VN - Ren'Py - Blacked House [v0.3 P.Ed] [Mandy ☆]

This VN is a steaming pile of crap, that deserves no attention from anyone. I usually write lengthy reviews, trying to clearly explain my points and present them in an 'easy to digest' way to inform anyone who bothers reading them, but I won't do so here-- I will just present a few facts about this game and let people come to their own conclusions:

1) Some of the scenes (the ones that are actual sex scenes lol) are locked behind a paywall. The game literally presents you with an option to "get premium" as a dialogue choice in order for you to watch the sex scenes.

2) The writing is terrible. It feels like it was written by a teenager who never had sex in their life. It takes a popular and somewhat hot fetish and dumbs it down to the most cliché, brainded version that it could be. It claims to have "incest", but if you set up the relationship as such, by writting you know what when the choices are given, most of the dialogue makes no sense.

3) The models look off and unappealing. I mean... Just look at the breasts on the "mom"/landlady... They look like overstuffed plastic bags. Whoever modeled those has probably never seen breasts that aren't fake.

4) The story absolutely sucks ass. The pacing, even more so, is bellow amateur level. It's not even baby's first story, it's worse than erotic fanfiction posted on obsucre forums. There's no teasing, no development, no structure for a real story. You get sex from the get go (you just don't see it all, unless you open up your wallet, that is), and, Instead of exploring the supposed interracial/blacked fetish, as one would expect from the title, it develops a super weird narrative told through the view of what I can only assume is a braindead 'youngster', who in less than 10 lines of text goes from "I hate my bully!" to "I wanna see my mom/landlady getting railed by BBC!", it all makes no sense.

As someone who loves all forms of NTR, and can see the appeal of Interracial and Raceplay NTR, this game is nothing but a pile of shit, and a terrible waste of time.

Just one thing needed to explain why there's a 1 star rating:

PREMIUM CONTENT LOCK

no chance to see any really important content without passing a paywall.

Is is worth to subscribe?
Imho NO. The animations are simple roll images, the story is blunt, and the overall quality is at most "meh".
Seems like an effort to make fast money with low quality and paywall. I guess this "game" gets what it deserves -> low star rating

Call it morbid curiosity but I just had to see for myself if the review score was fair and accurate. It's actually worse than I could have imagined.

THE STORY
The LACK of story to be accurate, you are rushed into the title. Introduction to your character is basically you perving on your mom (landlady) in the shower while you masturbate.

You go outside, some stereotypical bad writing happens, you get punched in the face and your sister flashes her tits at the guy who just cleaned your clock.

You then go inside your sister gives you a hug to make you feel better and you promptly grab and squeeze her ass while she is consoling the MC. Classy.

Graphics
The best part of this title is the graphics. They are not great, look very 2017ish and feel dated. The lighting is good on some and very poor on others.

The above would normally garner this game a 2 star rating from me as technically everything works with no crashes. However let me tell you about the final boss!

PAYWALL
So you say I don't care about the lack of story or the dated graphics I just want to Fap! Not so fast!.. You see the final boss is the PAYWALL, yes after the first couple of poor scenes you get into some action and your choices boil down to leave... or SIGN UP FOR PREMIUM and it takes you to the devs Patreon, so you can pay for the privilege of seeing the hardcore content.

Don't waste your time on this life is to short.

Happy to see the pushback from the community when it's warranted!

Firstly YES the pacing in this game is terrible you go from your Landlady finding out you like her to Immediately getting Cucked in the same update there's no suspense or sexual interaction at all!

Secondly the dialogue is completely Braindead one of the worst i've ever played!

Thirdly for some reason from the last update to this update you've cut the MC's dick size in half (probable to fit a cuck narrative cause god forbid you have a regular dick it always has to be tiny) you couldn't even go back and fix it!

Lastly the paywall is insane $9:50 for both scene this update on a game that's only 3 month+ old, Naw bro there's games that have been developed for years by a team of people with renders a million times better than this game that don't put up that type of paywall with that asking price!

