VN Ren'Py Blairewood [Prologue A v0.1] [BlackFeather]

[Deadpool DP]

Thank you so much for checking it out, and thank you all for these comments. I love to see these speculations, and yeah, I understand the dissatisfaction with the lack of content and confusion. Well, everything will be explained eventually, hopefully before 2049 or, well, 2099.

 

[hectdar]

great game, good job

 

[Calz]

Honestly an enjoyable game, It can be a little confusing trying to figure out the relationships between the characters like who's related to who but it's not that hard to follow and the models are fantastic. It gives me Summer's Gone vibes and could be really good if there was a little more content to explain and introduce the characters and story properly.

If the updates are going to be short I'll probably come back when there's a decent amount of content available but i wish you the best of luck dev, If you polish and fine tune a couple of things here and there you could definitely have something special on your hands here.

 

[Rake Tyler]

Will this game finally get past the prologue this time? Place your bets, because this isn't the first time I've seen a prologue version of this game.

 

[Deadpool DP]

Will this game finally get past the prologue this time? Place your bets, because this isn't the first time I've seen a prologue version of this game.

if I win you donate your bet to f95zone, I wanna see a donor tag on you after that.

 

[Jin-Woo']

hmm...Looks promising..But will check it out after at least 5 updates or so(hope this gets at least 2 updates,oh well)...keep up the good work DEV

 

[FalconLover420]

Beautiful Render but the way you are thrown to the story is like expecting a first time driver to beat an F1 racer utter chaos.

Also was the MC's defensiveness for Cassie all for not as she got a daughter named Xandra?

 

[MiltonPowers]

Beautiful Render but the way you are thrown to the story is like expecting a first time driver to beat an F1 racer utter chaos.

Also was the MC's defensiveness for Cassie all for not as she got a daughter named Xandra?

Xandra is her horse.

 

[Irad]

This is incoherent nonsense, and the MC(?) is written to be a mouth-breathing half-wit. If deliberate, It's uninteresting, and if not, it's just sad.

The entire flashback sequence was pointless and shoulda been nixed. Most of the chatter with chick 1 and 2 and Ben-something was introduced far too early. The entire interaction with the pig and his piglet was idiotic. And then the little shit-stain won't even file a complaint for excessive force? Pathetic.

The pics are nice enough, might be enough to carry the rest, dunno.

 

[Mellt]

This is incoherent nonsense, and the MC(?) is written to be a mouth-breathing half-wit. If deliberate, It's uninteresting, and if not, it's just sad.

The entire flashback sequence was pointless and shoulda been nixed. Most of the chatter with chick 1 and 2 and Ben-something was introduced far too early. The entire interaction with the pig and his piglet was idiotic. And then the little shit-stain won't even file a complaint for excessive force? Pathetic.

The pics are nice enough, might be enough to carry the rest, dunno.

Yeah i understand what you mean but sadly your criticism isn´t realy helping. You are just spitting hate into this game.
But whatever everyone for himself i guess.

For a starting point it is realy good. I don´t get the relationship between these guys. Landis said the mc wants to bang his Cassie but then Claire ask the mc if he realy said it and then how he could said this.
That doesn´t make sence. Landis said it not the mc. And are all these guys orphans or blodd related? Background info would be nice to get the setting between the LI, Diego and MC.
I guess that MC was possesed and left the family. Diego is just a creep who loves his sis.
So all are Orphans and not related by blood but have feelings between them.
That feels for me like the setting but i guess we will find out.

 

[Tito98]

There is a game that have that same girl with the hat and have a robotic dog, trying to find that game name

 

[Meiri]

For a half prologue, this was really weird, I don't even know if there's a main protagonist here as it is constantly jumping introducing new characters, I am guessing it will be the missing brother, but we didn't get to see his POV yet...

I barely understood what was happening on screen and I feel I am still missing a lot of context in every conversation and sometimes I didn't fully understand the relationship between the characters showing on screen, I honestly would have waited for the second part to release it all since what we have right now leaves you with a lot of questions after finishing current content and I think it could be frustrating for someone playing it right now.

That being said I don't want to be too negative because I do think there's potential, I like the looks of everyone overall and If the complete prologue can make some sense and answer some questions while still keeping some mysteries it may make for a great story.

 

[Black Orchid]

how the dev feels after making 3 prologue reworks in 4 years and having people still fall for it:

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[Otyi]

There is a game that have that same girl with the hat and have a robotic dog, trying to find that game name

Probably Artemis?

 

[Marecotroll]

I'm starting to like it... confusing story with super confusing relationships... even more confusing family ties... and a 5-second prologue that teases everything and explains nothing, and it's probably going to be a boring story where nothing happens... as expected... well, I'll come back in 2098 to see that it was abandoned right in the 3rd or 4th chapter...

 

[Deadpool DP]

There is a game that have that same girl with the hat and have a robotic dog, trying to find that game name