Ren'Py - Abandoned - Blurred Lines [v0.3f] [Studio009]

Well-made art, good dialogue and story line, many branch way of story, potential game! I love it all.
Waiting for more update in the future

- Only down point now is not much H content for each brach of story.

I love these genres of games, both graphically and for the story, I hope the Dev continues like this, as well as the updates are frequent, the dialogues are well done, even the mystery of the facts are interesting, continue like this.

v0.3f

I love the art style of this.
The story is ok, not really too interested in the CIA crap.
The relationship development is cute. More on the horny side than the story side.

Gameplay is nonexistent. The little clicking there is seems to be unnecessary.

The one scene on the couch with wifey was a little odd looking art wise. Looked like totally different people, and not in a good way.

I liked it though. I'll check it out when it is finished, if the final has enough added to be worth of course.

4/5 for good art and characters
-1 for meh cia side plot and feeling light on other stuff

One of my favourite games on this platform. The art style and story are quite good and I feel kike this game has top tier potential. Updates also come out at a reasonable pace I feel. I hope the developer doesn't abandon it

Really great artwork. Attractive models.
Story is decent so far. Adulst scenes are really hot.
Not a big fan of sandbox games, so not happy about this new direction but i hope it will work out for this game.
So far its a really promising game. I'II be following this.

If you dont know how to make a sandbox game then for the love of God DONT MAKE ONE! Why switch it from the VN if you cant add nothing of value except infinite loops etc. Stick to the story ( which i see he already is starting to screw up characters arcs).The only positive in this game is the artwork,everything else is or is gonna fail really soon,if i were you i woldnt get invested in it.

The game had huge potential but with the introduction of sandbox elements it has become a complete mess.

It started very promising with a combination of family, corruption, cheating and NTR, but there is barely any build-up and many (lewd) events just seem to happen at random. With the introduction of sandbox you're just clicking through every location in order to find new events. And in the meantime I've already lost track of the central plot-line.

Hopefully the dev will get the gameplay back on track, because at this point the quality is heading south fast.

It's a good game but I don't get the point of the open world. It seems to pointless and brings nothing to the game except to make it tedious. There are so many areas yet only one or two of them are actually needed. You are just clicking everywhere and hope that you get to the right area. It serves no purpose to the game except to make the players annoyed.

I certainly think it's got great potential, and it's one of the few VNs I actually get interested in seeing get updated.

NTR is definitely encouraged, as if you don't accept it you get cut out from content, but at the moment it isn't particularly heinous. At your step-daughter's party, you HAVE to show interest in her friend, otherwise you WILL see NTR and be locked out. If you do show interest, your wife gets mad at you because you get a lap dance you can't opt out of. It feels kinda annoying, but again at the moment it isn't especially egregious.

Even if the characters are traced from real people, it still works for the game, and the traces are decently well-done. Also, you actually want to interact with the love interests, which I can't believe some VNs can't manage. Great work. Same with the sex scenes.

Blurred Lines [v0.3a]

Pros:
Character Models

Cons:
Story
Writing
Animations and Sex Scene are pretty dull
Art is a too inconsistent

Conclusion:
I wish I could give this game 3* atleast, but the only thing that I like in this game are the Models, who are modeled after pornstars, that I like.
The problem I see here is that the models depending on the scenes look way too inconsistent and sometimes look like totally different people.
The Sex Scenes are okay, but could use more variety and length.
In terms of 2dcg games, i´ve seen better scenes that are fapable.
Other than that, it feels pretty uninspired and doesn´t do anything significant, out of the premise that seems decent on paper.
The Story is pretty poor and uninteresting, just like the writing that needs lots of improvement.
There are lots of things that should be improved and reworked.
You need to introduce the characters better and give people a reason to care about them.
The Story and build-up needs to somewhat make sense, just like the writing.
I think it´s lazy writing to potrait the Husband as a "beta", like his 41 yo wife refers to him, which also doesn´t make much sense for her to use that word.
The same goes for the lack of a build-up, where the girls jump pretty instantly on the guys dick.
Without that, there´s also no corruption.
There are so many paths you could take, and reasons you could give, to make sense out of a story. But all of that is missing, for now.