The only good thing about this game is the renders for Jennifer and Audrey i love Thick Woman but other than that this game sucks!

This game can be described in one single word: grotesque.

All the plot, the very random and unmotivated sexual interaction, the overall gameplay is simply: grotesque!!!

Art is really low-average, gameplay is inexistant, just random sex scenes (very poorly represented in terms of length, set up, execution, aftermath).

Incredible there is even a paywall... really?!?!

Anyway, surely there is some audience for this game but overall is objectively a very poor quality game

The scene that anyone in this game would be interested is behind a paywall , overall not bad renders and dialog but no build up in the story at all , fast to ntr scenes without any progress to that . Garbage if it wasn't behind that paywall would be rating 3/5 but since it is the 1 star is more than this game can earn...

Story is dull you know exactly whats going to happen as its a basic NTR story MC a weakling with no brains and all there isnt any corruption all the girls are easy they just start out that way. So their "friend" is being bullied they all jump on his bullies "sausage" instantly with zero care there aint no resistance just straight to it that aint corruption they just terrible people and just straight up hoes absolutely 0 brains to these characters and with the crap the bully does to the MC the MC just has to get the police the stuff he gets away with is just stupid.

It is... fine. I like the concept of the game, but the description is straight up wrong. No one is getting slowly corrupted. The seemingly start out very corrupt.

I think it would work better if the mom was like an only fans model and you convince her to bring in a guy (hoping it would be you) just to have her bring in some other guy.

Also, needs more sister content, she is the cutest model.

One of the worst NTR games that I have played. The story makes no sense! No build up to the NTR, just straight to getting banged. It feels like a horny teenage person has made the dialogues in this game.

As of v0.2 , a lot of the other reviews are dogging on this game but I feel like your enjoyment of this game will really depend on what you're into.

The most decisive part about this Kinetic novel is that every LI (except the sister?) is already a slut from the start. I'm personally mixed on this. On one hand this is a breath of fresh air for an NTR game and that we won't have to wait years and years for the lewdness to get anywhere. On the other hand, I'm not sure where the Li's and their corruption will develop from here. If mom was a former pornstar who is already sucking and fucking BBC within the first 2 updates, how much more depraved and lewd can this game get?

That being said, this game's writing isn't anything crazy to begin with. It's almost written like those typical BNWO captions you would find on reddit and the story/scenarios really reflect that. However, there's some sexily written stuff in this game and the dirty talk is hot IMO which is enough for me with a game like this.

As for visuals/lewd stuff; the milfs look sexy and voluptuous, and the sister looks decent too even if she isn't my favorite. The sex scenes are hot as well even if they aren't "properly" animated.

All in all, if you're into "Blacked"/family NTR, and don't mind immediate progression, give this game a shot; you'll probably be able to get off. My review is pretty leniant for this game because I don't mind kinetic novels and its pretty rare to get these Blacked family NTR games so my standards are not sky high.

I’m a fan of NTR, NTS, and stuff like that, but...
Story: 2/10 - The story’s got no spark, no pull, nothing to keep you interested. It’s as flat as it gets, no excitement, no curiosity—just blah.
Logic: 3/10 - The game’s logic? A total mess. Like, the sis character is getting handsy by your dick, but she’s so distracted by her phone she doesn’t even realize that is your dick !. Or the mom? She jumps straight into NTS mode out of nowhere. Stuff like this? Yeah, never gonna happen IRL. The logic is straight-up broken.
Renders: 5/10 - Eh, they’re fine. Not great, not bad—just sitting there in the middle.
Character Behavior: 2/10 - Sis is the only one with any appeal. The rest? Shallow and boring. No depth, no complexity. They’re like cardboard cutouts, way too eager to hook up with anyone at the drop of a hat.
Writing: 2/10 - Super basic. No spicy teasing, no excitement, no tension—just dull, plain writing that does nothing to elevate the game.

I really liked the demo. Mom is a very thicc milf, sister not the hottest though. Not much to do in the demo pretty bare bones at the moment.... but hopefully something interactive next update.
Good luck to the devs.

