VN - Ren'Py - Blessing of Goddess [v0.3] [xBive52]

I'm not a developer, a writer, artist, programmer or animator, but I understand the amount of work it must take to create these VN games...
...however, this is a clusterfuck. I played this version to it's sudden conclusion, thinking, 'I just wasted another hour of my existence here.'
The story and character interactions are so bad, the protagonist goes around wearing denim shorts that are so thin at the crotch, they literally part her labia like a G-string. The story is nonsensical, a demon fuses with the protagonist, creating some symbiotic relationship...nonsense along those lines. The protagonist gains a magical penis, that isn't always there...I was lost, confused and glad it was over.
I wish the developer good fortune moving forward...hopefully it will flourish into something beautiful.

Version Reviewed: 0.3

Overall impression: It has potential, but dev has a lot of work to do.

• The models seen so far (mother, 2 daughters and 2 others) are nice.
• What animation there is needs work, but that should come with practice.
• Story is rather thin, even for a 3rd release. There's a short explaination why the MC's situation, but zero beyond that.
• The game could use a native English speaker to polish the text. I'd volunteer, since it seems pretty straightforward.
• I hope the dev has the plot fully fleshed out, at least in their mind. I don't want to get 8-10 updates in and find it Abandoned because it's going nowhere. Like I said above, it's got potential.

First of all: only play this if you are a fellow lover of futa protagonist.

Important:
the current v0.3 does not include the previous story; you have to download v0.2 seperately.

There is a lot I like about this, but it's mostly personal preference:
-Futa on female (hell yeah)
-Huge dick MC (the futa) and from a previous random render of the dev I'm also expecting stomach deformation once we get actual sex scenes
-Great renders
-Completely free game so far
-Purely kinetic, no branching confusion
-Story is good enough imo, since I don't need complex stories in my porn game

That being said here are the main problems:
-Dev's English is terrible. In the future someone with better English will have to rewrite everything.
-If you are looking for good animations, you won't find them here. Update 0.3 introduced the first futa x female scene and you can tell that the dev doesn't have experience with that.
-Updates are slow, but that is to be expected from a single dev free game hobby project

People who gave this game 5 stars are absolutely out of their minds. As a game -- it sucks, because there's no choices or gameplay. As a novel -- it sucks, because the story is terrible, the English is incomprehensable (and I'm not exaggerating, you can't understand half the sentences), even as fap material it's terrible (the models are attractive, but the posing sucks, the action is bad, and there's basically almost 0 content).

Edit: every single one of the 4 or 5 star reviews admit this game either has no content, or terrible story, or mind-numbingly bad English... I wasted time, bandwidth and disk space on this terrible game because people who admit this game has no content, story or bearable dialog decided to give it 4 or 5 stars, smh.

Short summary:


The story makes 0 sense. Actions or clothing of characters make even less sense. Surprisingly, some renders are actually pretty decent.
This is a completely free game though, which gets it an extra star



Good Things

• Models are hot
• Some hot renders

Bad points

• Pointless storyline
• Bad writing
• Clothing and actions are ridiculous
• Low effort game but its free

It is amateur game about futa with big dick, hot girls and goofy bros. It feels very much that dev is not native speaker, that it is his first game, and that he is cutting corners whenever possible. But models are hot, renders - good, scenes - funny. If you manage your expectations - game is enjoyable. There is not much regarding plot right now, and there is no choices, but I liked what I seen nevertheless.

If you like the premise, I think this is a game that show how much story/pacing really matters/makes things hot. The visuals aren't anything special and the designs aren't my favourite. I generally like larger breasted/more of a "babe" or "goddess" look in erotic games but you can tell this is actually written well. The translation isn't always the best or you can tell when it's off but the actual writing of the story/premise/character/scene pacing is what really carries this game.

Design/Visuals 6.5/10
Story/Pacing 9/10

Dont really get all the 5 star ratings as of now. Its just a click fest with nothing really to do. Not sure why its not labelled as a KN.
I like Futa protag games, but without any choices, it wont be good.

Have to wait and see how the story develops. Right now giving three stars is pretty generous. Will change my rating if i can finally have some choices and play the game on my terms rather than just clicking.

Futa MC is great and IMO there aren't enough games with them, MC also not having balls is a big+. Choice of cloths is very nice as it scratches the itch for Teasing. MC having a dick and others not being able to see it could be really fun so I really want to see where this goes.

For what the game is trying to do (I think) it's doing a great job. There's very little substance to the game, and the storyline appears to be comfortably ignorable. Basically, it's just a feast for the eyes with really nice character models, very inventive and interesting outfits, and an intriguingly, uh, RELAXED world, with regard to public outfits.

All in all, keep going dev, game looks great! If english isn't your first language and you're looking for some assistance with translating, feel free to shoot me a message, I wouldn't mind helping out a bit.