VN Ren'Py Blurring the Walls [v0.5.2] [Torimiata]

[Tecton]

I appreciate the concern! Honestly, I was more upset about the misinformation than the leak itself.

Leaks are part of this environment, but they do have a real impact. After leaks, there's a noticeable slowdown in new supporters, which is challenging for a small Patreon like mine. It's disheartening because if it continues, could even lead to considering closing the page.

I prefer not to dwell on these issues though - it's draining and takes time away from creating. My main worry is people forming opinions based on rough, early builds, which doesn't reflect the final quality!

That said, I'm still deeply thankful for all the support and feedback. It's great to see people enjoying the game, and I'm already focusing on making 0.4.1 even better.

The final scene is actually the one getting most of my attention, I felt it was not up to my standard. It's looking much better now imo, will be looking forward to feedback in the future.

I might consider having a skip button up until the end, for those that don't care for that type of thing, it's actually not a bad strategy if other things come into play in the future...

Other scenes will also get some small improvements, some misc CG to make it less stagnant and better writing in general.

Hey, if it helps, you're the first dev on this site whose game I played once then immediately went and supported their Patreon.

 

[Lolikanion]

Has the author stated whether or not this will stay Netorase, or will shift into Netorare, because I can't lie, the last time I played, I was getting major Netorare vibes when the girlfriend was talking about the size of the friends dick, lol. Like, I feel like it's going to be one of those things where she finally fucks him and get addicted to his dick like you see in so many porno's and it just fucks the relationship up.

(Just to clarify for mods, I'm not an anti-NTR troll, I like both Netorase and Netorare, and just want to know what I'm getting myself into before I get too deep, lol)

These are the tags in the itch.io page
Netorase (NTS)
Netorare (Not quite... but it's related to the genre)
Exhibitionism
Voyeurism
Femdom (gentle)
Teasing
Romance
Sensual
Threesomes?
Orgies?

Torimiata stated that there will be no cheating, it is a romantic story, but it will be in the fine line between ntr and nts.
But in the end it will stay true to netorase.

 

[covid69]

Is it possible for someone to create an android version for this game? Would be much appreciated.

 

[6ambino]

Has the author stated whether or not this will stay Netorase, or will shift into Netorare,

He has not, at most you can infer from the tags on itch that Netorase will be the main fetish, while Netorare will be far less, and it might be even questionable to consider it as Netorare.

I was getting major Netorare vibes when the girlfriend was talking about the size of the friends dick, lol. Like, I feel like it's going to be one of those things where she finally fucks him and get addicted to his dick like you see in so many porno's and it just fucks the relationship up.

To me, the ability of MC to bring LI to multiple orgasms means more than a dick size. If they both enjoy sharing, it would be hard to break that bond. The LI looks like experienced a fair share of dicks herself, yet she is still with the MC despite his inconspicuous little Joe.

Also, Terrace might have some issues which prevent him from forming a long-lasting relationship.

 

[Lolikanion]

To me, the ability of MC to bring LI to multiple orgasms means more than a dick size. If they both enjoy sharing, it would be hard to break that bond. The LI looks like experienced a fair share of dicks herself, yet she is still with the MC despite his inconspicuous little Joe.

Yeah, I really liked how the MC has quite a lot of action with Ayumi.
Mostly in NTS you see MC doing nothing and just watching.
Here MC can perfectly give Ayumi orgasms. With either his tongue or just talking to her dirty.

 

[thefee]

Liking the game so far. The ideas seem pretty fresh to me.

 

[Trickstar]

He has not, at most you can infer from the tags on itch that Netorase will be the main fetish, while Netorare will be far less, and it might be even questionable to consider it as Netorare.


To me, the ability of MC to bring LI to multiple orgasms means more than a dick size. If they both enjoy sharing, it would be hard to break that bond. The LI looks like experienced a fair share of dicks herself, yet she is still with the MC despite his inconspicuous little Joe.

Also, Terrace might have some issues which prevent him from forming a long-lasting relationship.

I thought I remember earlier in devolpment the dev directly saying that it will stay strickly netorase and will never be netorare or turn into it. I really hope he hasnt changed his mind.

 

[Vertius]

These are the tags in the itch.io page
Netorase (NTS)
Netorare (Not quite... but it's related to the genre)
Exhibitionism
Voyeurism
Femdom (gentle)
Teasing
Romance
Sensual
Threesomes?
Orgies?

Torimiata stated that there will be no cheating, it is a romantic story, but it will be in the fine line between ntr and nts.
But in the end it will stay true to netorase.

Ah, that's good to hear. Thanks for responding!

 

[Vertius]

To me, the ability of MC to bring LI to multiple orgasms means more than a dick size. If they both enjoy sharing, it would be hard to break that bond. The LI looks like experienced a fair share of dicks herself, yet she is still with the MC despite his inconspicuous little Joe.

Also, Terrace might have some issues which prevent him from forming a long-lasting relationship.

Both of these are great points. As another user said, usually in Netorare or even Netorase games, the MC doesn't really, or often can't make the girlfriend/wife orgasm, so it's nice that they have such a great sex life in this game. That should help it stay strong.

Thanks for replying!

 

[Zytoxx]

I appreciate the concern! Honestly, I was more upset about the misinformation than the leak itself.