Best case scenario is a 2 star, maybe it would be worth 1 star directly (0.1 version). Thing is, the plot is aweful, it goes beyond porn logic directly into illogical. Everything is normal until a day randomly your sister starts masturbating you for no reason... and that's just the first scene. Characters are uninteresting and predictable to a point that it just takes away any leftover interest you could have. Bully comes about, and just gets to kick you until your "flatmate" shows her titties. If he's the bully, why the hell did the MC even go near him if he knows he'll beat him? And so on. Gameplay is non existant so far, with no choices to be made and just the show of a generic sandbox at the end.

Render quality isn't bad, not particularly great either. Animations present are pretty basic. Sound is quite annoying. At least there are no bugs, but there is also very little content in this version.

So, all in all, I'd skip this game with its blatant and unneeded racism, the uninteresting characters and uninspired everything.

Okay, the character of MC is very good
The fact that the mc isn't a loser/obnoxious/donkey/stupid is a strong point for this game. also, he isn't a alpha(biring)
The rendering, writing, sound, atmosphere, story, tension, and personality(mc,sis,etc) are all good

I just hope this porn star isn't MC's mom because we'll miss out on the corruption process and its excitement

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In the second update, the MC turned into a complete loser, and the mom and aunt's characters became full-fledged sluts. When the LI is a slut from the very beginning of the game, NTR loses its meaning

For now you play as a horny soy boy that loves black dicks in a linear VN but transitions to a sandbox game at the end. So far this game would deserve a rating of 1-Star.

But hear me out dev:
Instead of making the MC a cuck, let us witness a "rags to riches" story, whilst the player becomes a Chad sex machine so that the mother (and sister) renounce other dicks bit by bit.
Cancel the point and click sandbox and focus on few but meaningful choices.
Don't overstay your welcome by introducing more and more love interests but rather tell a short to medium length personal story about the family members and hot situations.

Just my two cents but I think this way you would have an original game and your own niche in an otherwise overused story and in an oversaturated genre.

Review for v0.1 [initial release]

TLDR: Currently barebones, like most v0.1s. The bones it does have seem very good, though. What you call the landlady is changeable. Good animation, great renders, little to no grammatical errors, and best of all: It has custom, non-default text boxes, AKA the single biggest indicator of whether a Ren'py dev cares about their game. Blatantly racist premise.

Story
Pretty obvious; you play as a white guy who will very soon see his..."landlady" and "roommate" have sex with black guys. Currently contains the mom fucking some guy, the mom in the shower, and the sister flashing some guy.

Originality
Ever been on r/bangmybully? It's like that, if the posters put in actual effort.

Renders
Great quality! Better than average, and above par for typical Ren'py games.

Sound
I dunno. I turn off music and voice volume off before playing, and sound volume is set to 30%. I do not recall hearing audio from the game, but I could be wrong.

Playability
No issues.

Performance
No issues.

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Final thoughts

Amount of content: As of v0.1, minimal. I went from New Game to "That's it for this version" within ten minutes.

Mechanical design: Surprisingly great. Everything works well. This version has an empty sandbox at the end of the content which shows what will likely be the main loop of the gameplay. It's reminiscent of Power Vacuum or Big Brother in design, which I consider to be a good thing.

Personal opinion: +5 stars for design, renders, UI design, and future potential.

-1 star for blatantly racist premise. Sorry, not sorry. There's interracial as a fetish, and then there's "immigrants are coming into town in droves and they're all black and they will live in your house for free against your will and we are now non-racist and black people are stronger and fuck better and..."
This is the second one.

I will still play future releases, because I'm both interested in the premise, and I am a hypocrite. But I would much rather see a game that didn't include racist ideas that cause real-life harm.

Also, if the dev is reading this, you should switch to SubscribeStar or some other alternative funding platform now, before you grow a following on Patre0n. Big P will take this game down sooner or later, as they do with all games that include content like this, so you're only shooting yourself in the foot by risking future paychecks.