Update v0.3d
I used saves and even started from scratch and still get the same end message that I have reached version 0.3c.
Other then that, I have to say that the Sandbox feels rather pointless and doesn't make much sense.
Going to work is pretty much the same, same with going to shower or kitchen.
Things could change in the future but the Sandbox needs to make sense and has to offer something to do, or else you just could leave it be a VN and cut the repetitive stuff out of the game.

(Version Reviewed: v0.2f)

I like art despite it being obviously modeled after porn stars. The animations are a loop of a certain movement, nothing too eye catching. The story is sorta boring. It is mostly about him going to work, one of his friends suspecting some case is not what it seems and the MC's household life where he wishes to corrupt his teenage step-daughter. I wish we explored more about MC's life as CIA Agent.

Overall- 5.5/10. It's not a bad way to pass your time and would help for a quick wank. But, that's about it. Don't expect an immersive story.

[0.2f] Really enjoyed the experience so far. Fantastic artwork that is original, appealing, and shows good angles and scenes. The women are attractive and the interactions show great signs of character development.
The visual novel gameplay is simple and makes sense.
Lots of great potential here!

Great art work.
Few bugs, but not really relevant.

Issue is: the story.
it is tedious, not erotic not exciting, it looks boring even fast scrolling.

But art is really great.

It cannot improve the story, but I hope the dev learn some lesson about plot/story and keep men engaged

Great artwork and story so far. Quality continues we have a good game that can be just like Good Girl Gone Bad and others. Seems somewhat linear though. However, can't judge that based off a .2F update as this is still introducing everything.

Still early but already has a few hot scenes.

This game's art and models are BEAUTIFUL(and all 2D hand drawn), and the story and the direction it's heading to is HOT. I hope it becomes a hit so the dev can keep developing it.

Just liked very much, characters looks promissing, a little pint of NTR for those who enjoy it, art looks nice.

I really hope we have a solid NTR route, with options to share the girls, since you have the likability for them for each male character, and their traits. And since the MC isn't a beta, it should fit this game an alpha sharing path, like whoring out your step-daughter and wife for your benefit, etc.

I'm really hopeful for this game to continue and be finished.

Promising, amazing art, love the 90's cartoon feel on music and presentation.

This is for sure original in many ways. Art work is gorgeous. Will be following this game till completion!

The gallery of cast is waste, dialogue is natural and feels tight. It does scream of having a female touch on the writing part and it helps a whole lot. This is for sure one of the highest potential adult games here, will be really interesting to see how the next 2-3 larger patches will influence the game.

Early rating: 5 out 5.

Very promising start so far. The artwork is fantastic, and the story seems to be very unique and not your overused cliche storylines. Very excited to see where it goes! And it seems like there will be many routes for everyone's taste, so that is great too!

Hey, hey, not bad! First of all, I really like the look of all the girls, even if they are obviously real images of porn-stars, with Tori obviously being Gina Valentina (which is not a bad thing), but the paths you're setting up are really cool.

Good:
Cool art, with plenty of hot women to go around.
Pretty interesting story.
Fun, and exciting sexually charged scenes.
Plenty of paths.

The bad:
The chapter, whichever path you take, just sort of unceremoniously ends without any indication. It just hard cuts back to the title screen.

The ugly:
Your dialog. I would recommend hiring an editor to help with your dialog writing, since it is pretty bad. I was really taken aback when the 41 year old woman, Liv, refers to her husband as a "beta". Unless that 41 year old spends her time on incel-forums, I was taken out of the experience when she talked like that.

Overall, though, good first outing. I am going to keep an eye on this game, for sure. Hopefully, start a patronage, soon.

i'll list a few things that kinda put me off:

dialogues feel like they were written by a highschooler going through puberty. please take no offense to this, but it could be way better with more developed, adutlike sentences that take themselves seriously. you should work on that

i don't like the unrealistic side of the game and how fast everything happens, especially the way tori straight up jumps on your d-ck the first chance she gets. in my opinion, the build-up is waay more important than simply achieving the reward without even doing anything. relationships between characters need solid progressions with certain amount of time to eventually blossom into something that actually matters

the game size is a little too much for 5 mins of total playtime. i'm no game developer by any means, but there should be a way around that surely

besides everything, i quite like the unique art style. it has potential for sure, in my humble opinion though it needs a ton of work. i'll be following this, cheers and good luck!