VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Blue Action [v0.1] [Lonely Wolf]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    hazzi

    the mc is one of the most unlikable characters i've seen yet. he is just poorly written and that's putting it nicely. its like he has ever had a conversation with another human before. and the english is awful. not the worst ive seen but bad.
  2. 1.00 star(s)

    BabooJ1

    Okay, I have to admit that this is dev first release of this game and honestly right not I don't feel the need to continue.

    MC is a jerk and not likeable at all and seriously the model used for him actually wants me to hate the MC instantly.

    Oh and that dialog 'Another day without being a unicorn.' I guess is referring to him NOT having morning wood but any normal man or teen would wake up with a hard on - it's natural to do so so there is something seriously wrong with the MC.

    Also talk about double standards - it is okay for MC to spy of female roommates but when it happens the other way MC blows a fuse and threatens to tell the older of the female roommates.

    Alice, the younger of the two female roommates, comes across as simple and immature and wants to make MC happy but for some odd reason MC hates her and just wants to cause her mental harm and this type of MC I hate the most.

    Sophia seems the most normal of the roommates and even her I think the Dev has made her have some dark path, maybe, she is a whore but not clear yet.

    Truthfully, the English in this AVN really could do with a proof reader and right now the storyline for this is sorely lacking, it might be worth waiting for dev to get a proof reader and a few updates later.

    Currently, I cannot recommend this AVN to anyone and the cast of the story needs some serious work to fix the above mentioned issues with them. I haven't even got to the end of of this release and I already want to stop and delete the game from my PC.
  3. 2.00 star(s)

    URMfollower22

    "Another day without being a unicorn."

    What... the... fuck...? Did I miss the "Must take LSD before playing this game" notice?
    That's an actual line in the game when the MC wakes up... btw...

    I get it. I'm French. Another language is hard... but based on the Engrish... I'm not sure if the above is a clever pun that'll be revealed later on... or if Google Translate glitched.

    In short: the models are good, dialogue, choices, all the rest, not so much. Again, another good pictures, bad story / mechanics game.

    If you're an English player, consider starting a business translating / editing porn games. That seems to be a huge chunk of what's killing the ratings of most games these days.

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