Ren'Py BlueHole Project [v0.3] [AhiAhi]

[DeUglyOne]

Trying to decipher the overview was bad enough, but the previews show some extreme lighting and distortions as well.

The last two previews look to have been rendered at 4:3 then stretched to 16:9. The next to the last makes her look as if she's transforming into the Queen Alien and the last makes it look as if she's entering a Black (Blue?) Hole.

Add to that the discussions on Itch and the huge file size with low content?
Uh... thanks, and good luck, but I'll pass.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[bamachine]

Please don't be blue waffle

 

[allanl9020142]

that's so boring in his life

Did you mean to say "bored"?

 

[FatGiant]

First impressions and short review.

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[Gizzy28]

how long is the game.

 

[Alex_Spenser]

Description is so weird, and the screens a bit too, but thanks for sharing!

 

[FatGiant]

how long is the game.

This has 2 answers.

It is TOO Long, because it is very bad.
It is TOO Short, because it doesn't have almost any content (the images are WAY too big).

Made a review above.

Peace

 

[Tyktamsyl]

The english is strong with this one (I like the visuals but you should get someone to rewrite sentences for you. I’d offer to do it myself because I want to see more and more game devs succeed, but I’ve never done that before and I definitely would not want to rewrite a script without knowing how good the actual content reads (whether it is boring or not)).

 

[nighthawk1275]

Not the best out there.

 

[Doctor Shark]

Is blue hole like blue balls for women?

 

[fthehero]

Glasses girl is the best

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

The game has potential. Thanks for the share.

 

[tanstaafl]

What the hell is with that overview? All that was missing was the uwu. And coherent English.

 

[FatGiant]

What the hell is with that overview? All that was missing was the uwu. And coherent English.

This comes from an author that adds emojis to the dialogue.

Peace

 

[|GHOST|69]

What the hell!?

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Don't tell me dev is a 13 year old kid!!
I mean man seriously? Did you seriously made an AVN?
Too much cringy dialogues design is ok tho....english is mediocre I mean ok I think?
Whatever I won't consider this game worth trying, I won't even bother to give a review, I'm out.

 

[|GHOST|69]

Gentlemen can any one of you tell me what hell is wrong with MC dick?

I changed my mind I will gonna write an honest review, people needs to know what kind of game is this.

 

[AllNatural939]

Be very careful with this guy. I made a negative review, telling the truth and this guy, well, actually the user Appa88 who must surely be the same guy, copied and pasted my text as a review of my game, giving me a bad rating in retaliation. Anyway, I just reported him.
Careful.

 

[Starkmk87]

What the hell!?

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Don't tell me dev is a 13 year old kid!!
I mean man seriously? Did you seriously made an AVN?
Too much cringy dialogues design is ok tho....english is mediocre I mean ok I think?
Whatever I won't consider this game worth trying, I won't even bother to give a review, I'm out.

You just did....

I'm rolling at everyone mocking op's grammar whilst not being any better themselves.

 

[Starkmk87]

Gentlemen can any one of you tell me what hell is wrong with MC dick?
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I changed my mind I will gonna write an honest review, people needs to know what kind of game is this.

I can't speak on what's wrong with it exactly, but the male character is the same one used in all these style of games. I never liked him and the more he's used the less I want to check it out, since it's the same generic formula used for the story.