Leaks are part of this environment, but they do have a real impact. After leaks, there's a noticeable slowdown in new supporters, which is challenging for a small Patreon like mine. It's disheartening because if it continues, could even lead to considering closing the page.

I prefer not to dwell on these issues though - it's draining and takes time away from creating. My main worry is people forming opinions based on rough, early builds, which doesn't reflect the final quality!

That said, I'm still deeply thankful for all the support and feedback. It's great to see people enjoying the game, and I'm already focusing on making 0.4.1 even better.

The final scene is actually the one getting most of my attention, I felt it was not up to my standard. It's looking much better now imo, will be looking forward to feedback in the future.

I might consider having a skip button up until the end, for those that don't care for that type of thing, it's actually not a bad strategy if other things come into play in the future...

Other scenes will also get some small improvements, some misc CG to make it less stagnant and better writing in general.

Well I'll definitely be subbing to you for a while later this month!
I know leaks onto F95 isn't ideal, but I'm glad I found it on F95 cuz it'd honestly be quite the challenge to find naturally
You may even be able to be able to get your VN on steam with all the new AI art regulations and adjustments they've recently added.
Considering your current pacing of content I'd trust you enough to buy it on early access steam, but that's just my two cents ^^

So I definitely hope to see where you'll take this VN, cuz I've honestly not seen this kinda netorase relationship dynamic before and I really like it

 

[JoleenStar]

Even tho this was AI the quality was top notch. Keep it up

 

[SirStarchild]

Is it possible for someone to create an android version for this game? Would be much appreciated.

Install Joiplay and the Ren'Py plugin. Works without issue.

 

[MysticZeus]

Was it necessary to turn Mc into a pet? And why he is so submissive? That was pretty disappointing

 

[Tecton]

Was it necessary to turn Mc into a pet? And why he is so submissive? That was pretty disappointing

It's not permanent. Just part of their play for that 'session'. Also, you can't really have a dominant MC in a Netorase story. Doesn't quite fit.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

It's not permanent. Just part of their play for that 'session'. Also, you can't really have a dominant MC in a Netorase story. Doesn't quite fit.

Don't agree at all. Perhaps this is just the specific "ntrs definition" and I'm speaking in more general terms of sharing-fetish-type stories, but in my mind it's plenty possible to have a dominant mc - one that pushes the LI towards liasons for his own enjoyment.

Now if we were talking about NTR stories, I'd agree 100%. It's impossible to have a dominant MC in an NTR story, because the story breaks down.

 

[Tecton]

Don't agree at all. Perhaps this is just the specific "ntrs definition" and I'm speaking in more general terms of sharing-fetish-type stories, but in my mind it's plenty possible to have a dominant mc - one that pushes the LI towards liasons for his own enjoyment.

Now if we were talking about NTR stories, I'd agree 100%. It's impossible to have a dominant MC in an NTR story, because the story breaks down.

That leans more towards 'hotwifing' than NTS, it feels like. That's where you could see a more dominant guy steering events and taking control more often.

But in a story like this, it makes more sense for both parties to be a bit shy about it, each one egging the other on to be more bold.

 

[Lolikanion]

Was it necessary to turn Mc into a pet? And why he is so submissive? That was pretty disappointing

MC turns submissive for one of theirs plays and you already have a problem with it.
In that case this game probably will not be for you.
Since MC will act sometimes dominant and sometimes submissive, because Ayumi likes that and he wants to make her happy.
If you have problem with just with one small sign of submission, then I dont know what will you do in further updates, since this game has gentle femdom.

 

[mok135]

Was it necessary to turn Mc into a pet? And why he is so submissive? That was pretty disappointing

This scene was improved in 0.4.1. Now it doesn't feel so one-sided. The mc somewhat takes back control of the situation.

 

[Lord Bradley]

I had to stop my gameplay short to write what I felt while it's still fresh. I barely started new update and this is probably nothing new, but I wanted to once again mention few things...

Writing is not only well done in terms of making sense, it is also done so using various fancy words, but not to a point of overcomplicated. It is easy to read yet feels like a nice restaurant meal as opposed to simple plate you assemble at home if that makes sense. And the details with hearts and other symbols and punctuations blend together so well I could not help and think to myself how much effort and care went into this detail and how many other devs would think it as extra chore and not do it.

And another thing is atmosphere, both how the scenes play out with the little tiny box appearing interactions and great sound design. I really recommend playin with sound on, it improves the experience a lot and I appreciate that it is another thing dev took care of.

So yeah basically I have barely touched new update and already I am overwhelmed with great feelings, I wish nothing but the best for this project! I would even dare to say, after trying few AI art games, this might be the top dog when it comes to AI games... Just my opinion tho, but do give it a try you won't be disappointed

 

[UndercoverPenguin]

Man, this became my favorite game on here.
Yes it's AI, but enjoy the character designs anyway. The moan sound effects sound a bit artificial, but they still add to the atmosphere.
It doesn't have any netorase sex yet or include any of my other core fetishes like internal view and pregnancy risk/impregnation (yet, a man can dream), but just something about it appeals to me so much.
The way the two MCs make a game out of seeing how far they can push each other's buttons, their genuine lovey-dovey relationship, the teasing, the way their voyeurism and exhibitionism feed into each other; it all comes together so well.
In the last year I burned through all the decent NTR and NTRS games on this site, but if I had to pick one that appealed to me the most it would be this one.