it is one of the important aspects of a Visual Novel. I'll keep an eye on this game to see if there is any improvements.

Beyond Time [v0.1] [Mr.Cass]

This is a very good game. Not an original plot, but good nonetheless.
The story is about time multiplication and possible corruption.
The writing is good. Choices matter. There is actually a dad who is alive. But, for how long?
The images are good, a bit fuzzy, but that's what the dev is going for.
The women are pretty original-looking and hot, also.
The animations are very good.
A very small number of grammar issues,
Plays fine. It's Ren'Py. Save/load works. Music is compatible with the game.
There is a decent amount of content for a v0.1
Soapbox:
When you go to the GUI, an animation of the game's name pops up at the bottom of the screen. This can be kind of annoying if you use the save/load function a lot.
I recommend this game highly. And wish the dev much success.